Dean V
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Incorporated Suggestions
2017-04-24 12:55:06 -07:00
Dean V
e03304c8b3
Edit whonix.md
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* Removed some redundant or unnecessary sentences/clauses like "..and these pages may be technical"
* Removed a sentence referencing a no longer existent Qubes support forum
* Rephrased some sentences
* Gerundified words where necessary
2017-04-24 09:47:59 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
36eb4058e4
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-20'
2017-04-23 13:54:29 -05:00
Andrew David Wong
e3c370ea4f
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-14'
2017-04-21 18:31:38 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
b5b04f7b19
Merge branch 'patch-14' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-14
2017-04-21 18:31:09 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
335ef39446
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-12'
2017-04-21 18:30:33 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
ca0fa410cf
Merge branch 'patch-12' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-12
2017-04-21 18:29:46 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
40ac9220df
Merge branch 'elimisteve-patch-3'
2017-04-21 18:28:30 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
8e759c7268
Merge branch 'patch-3' of https://github.com/elimisteve/qubes-doc into elimisteve-patch-3
2017-04-21 18:28:11 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
83ee9f1436
Merge branch 'h01ger-master'
2017-04-21 18:26:08 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
67f0eac4cc
Note that example enables unstable repo
2017-04-21 18:25:41 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
8320adfc12
Merge branch 'master' of https://github.com/h01ger/qubes-doc into h01ger-master
2017-04-21 18:24:36 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
e12771a583
Merge branch 'unman-1943'
2017-04-21 18:23:26 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch '1943' of https://github.com/unman/qubes-doc into unman-1943
2017-04-21 18:23:03 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'elimisteve-patch-1'
2017-04-21 18:21:00 -07:00
Steve Phillips
ec2361682a
usb.md typo fix: Stating -> Starting
2017-04-21 06:16:47 -07:00
Holger Levsen
4ae685b5ca
update example how to upgrade the dom0 kernel and the kernel used in the VMs.
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Signed-off-by: Holger Levsen <holger@layer-acht.org>
2017-04-20 20:53:42 +02:00
unman
9d40292bf9
Explain how to boot with HVM kernel errors.
2017-04-19 23:27:01 +01:00
Steve Phillips
8335f12d02
copying-files.md typo: copying -> copied
2017-04-19 02:04:18 -07:00
Marek Marczykowski-Górecki
db83e7fd5f
Add more UEFI troubleshooting instructions
2017-04-18 21:27:26 +02:00
stubbybubby
21d370bcb1
Update security.md
2017-04-17 17:18:46 -07:00
stubbybubby
96417f3eae
Insignificantly edit martus.md
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Modified the list heading to be grammatically correct.
2017-04-17 12:56:54 -07:00
stubbybubby
97ffdadf25
Minor edit of templates.md
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* Missing letters
* Removed words in a sentence
* Removed a letter
* I should probably just write a script that correctly formats the placement of newlines in these documents.
2017-04-17 09:14:19 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
f62cfea50e
Add link to thread on compiling kernels for dom0
2017-04-16 18:15:22 -07:00
stubbybubby
f6ef88d509
Edit security.md
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Rewrote two sentences + some misc grammar fixes/wording changes.
2017-04-16 17:12:31 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-10'
2017-04-16 14:16:55 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
63def080da
Merge branch 'patch-10' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-10
2017-04-16 14:16:01 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-2'
2017-04-16 14:14:41 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'patch-2' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-2
2017-04-16 14:13:45 -07:00
stubbybubby
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Insignificantly edit security-goals.md
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* Word go away
* Switch for better word
* Added one instance of "these" because it helps flow and provides context
* Removed unneeded parentheses
2017-04-16 14:11:04 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'modulistic-patch-1'
2017-04-16 14:08:38 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'patch-1' of https://github.com/modulistic/qubes-doc into modulistic-patch-1
2017-04-16 14:08:11 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-9'
2017-04-16 14:04:56 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'patch-9' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-9
2017-04-16 14:03:45 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-8'
2017-04-16 14:01:58 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'patch-8' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-8
2017-04-16 14:01:47 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-7'
2017-04-16 14:00:15 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'patch-7' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-7
2017-04-16 13:59:58 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'mdickers47-templates'
2017-04-16 13:48:08 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'templates' of https://github.com/mdickers47/qubes-doc into mdickers47-templates
2017-04-16 13:47:58 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'mdickers47-signal'
2017-04-16 13:46:58 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
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Merge branch 'signal' of https://github.com/mdickers47/qubes-doc into mdickers47-signal
2017-04-16 13:46:17 -07:00
stubbybubby
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Fix grammar and flow
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Fixed problems related to:
* Unnecessary wordiness
* Subject-Verb Agreement
* Typos
* Not creating newline at end of sentence as per documentation guidelines.
* Putting sentences where they logically needed to be
* Adding articles where necessary
* Added descriptions of links that just used the URL as the display text
I don't understand some of the information here, so tell me if any of the fixes I made inadvertently created inaccuracies.
2017-04-16 13:32:52 -07:00
stubbybubby
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Edit pentesting.md
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Updated the wikipedia definition to reflect what's on the page (which is a more accurate definition anyways). It's a little heavy, but since the sentence has quotation marks we should be basing it on a direct quote from the article and not a paraphrase. If you want to paraphrase it because it's dense someone else can come and remove those quotation marks and write their own defintion.
While I did not modify the source, I also want to ask that we not source information from the wikipedia article itself, but rather the sources that it references in its footnotes.
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* Missing a lette
* Removed unnecessary word glyphs
2017-04-16 12:53:50 -07:00
stubbybubby
21232dd492
Update to guidelines, remove some parentheses
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Removed some unnecessary parentheses around entire sentences and completely relevant clauses. Also expanded the Using PGP with Email section to provide more detail.
Also made newlines at the end of sentences as per the doc guidelines.
2017-04-16 12:36:17 -07:00
Marek Marczykowski-Górecki
9b3b0ffd04
mgmt1: add mgmt.label.Index and events clarification
2017-04-15 13:59:22 +02:00
Mikey Dickerson
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sudo not necessary here
2017-04-14 18:28:25 -04:00
Mikey Dickerson
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Add an important missing step, to restart VMs
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Also provide an example of how to copy a file to another VM.
2017-04-14 01:57:45 -04:00
stubbybubby
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Edit certified-laptops.md
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* Removed redundant phrases
* Grammar fixes
* Diversified language
2017-04-11 21:45:51 -07:00
Marek Marczykowski-Górecki
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mgmt: add redirect from /doc/mgmt/
2017-04-10 01:41:46 +02:00
