From 41ed804361bd3a4f678fae9fba29ab2b24459054 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Andrew David Wong Date: Mon, 5 Jul 2021 05:35:57 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Wrap text; improve wording --- introduction/support.md | 12 ++++++------ .../installation-guide.md | 3 ++- .../supported-versions.md | 14 +++++++------- 3 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-) diff --git a/introduction/support.md b/introduction/support.md index 0d6c1683..b957d521 100644 --- a/introduction/support.md +++ b/introduction/support.md @@ -201,10 +201,11 @@ to earn the good will of others. This does not mean that you will not receive help. On the contrary, we are fortunate to have such a helpful and understanding community that many of them spend hours of their personal time helping complete strangers, including many who post anonymously. (Given the -integration of Qubes with [Whonix](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes), we understand better than -most the complexities of privacy and anonymity, and we know that many users -have no other choice but to post anonymously.) You can read our project's [Code -of Conduct](/code-of-conduct/) and [Privacy Policy](/privacy/) for more information. +integration of Qubes with [Whonix](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes), we +understand better than most the complexities of privacy and anonymity, and we +know that many users have no other choice but to post anonymously.) You can +read our project's [Code of Conduct](/code-of-conduct/) and [Privacy +Policy](/privacy/) for more information. ### Report issues and submit changes in the right places @@ -500,8 +501,7 @@ too](https://forum.qubes-os.org/t/using-the-forum-via-email/533)!) ## Social media -The Qubes OS Project has a presence on several social media platforms, -including: +The Qubes OS Project has a presence on the following social media platforms: * [Twitter](https://twitter.com/QubesOS) * [Reddit](https://www.reddit.com/r/Qubes/) diff --git a/user/downloading-installing-upgrading/installation-guide.md b/user/downloading-installing-upgrading/installation-guide.md index 95c05cbf..55d7e2cc 100644 --- a/user/downloading-installing-upgrading/installation-guide.md +++ b/user/downloading-installing-upgrading/installation-guide.md @@ -378,7 +378,8 @@ Let's briefly go over the options: later, and you can always create your own. * **Create Whonix Gateway and Workstation qubes:** If you want to use Whonix, you should select this option. - * **Enabling system and template updates over the Tor anonymity network using Whonix:** + * **Enabling system and template updates over the Tor anonymity network using + Whonix:** If you select this option, then whenever you install or update software in dom0 or a template, the internet traffic will go through Tor. * **Create USB qube holding all USB controllers:** diff --git a/user/downloading-installing-upgrading/supported-versions.md b/user/downloading-installing-upgrading/supported-versions.md index 05777537..acfb09e5 100644 --- a/user/downloading-installing-upgrading/supported-versions.md +++ b/user/downloading-installing-upgrading/supported-versions.md @@ -65,10 +65,10 @@ base distribution in dom0 even after it has reached end-of-life (EOL). The following table shows select [template](/doc/templates/) versions that are currently supported. Currently, only [Fedora](/doc/templates/fedora/) and [Debian](/doc/templates/debian/) templates are officially supported by the -Qubes OS Project. [Whonix](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes) templates are supported by our -partner, the [Whonix Project](https://www.whonix.org/). Qubes support for each -template ends when that upstream release reaches end-of-life (EOL). Please see -below for distribution-specific notes. +Qubes OS Project. [Whonix](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes) templates are +supported by our partner, the [Whonix Project](https://www.whonix.org/). Qubes +support for each template ends when that upstream release reaches end-of-life +(EOL). Please see below for distribution-specific notes. It is the responsibility of each distribution to clearly notify its users in advance of its own EOL dates, and it is users' responsibility to heed these @@ -107,9 +107,9 @@ chart that illustrates this. Qubes support ends at the *regular* EOL date, ### Note on Whonix support -[Whonix](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes) templates are supported by our partner, the [Whonix -Project](https://www.whonix.org/). The Whonix Project has set its own support -policy for Whonix templates in Qubes. +[Whonix](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes) templates are supported by our +partner, the [Whonix Project](https://www.whonix.org/). The Whonix Project has +set its own support policy for Whonix templates in Qubes. This policy requires Whonix template users to stay reasonably close to the cutting edge by upgrading to new stable versions of Qubes OS and Whonix