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Author SHA1 Message Date
Miguel Jacq
db13ef5a33
Various minor spelling and grammar fixes 2017-05-11 18:48:59 +10:00
InstantGratimification
b3dcea40a8 http -> https + blogspot -> https://blog.invisiblethings.org 2017-05-03 14:49:41 +00:00
stubbybubby
469ca0c5e2 Revert previous commit
That was weird. Iw as sure they were dead links.
2017-04-17 17:11:51 -07:00
stubbybubby
23726eb505 Remove dead links
Removed some dead links in the introduction.
2017-04-16 19:33:19 -07:00
stubbybubby
44f8c8eb7c Edit expose-like-effect part
Updated the paragraphs to reflect the current desktop environment of QubesOS.
2017-04-16 16:55:38 -07:00
stubbybubby
848ee837e8 Modified introduction
Removed the reference to the original older qubesos introduction and made the introduction of this article a standalone statement.
2017-04-16 15:20:21 -07:00
stubbybubby
7569cf3b95 Add disclaimer and clarifications about signatures
Wrote a paragraph or two about verifying the QubesOS ISO signature and wrote a disclaimer that Qubes does not automatically verify external downloads not coming from its own repositories.
2017-04-16 15:09:04 -07:00
stubbybubby
824618d805 Edit/Rewrite security-guidelines.md
A few content changes, read over them to see if you like them:
* A few sentences were reworded so that end users could understand them better, without sacrificing detail. 
* Sometimes more detail was added to give context to sentences or to make them more accurate.
* New sentences were added to help transitions in thought.
* New sentences were added to provide reasoning to earlier instructions so that the reader knew why they were important.

None of these content changes were particularly extensive or clashed with the original paper but they do change the meaning a bit, so I thought it important to document them.

Other changes:
* Subject-verb agreement
* Corrected some parentheses placements
* Misc. Grammar Fixes
* Inserted forgotten commas and periods
* Word variation
* Rework on some sentences that had really roundabout ways of saying things

In addition to my PR being a big edit, it is also on an important document. I have looked over my changes well and I know you will too. Reply if anything needs fixing/changing in the PR.

I have more changes that I want to add, but I figured I had edited the document enough already and if I added anythign else or made more extensive modifications it might be hard to tell what exactly I did.
2017-04-15 22:34:37 -07:00
ddcrjlalumiere
b8bac33169 Directly link to HCL 2017-03-21 15:54:32 -04:00
Andrew David Wong
8ab0a855bd
Reorganize security info pages 2017-03-18 19:31:12 -07:00
Marek Marczykowski-Górecki
e02030119e
Fix internal links 2016-09-25 01:25:34 +02:00
John Bernard
45b2ccc7b0 Fix broken link
The URL https://www.networkworld.com/news/2007/080207-black-hat-virtual-machine-rootkit-detection.html is a broken link -- presenting an error "Page not found" upon request. However, there exists an archive of this article on archive.org, and I have updated the URL to point to the archive.
2016-08-15 11:50:11 -05:00
Axon
9d59c48aa7
Reorganize USB-related information
This commit creates a single, central page (/doc/usb/) for all
USB-related information by combining stick-mounting.md with the
manual USB qube (formerly known as "USBVM") creation procedure
from security-guidelines.md. It rewrites the content from both of
those and adds the content requested in QubesOS/qubes-issues#1690.
It also redirects /doc/usbvm/ away from the ancient page on PVUSB.
2016-01-28 12:02:39 +00:00
Axon
fc385586b6
Remove en/ from URLs (QubesOS/qubes-issues#1333) 2015-10-28 22:14:40 +00:00
Axon
2e68758b50
Remove en/ directory (QubesOS/qubes-issues#1333) 2015-10-28 21:00:07 +00:00