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 "During his twelve years in service he was recognised for heroism and has been decorated with the AF Commendation Medal, as well as the AF Achievement Medal with two oak leaf clusters and was honoured for service in the Persian Gulf War."
 
-~95% of his book is a vanilla story about working for the USAF/NSA. Very little of the book covers his claimed interactions with NHI's on behalf of the NSA. I have a problem accepting this as "canon" because if it's true the NSA has advanced much further with NHI communication that anyone else is talking about.
+~95% of his book is a vanilla story about working for the USAF/NSA. Very little of the book covers his claimed interactions with NHI's on behalf of the NSA. I have a problem accepting this as "canon" because if it's true the NSA has advanced quite far with NHI communication. Overall this is a very bizarre story. Perhaps it has "enhanced" with the NHI comms part to sell copies.
 
 https://www.aboveblack.com/index.html<br>
 https://www.amazon.com/ABOVE-BLACK-Preserve-Insiders-Government-ebook/dp/B003L77MUU/ref=sr_1_1<br>