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Nina Eleanor Alter
231d349d19
Update how-to-update.md
Per Andrew's comment, made updates. I did not want to follow the styleguide 1:1, literally—as a user viewing mostly redundant text is more likely to visually recognize the redundancy and skip past it, without making the effort to see deviations.
2021-09-07 12:50:25 -07:00
Nina Eleanor Alter
fca16e7f7f
Update how-to-update.md
Per https://github.com/QubesOS/qubes-issues/issues/#6871 added a blurb in the CLI section, to advise users that 1. The terminal in the update-vm will in fact open, and 2. Where the logs will be saved to. My notation on two may be incorrect, so pls check?
2021-09-07 12:28:29 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
0257a3f44a
Update "Certified hardware"
- Add requirement that certified devices must be available for purchase
  with Qubes OS preinstalled. See: https://forum.qubes-os.org/t/5795/
- Improve wording
- Add link to HCL in intro
- Wrap text
2021-09-06 14:07:20 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
9437476c77
Rename file to match new contents
See previous commit message. File rename is in this separate commit to
maintain file history in Git.
2021-09-03 22:04:19 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
cf8fe618fa
Deprecate "Hardware testing" page
Convert it into a redirect to the community-recommended hardware list on
the Qubes Forum. File rename will be in subsequent commit to maintain
history. See:
https://forum.qubes-os.org/t/short-list-of-laptops-desktops-that-work-well-with-qubes-os/5197/159?u=adw
2021-09-03 22:03:10 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
d75a0dcfe2
Genericize anchor text and shorten URL (#1187)
Mitigates against future changes in thread title.
2021-08-08 02:34:43 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
0ca6239915
Remove release number from URLs (#1187)
This won't break the URLs. They'll just automatically redirect to the
correct thread. This will allow us to keep updating and re-using the
same thread and URL without scaring off users who see "r4-0-4" in the
URL and think it's out-of-date in the future.
2021-08-07 05:14:09 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
6446acdad8
Update hardware-related docs
- Add links to "just works" list
- Improve organization
- Standardize orthography
- Wrap text
- Remove very old ML link
- Minor wording improvements
2021-08-07 04:36:28 -07:00
Sven Semmler
725800ead5
Add "Just works" for R4.0.4 and the CPU info
Link to the forum post with the community created "just works" list for R4.0.4; also added the respective CPU info the the testing hardware retrieved from @marmarek
2021-08-06 17:21:17 -05:00
Andrew David Wong
717810fb11
Document 'zenity' requirement for GUI inter-qube copying
Fixes QubesOS/qubes-issues#6801
2021-07-28 22:53:15 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
322fe6ca9f
Add sentence about joining the testing team
https://forum.qubes-os.org/t/testing-team-how-to-deal-with-in-forum/4453/49?u=adw
2021-07-26 07:16:25 -07:00
deeplow
f88cd02cc6
fix typo 2021-07-26 08:17:47 -04:00
deeplow
23d027deae
add extra case for installation freezing
If installing in external SSD sometimes and when the user forgets to disable sys-usb the initial setup also
fails after setup networking.
2021-07-25 11:57:30 +00:00
Andrew David Wong
6fe0e40fb3
Merge branch 'fix20210614' of https://github.com/zpc0/qubes-doc into zpc0-fix20210614 2021-07-20 06:01:26 -07:00
Yanase Yuki
71ae00b56f
Use docs.saltproject.io for SaltStack document
Official SaltStack repository now uses saltproject.io, so use
new domain name to avoid unnecessary redirects.

example:
https://github.com/saltstack/salt/commit/dfa0619b9e55058b
2021-07-20 19:33:09 +09:00
Yanase Yuki
8a0ba67406
Fix SaltStack document links 2021-07-20 19:32:37 +09:00
Andrew David Wong
54525b2e09
Update links; fix typo 2021-07-20 03:27:51 -07:00
Dave Smith
d01ad9c33e
Fix htmlproofer errors in PRs #1176 & #1177...
caused by hcl.md file rename in qubes-doc commit 7d894a59.
2021-07-16 01:15:15 -05:00
Andrew David Wong
db56549748
Move files back to qubes-doc so they can appear in index
I'm still not sure why these files have to be in qubes-doc in order to
appear in the doc index, but they do, so I'm moving them back even
though they're mostly empty.
2021-07-14 11:20:16 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
7d894a5971
Update filename to match new title 2021-07-14 11:16:34 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
c001d2136b
Update title to distinguish from main HCL page
Moving redirects to main HCL page in a separate commit.
2021-07-14 11:15:29 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
4ff7399334
Copyedit 2021-07-13 15:28:42 -07:00
Dave Smith
13f799725f
Fix link to HTML syntax (#1174) 2021-07-12 08:09:26 -05:00
Dave Smith
4055787313
Add clarification based on PR #1174 feedback 2021-07-11 22:38:26 -05:00
Dave Smith
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2021-07-11 13:35:12 -05:00
Dave Smith
cc8155ff9f
Undo change to 'Copying the ISO' header, not worth the broken links 2021-07-11 13:30:32 -05:00
Andrew David Wong
65f032a45c
Update patch release description for accuracy 2021-07-10 14:42:17 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
26b1a4d6db
Change "point relase" to "patch release" for precision
In general, the software world is not clear about these terms. However,
the most common usage seems to use "point release" to refer to any
release with at least one period in the version number, which would also
include minor releases. By contrast, "patch release," though a much less
common phrase, unambiguously denotes a release with a version number
containing two periods.

See:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Point_release
https://semver.org/
2021-07-10 14:29:48 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
ca0ccab949
Update titles and links 2021-07-10 14:25:29 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
039f2f87b9
Update filename 2021-07-10 13:52:46 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
7ecbf8f530
Change "version" to "release"
See https://github.com/QubesOS/qubes-issues/issues/5308#issuecomment-877700342
2021-07-10 13:50:26 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
3f0977be1b
Fix typo; improve image titles (#1172) 2021-07-10 12:39:28 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
380e7b43b9
Fix and improve installation guide (#1172)
- Improve language
- Fix image links
- Explain BIOS and UEFI, provide links
- Fill in missing steps and information gaps
- Standardize grammar and punctuation
- Improve formatting
- Clarify instructions and explanations
2021-07-10 12:22:46 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
0309e79ca8
Merge branch 'patch-23' of https://github.com/deeplow/qubes-doc into deeplow-patch-23 2021-07-10 11:33:47 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
a18174dc5e
Fix capitalization; update terms (QubesOS/qubes-issues#6769)
Thank you to @unman for the initial sentence case pass.
2021-07-09 05:10:44 -07:00
unman
d0bc9e70a2
Sentence case for titles 2021-07-09 01:06:41 +00:00
Andrew David Wong
c29cf40910
Reorganize doc guidelines into multiple pages; update style guide
The existing doc guidelines page attempts to combine too many different
topics at once and includes information that does not pertain directly
to the documentation. This reorganization is intended to make each type
of information easier to find. For example, some have found it difficult
to find the documentation style guidelines (see, e.g.,
QubesOS/qubes-issues#6701#issuecomment-875875610). This reorganization
allows us to assign more specific titles to each page.

General changes:
- Create new page for contribution instructions
- Create new page for website style guide
- Create new page for continuous integration
- Rename existing "style guide" to "visual style guide" in order to
  avoid ambiguity with new doc and website style guides
- Retain existing page solely for doc style guide
- Update page names and permalinks
- Update existing links
- Improve language

Doc style guide changes:
- Add section on using sentence case in headings
  (see QubesOS/qubes-issues#6756 and #1173)
- Improve section organization
- Clarify language

In order to better preserve the Git history of each file, file renames
will be handled in a separate commit.
2021-07-08 08:08:57 -07:00
Dave Smith
64b1015e17
Reduce Windows confusion in renamed 'Installation medium preparation' section 2021-07-07 22:12:46 -05:00
deeplow
f4e726c818
minor changes 2021-07-06 20:33:54 +00:00
deeplow
9d2bc4341f
Replace all BIOS mentions with BIOS/UEFI 2021-07-06 20:27:05 +00:00
deeplow
a448289442
remove duplicated information about boot device 2021-07-06 20:18:03 +00:00
deeplow
b3d9e00bae
Update installation-guide.md 2021-07-06 20:01:55 +00:00
gw0
ad6bcf7fb4 Update resume-suspend-troubleshooting.md 2021-07-06 13:19:15 +02:00
Andrew David Wong
9d390bdb0d
Use Markdown syntax instead of HTML
Although the HTML tags are technically correct, it's probably more
important to preserve source readability and avoid the problems that
HTML-in-Markdown poses for localization and offline documentation.
2021-07-06 02:06:50 -07:00
deeplow
9e0de52023
add info on boot menu (part 1) 2021-07-05 18:41:06 +00:00
Andrew David Wong
0b5e3005c2
Document template testing; improve related docs
- Document template testing repos
- Introduce dom0 testing repos
- Cross-link dom0 and domU testing repo sections
- Link to template testing section from related sections
- Add pointer to installing templates
- Minor improvements and fixes

Thanks to @GWeck for pointing out the need for this in:
https://forum.qubes-os.org/t/fedora-34-template-available-for-testing/4904/4
2021-07-05 06:09:42 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
41ed804361
Wrap text; improve wording 2021-07-05 05:35:57 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
440ca6a597
Update Whonix links; add Privacy Policy links 2021-07-05 05:26:21 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
bae794951d
Capitalize second word in title case compound adjectives
https://github.com/QubesOS/qubes-issues/issues/6756#issuecomment-873385039
2021-07-04 03:35:59 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
28bfb5c224
Capitalize second word in title case compound adjectives
https://github.com/QubesOS/qubes-issues/issues/6756#issuecomment-873385039
2021-07-03 15:43:16 -07:00