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Author SHA1 Message Date
stubbybubby
5c089ca17f Edit certified-laptops.md
* Removed redundant phrases
* Grammar fixes
* Diversified language
2017-04-11 21:45:51 -07:00
Marek Marczykowski-Górecki
8f53500944
mgmt: add redirect from /doc/mgmt/ 2017-04-10 01:41:46 +02:00
Marek Marczykowski-Górecki
e6d9a97e8b
mgmt: clarifications, add mgmt.Events 2017-04-10 01:40:24 +02:00
Andrew David Wong
d46e86df52
Merge branch 'h01ger-master' 2017-04-06 05:02:49 -07:00
Holger Levsen
a45e7f8b13 fix typo
Signed-off-by: Holger Levsen <holger@layer-acht.org>
2017-04-06 12:53:49 +02:00
Pablo Costa
2b60fc203b Update user-faq.md about keyboard layout
Small improvements
2017-04-05 12:21:57 +02:00
Andrew David Wong
281665c136
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-3' 2017-04-04 21:54:55 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
e25f8d831c
Merge branch 'patch-3' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-3 2017-04-04 21:54:35 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
ec11e5ab59
Fix link 2017-04-04 21:52:06 -07:00
stubbybubby
32f2dd64cd Fixed grammar mistake 2017-04-04 16:13:11 -07:00
Pablo Costa
eea10c7141 Update user-faq.md about keyboard layout
I know this feels like a workaround for some misbehaving/missing UI, but it is better than the reference to the ML discussion, and it links to the open issue.

I have not done extensive testing to this method. I am sending the PR in a hurry because I have been frustrated (missing my compose-key) for some days after reinstalling, and I think this may prove useful for other users. Please try to reproduce and/or get some community feedback before accepting the PR;  Also, feel free to reword, reformat, or discard :)
2017-04-05 00:47:03 +02:00
Andrew David Wong
85249be4c9
Merge branch 'kulinacs-building-non-fedora-template-cleanup' 2017-04-04 07:58:37 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
177686a772
Merge branch 'building-non-fedora-template-cleanup' of https://github.com/kulinacs/qubes-doc into kulinacs-building-non-fedora-template-cleanup 2017-04-04 07:58:12 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
3499d2a1c2
Add XSA-212 2017-04-04 06:29:57 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
05e521ea28
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-5' 2017-04-02 21:12:02 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
0177d6fc81
Merge branch 'patch-5' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-5 2017-04-02 21:11:41 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
f718b07eed
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-4' 2017-04-02 21:04:11 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
f52bf8a3ec
Merge branch 'patch-4' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-4 2017-04-02 21:03:54 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
dc19774f67
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-1' 2017-04-02 21:01:35 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
3ca3f1f1a6
Minor grammar fix 2017-04-02 21:01:17 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
28a28d30c5
Merge branch 'patch-1' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-1 2017-04-02 20:35:14 -07:00
stubbybubby
3db69ad702 Rewrite parts of usability-ux.md
This proposed file changes probably includes some content changes, but ones I hope you'll immediately agree with because the result is a more accurate article.

Among other things,
* Removed unnecessarily prudent logical connection phrases like "thus," and just replaced them with "because" and "as a result" where I could.
* Moved some sentences or clarifications to their proper sections, e.g. moved the "Despite this rule, some acronyms..." line to the Avoid Acronyms section.
* Removed some sentences (like "Additionally, security focused software has the responsibility of providing safety to the user and their data") that, while true, without proper context did not seem relevant to the article.
* Removed some phrases that repeated known contextual information like "of usability and experience" in "if you are interested in furthering your understanding of usability and experience" or "which are shown to a user" in "notifications which are shown to a user".
* Introduced some clauses or phrases that clarified information, like adding "of those mentioned" to "All three desktop environments have their own human interface guidelines,"
* Merged the Avoid Repetitive Tasks and Minimize Repetitive Steps sections.
* Rewrote some sentences that were incomplete or didn't make sense into what I assumed the writer intended to say.
* Inserted possessive's' when they were necessary, and turned bigger sentences into smaller ones using possessives when I could ("notification messages presented to user" --> "user's notification messages")
* Grammar edits
* Compartmentalized run-on sentences.

This was a pretty big edit, so you'll probably disagree with some of the changes. Just explain what you want to be re-done or where my edits changes an important meaning/formed an inaccuracy and I will make another commit.
2017-04-02 11:57:54 -07:00
stubbybubby
49957fc5d7 Minor fix of missing article
"contributed majority of Qubes-specific code" --> "contributed the majority of Qubes-specific code"
2017-04-02 10:46:49 -07:00
stubbybubby
99a5879734 Fix minor grammar issues
Inserted apostrophe's' when necessary and fixed the placement of a few conjunctions.
2017-04-02 10:38:16 -07:00
stubbybubby
a94bdbd27f Fixed a typo in first paragraph. 2017-04-02 10:19:38 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
0b4d98d08e
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-stubbybubby-doc-guidelines-edit' 2017-04-01 18:12:48 -07:00
stubbybubby
66c32bc8d7 Small edits to vpn.md
A few new or revised sentences in the goal of accuracy. Also fixed some grammar issues and simplified some roundabout phrases.
2017-04-01 12:09:04 -07:00
stubbybubby
2fd18ea73a Edit doc-guidelines.md
* Reduced Word Reuse
* Inserted words where necessary
* Removed words when possible
2017-04-01 08:53:06 -07:00
stubbybubby
e5be4109c5 Edit contributing.md
Removed one minor instance of e.g. to prevent word/phrase reuse
2017-04-01 08:29:25 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
50b7f85a8a
Merge branch 'jpouellet-fix-thompson-link' 2017-03-31 15:09:23 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
df6a65082b
Merge branch 'fix-thompson-link' of https://github.com/jpouellet/qubes-doc into jpouellet-fix-thompson-link 2017-03-31 15:09:14 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
04fa7f58bc
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-2' 2017-03-31 15:06:56 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
e2f94ef3f7
Merge branch 'patch-2' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-2 2017-03-31 15:03:47 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
499f440bcd
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-1' 2017-03-31 15:02:19 -07:00
Jean-Philippe Ouellet
ff149a9b52
Fix link to Reflections on Trusting Trust paper
Current link is gone (redirect to nowhere useful), the archive.org copy
is missing the figures, and dl.acm.org is not Tor-friendly.

This is the best copy there seems to be.
2017-03-31 12:00:33 -04:00
stubbybubby
99a8a989ee Remove polarizing 'uneducated'
Removed the word 'uneducated' from a line, in order to prevent the underlying meaning of the section from being changed.
2017-03-30 21:13:03 -07:00
stubbybubby
1f556ca16a Fix spelling mistake and meaning change.
Fixing a spelling mistake of lackadaisical in earlier patch and the unintended change of meaning in last sentence in Rationale.
2017-03-30 21:06:29 -07:00
stubbybubby
8d0fbc14c5 Edit grammar and sentence structure in "G.T.C."
I did not modify any of the content itself; just presented it more clearly by:

- Modifying unnecessarily wordy phrases 
- Fixing grammatical mistakes
- Partitioning run-on sentences
- Reduced Word Re-use
- Removed unnecessary commas
- Formatted each individual typographic convention consistently
- Made misc. changes to improve clarity and make the text more evocative
2017-03-29 22:12:06 -07:00
stubbybubby
afa0c5c6e2 Edit grammar and sentence structure in "Rationale"
I did not modify any of the content itself; just presented it more clearly by:

- Modifying unnecessarily wordy phrases 
- Fixing grammatical mistakes
- Partitioning run-on sentences
- Reduced Word Re-use
- Made misc. changes to improve clarity and make the text more evocative
2017-03-29 21:55:49 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
4d897d4615
Update R3.1 status to "unsupported" (EOL) 2017-03-29 00:11:43 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
451f1c3fe4
Fix typo 2017-03-28 17:48:01 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
84042265d8
Merge branch 'ypid-bind-dirs-mk-source' 2017-03-27 03:28:24 -07:00
Robin Schneider
e83362ef7a
bind-dirs: Missing ro path limitation is being fixed
Depends on: https://github.com/QubesOS/qubes-core-agent-linux/pull/42 (merged and released)
2017-03-27 12:21:33 +02:00
Nicklaus McClendon
7f10a0a891
Updated Building Non-Fedora Templates page
* Changed the package list to a proper list, dropped the "-vm" suffix,
  and added the links to their respective repositories.
* Replaced a link to a qubes-os.org repository with the new Github
  repository
* Updated a reference to "xen-vm" to "vmm-xen" and removed the outdated
  link to the Arch AUR.
* Updated the suggested xenstore-read command to one that currently works
2017-03-23 17:34:18 -05:00
Andrew David Wong
25e61997c7
Fix headers 2017-03-21 19:05:09 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
4cfd96610f
Merge branch 'ddcrjlalumiere-patch-1' 2017-03-21 18:57:25 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
1847d7a64f
Merge branch 'patch-1' of git://github.com/ddcrjlalumiere/qubes-doc into ddcrjlalumiere-patch-1 2017-03-21 18:56:44 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
a418ca554e
Merge branch 'kulinacs-debian-test-repo' 2017-03-21 18:54:19 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
ed528210a9
Merge branch 'debian-test-repo' of git://github.com/kulinacs/qubes-doc into kulinacs-debian-test-repo 2017-03-21 18:54:03 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
824cabf59f
Add notes regarding embargoed XSAs and unused XSA numbers
QubesOS/qubes-issues#2703
2017-03-21 18:02:03 -07:00