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@@ -10,11 +10,10 @@ so... here it is:
 
 We value:
 
-1. **Collaboration and facilitation** over ‘editors’ and ‘authors’
-2. **Engaged discourse** over isolation
-3. **Completed chunks** over incomplete volumes
-4. **Here and now production** over sometime soon production
-5. **Meaningful credit** for all contributors
+1. **Contributors and facilitators** over ‘editors’ and ‘authors’
+2. **Collaboration* over indiviualised production
+3. **Here and now production** over sometime soon production
+4. **Meaningful credit** for all contributors over single author attribution
 
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@@ -23,4 +22,4 @@ Sources:
 - http://lists.flossmanuals.net/pipermail/discuss-flossmanuals.net/2012-June/007446.html
 - http://lists.flossmanuals.net/pipermail/discuss-flossmanuals.net/2012-June/007465.html
 - http://blog.booki.cc/2012/06/iterative-book-development-manifesto/
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