developer/system/networking.md

@@ -62,12 +62,9 @@ Such configuration can be expressed by enabling `ipv6` feature only on some subs
 
 ![ipv6-2](/attachment/doc/ipv6-2.png)
 
-Besides enabling IPv6 forwarding, the standard Qubes firewall can be used to limit what network resources are available to each qube. Currently only the `qvm-firewall` command supports adding IPv6 rules, the GUI firewall editor will have this ability later.
-
-**Note:** Setting or unsetting the `ipv6` feature only affects qubes-configured networking. It does not affect e.g. external interfaces. If you want to restrict IPv6 on these interfaces change the settings in Network Manager. Alternatively, disable IPv6 support using methods appropriate to the underlying template.
+Besides enabling IPv6 forwarding, standard Qubes firewall can be used to limit what network resources are available to each qube. Currently only `qvm-firewall` command support adding IPv6 rules, GUI firewall editor will have this ability later.
 
 ### Limitations
 
 Currently only IPv4 DNS servers are configured, regardless of `ipv6` feature state. It is done this way to avoid reconfiguring all connected qubes whenever IPv6 DNS becomes available or not. Configuring qubes to always use IPv6 DNS and only fallback to IPv4 may result in relatively long timeouts and poor usability.
 But note that DNS using IPv4 does not prevent to return IPv6 addresses. In practice this is only a problem for IPv6-only networks.
-

user/advanced-topics/config-files.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ That way, they can be used to customize a single VM instead of all VMs based on
 The scripts here all run as root.
 
 - `/rw/config/rc.local` - script runs at VM startup.
-    Good place to change some service settings, replace config files with its copy stored in `/rw/config`, etc. The script need to have the executable permission set to be executed.
+    Good place to change some service settings, replace config files with its copy stored in `/rw/config`, etc.
     Example usage:
 
     ~~~
@@ -32,8 +32,6 @@ The scripts here all run as root.
     echo '127.0.0.1 example.com' >> /etc/hosts
     ~~~
 
-- `/rw/config/rc.local.d/*.rc` - scripts run at VM startup just before `/rw/config/rc.local`
-- `/rw/config/rc.local-early.d/*.rc`, `/rw/config/rc.local-early` - scripts similar to `/rw/config/rc.local`, but running earlier in the system startup sequence - just before `sysinit.target`, and setting up the network.
 - `/rw/config/qubes-ip-change-hook` - script runs in NetVM after every external IP change and on "hardware" link status change.
 
 - In ProxyVMs (or app qubes with `qubes-firewall` service enabled), scripts placed in the following directories will be executed in the listed order followed by `qubes-firewall-user-script` at start up.

user/security-in-qubes/firewall.md

@@ -269,8 +269,7 @@ As an example we can take the use case of qube QubeDest running a web server lis
 
 **1. Identify the IP addresses you will need to use for sys-net, sys-firewall and the destination qube.**
 
-You can get this information using various methods.
-Only the first method can be used for `sys-net` to find the external IP:
+You can get this information using various methods, but only the first one can be used for `sys-net` outside world IP:
 
 - by running this command in each qube: `ip -4 -br a | grep UP`
 - using `qvm-ls -n`
@@ -285,12 +284,7 @@ Note the IP addresses you will need, they will be required in the next steps.
 
 For the following example, we assume that the physical interface ens6 in sys-net is on the local network 192.168.x.y with the IP 192.168.x.n, and that the IP address of sys-firewall is 10.137.1.z.
 
-When writing rules in sys-net, you can use `iif` or `iifname`.
-`iif` is faster, but can change where interfaces are dynamically created and destroyed, eg. ppp0.
-In that case use `iifname`, like this `iifname ens6`.
-`iifname` can also match wildcards - `iifname "eth*"`
-
-In the sys-net VM's Terminal, the first step is to define an nftables chain that will receive DNAT rules to relay the network traffic on a given port to the qube NetVM, we recommend to define a new chain for each destination qube to ease rules management:
+In the sys-net VM's Terminal, the first step is to define an ntables chain that will receive DNAT rules to relay the network traffic on a given port to the qube NetVM, we recommend to define a new chain for each destination qube to ease rules management:
 
 ```
 nft add chain qubes custom-dnat-qubeDEST '{ type nat hook prerouting priority filter +1 ; policy accept; }'
@@ -298,24 +292,25 @@ nft add chain qubes custom-dnat-qubeDEST '{ type nat hook prerouting priority fi
 
 > Note: the name `custom-dnat-qubeDST` is arbitrary
 
-> Note: while we use a DNAT chain for a single qube, it's possible to have a single DNAT chain for multiple qubes
+> Note: while we use a DNAT chain for a single qube, it's totally possible to have a single DNAT chain for multiple qubes
 
 Second step, code a natting firewall rule to route traffic on the outside interface for the service to the sys-firewall VM
 
 ```
-nft add rule qubes custom-dnat-qubeDEST iifname ens6 ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter dnat 10.137.1.z
+nft add rule qubes custom-dnat-qubeDEST iif == "ens6" ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter dnat 10.137.1.z
 ```
 
 Third step, code the appropriate new filtering firewall rule to allow new connections for the service
 
 ```
-nft add rule qubes custom-forward iifname ens6 ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 ip daddr 10.137.1.z tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter accept
+nft add rule qubes custom-forward iif == "ens6" ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 ip daddr 10.137.1.z tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter accept
 ```
 
 > Note: If you do not wish to limit the IP addresses connecting to the service, remove `ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24` from the rules
-> If you want to expose the service on multiple interfaces, repeat steps 2 and 3 above, for each interface. Alternatively, you can leave out the interface completely.
 
-Verify the rules on the sys-net firewall correctly match the packets you want by looking at the counters: check for the counter lines in the chains `custom-forward` and `custom-dnat-qubeDEST`:
+> If you want to expose the service on multiple interfaces, repeat the steps 2 and 3 described above, for each interface. Alternatively, you can leave out the interface completely.
+
+Verify the rules on sys-net firewall correctly match the packets you want by looking at its counters, check for the counter lines in the chains `custom-forward` and `custom-dnat-qubeDEST`:
 
 ```
 nft list table ip qubes
@@ -325,12 +320,12 @@ In this example, we can see 7 packets in the forward rule, and 3 packets in the
 
 ```
 chain custom-forward {
-  iifname ens6 ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 ip daddr 10.137.1.z tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter packets 7 bytes 448 accept
+  iif "ens6" ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 ip daddr 10.137.1.z tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter packets 7 bytes 448 accept
 }
 
 chain custom-dnat-qubeDEST {
   type nat hook prerouting priority filter + 1; policy accept;
-  iifname ens6 ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter packets 3 bytes 192 dnat to 10.138.33.59
+  iif "ens6" ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter packets 3 bytes 192 dnat to 10.138.33.59
 }
 ```
 
@@ -356,20 +351,18 @@ Content of `/rw/config/qubes-firewall-user-script` in `sys-net`:
 if nft add chain qubes custom-dnat-qubeDEST '{ type nat hook prerouting priority filter +1 ; policy accept; }'
 then
   # create the dnat rule
-  nft add rule qubes custom-dnat-qubeDEST iifname ens6 saddr 192.168.x.y/24 tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter dnat 10.137.1.z
+  nft add rule qubes custom-dnat-qubeDEST iif == "ens6" saddr 192.168.x.y/24 tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter dnat 10.137.1.z
 
   # allow forwarded traffic
-  nft add rule qubes custom-forward iifname ens6 ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 ip daddr 10.137.1.z tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter accept
+  nft add rule qubes custom-forward iif == "ens6" ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 ip daddr 10.137.1.z tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter accept
 fi
 ~~~
 
 **3. Route packets from the FirewallVM to the VM**
 
-For the following example, we use the fact that the interface of sys-firewall facing sys-net, is eth0.
-This is allocated to iifgroup 1.
-Furthermore, we assume that the IP address of sys-firewall is 10.137.1.z, and the target VM running the web server has the IP address 10.137.0.xx.
+For the following example, we use the fact that the physical interface of sys-firewall, facing sys-net, is eth0. Furthermore, we assume that the target VM running the web server has the IP address 10.137.0.xx and that the IP address of sys-firewall is 10.137.1.z.
 
-In the sys-firewall Terminal, add a DNAT chain that will contain routing rules:
+In the sys-firewall VM's Terminal, add a DNAT chain that will contain routing rules:
 
 ```
 nft add chain qubes custom-dnat-qubeDEST '{ type nat hook prerouting priority filter +1 ; policy accept; }'
@@ -378,13 +371,13 @@ nft add chain qubes custom-dnat-qubeDEST '{ type nat hook prerouting priority fi
 Second step, code a natting firewall rule to route traffic on the outside interface for the service to the destination qube
 
 ```
-nft add rule qubes custom-dnat-qubeDEST iifgroup 1 ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter dnat 10.137.0.xx
+nft add rule qubes custom-dnat-qubeDEST iif == "eth0" ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter dnat 10.137.0.xx
 ```
 
 Third step, code the appropriate new filtering firewall rule to allow new connections for the service
 
 ```
-nft add rule qubes custom-forward iifgroup 1 ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 ip daddr 10.137.0.xx tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter accept
+nft add rule qubes custom-forward iif == "eth0" ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 ip daddr 10.137.0.xx tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter accept
 ```
 
 > Note: If you do not wish to limit the IP addresses connecting to the service, remove `ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24` from the rules
@@ -405,10 +398,10 @@ Content of `/rw/config/qubes-firewall-user-script` in `sys-firewall`:
 if nft add chain qubes custom-dnat-qubeDEST '{ type nat hook prerouting priority filter +1 ; policy accept; }'
 then
   # create the dnat rule
-  nft add rule qubes custom-dnat-qubeDEST iifgroup 1 tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter dnat 10.137.0.xx
+  nft add rule qubes custom-dnat-qubeDEST iif == "eth0" tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter dnat 10.137.0.xx
 
   # allow forwarded traffic
-  nft add rule qubes custom-forward iifgroup 1 ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 ip daddr 10.137.0.xx tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter accept
+  nft add rule qubes custom-forward iif == "eth0" ip saddr 192.168.x.y/24 ip daddr 10.137.0.xx tcp dport 443 ct state new,established,related counter accept
 fi
 ~~~