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@ -201,10 +201,11 @@ to earn the good will of others. This does not mean that you will not receive
help. On the contrary, we are fortunate to have such a helpful and
understanding community that many of them spend hours of their personal time
helping complete strangers, including many who post anonymously. (Given the
integration of Qubes with [Whonix](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes), we understand better than
most the complexities of privacy and anonymity, and we know that many users
have no other choice but to post anonymously.) You can read our project's [Code
of Conduct](/code-of-conduct/) and [Privacy Policy](/privacy/) for more information.
integration of Qubes with [Whonix](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes), we
understand better than most the complexities of privacy and anonymity, and we
know that many users have no other choice but to post anonymously.) You can
read our project's [Code of Conduct](/code-of-conduct/) and [Privacy
Policy](/privacy/) for more information.
### Report issues and submit changes in the right places
@ -500,8 +501,7 @@ too](https://forum.qubes-os.org/t/using-the-forum-via-email/533)!)
## Social media
The Qubes OS Project has a presence on several social media platforms,
including:
The Qubes OS Project has a presence on the following social media platforms:
* [Twitter](https://twitter.com/QubesOS)
* [Reddit](https://www.reddit.com/r/Qubes/)

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@ -378,7 +378,8 @@ Let's briefly go over the options:
later, and you can always create your own.
* **Create Whonix Gateway and Workstation qubes:**
If you want to use Whonix, you should select this option.
* **Enabling system and template updates over the Tor anonymity network using Whonix:**
* **Enabling system and template updates over the Tor anonymity network using
Whonix:**
If you select this option, then whenever you install or update software in
dom0 or a template, the internet traffic will go through Tor.
* **Create USB qube holding all USB controllers:**

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@ -65,10 +65,10 @@ base distribution in dom0 even after it has reached end-of-life (EOL).
The following table shows select [template](/doc/templates/) versions that are
currently supported. Currently, only [Fedora](/doc/templates/fedora/) and
[Debian](/doc/templates/debian/) templates are officially supported by the
Qubes OS Project. [Whonix](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes) templates are supported by our
partner, the [Whonix Project](https://www.whonix.org/). Qubes support for each
template ends when that upstream release reaches end-of-life (EOL). Please see
below for distribution-specific notes.
Qubes OS Project. [Whonix](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes) templates are
supported by our partner, the [Whonix Project](https://www.whonix.org/). Qubes
support for each template ends when that upstream release reaches end-of-life
(EOL). Please see below for distribution-specific notes.
It is the responsibility of each distribution to clearly notify its users in
advance of its own EOL dates, and it is users' responsibility to heed these
@ -107,9 +107,9 @@ chart that illustrates this. Qubes support ends at the *regular* EOL date,
### Note on Whonix support
[Whonix](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes) templates are supported by our partner, the [Whonix
Project](https://www.whonix.org/). The Whonix Project has set its own support
policy for Whonix templates in Qubes.
[Whonix](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes) templates are supported by our
partner, the [Whonix Project](https://www.whonix.org/). The Whonix Project has
set its own support policy for Whonix templates in Qubes.
This policy requires Whonix template users to stay reasonably close to the
cutting edge by upgrading to new stable versions of Qubes OS and Whonix