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Author SHA1 Message Date
Andrew David Wong
26b1a4d6db
Change "point relase" to "patch release" for precision
In general, the software world is not clear about these terms. However,
the most common usage seems to use "point release" to refer to any
release with at least one period in the version number, which would also
include minor releases. By contrast, "patch release," though a much less
common phrase, unambiguously denotes a release with a version number
containing two periods.

See:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Point_release
https://semver.org/
2021-07-10 14:29:48 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
ca0ccab949
Update titles and links 2021-07-10 14:25:29 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
039f2f87b9
Update filename 2021-07-10 13:52:46 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
7ecbf8f530
Change "version" to "release"
See https://github.com/QubesOS/qubes-issues/issues/5308#issuecomment-877700342
2021-07-10 13:50:26 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
3f0977be1b
Fix typo; improve image titles (#1172) 2021-07-10 12:39:28 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
380e7b43b9
Fix and improve installation guide (#1172)
- Improve language
- Fix image links
- Explain BIOS and UEFI, provide links
- Fill in missing steps and information gaps
- Standardize grammar and punctuation
- Improve formatting
- Clarify instructions and explanations
2021-07-10 12:22:46 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
0309e79ca8
Merge branch 'patch-23' of https://github.com/deeplow/qubes-doc into deeplow-patch-23 2021-07-10 11:33:47 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
a18174dc5e
Fix capitalization; update terms (QubesOS/qubes-issues#6769)
Thank you to @unman for the initial sentence case pass.
2021-07-09 05:10:44 -07:00
unman
d0bc9e70a2
Sentence case for titles 2021-07-09 01:06:41 +00:00
Andrew David Wong
c29cf40910
Reorganize doc guidelines into multiple pages; update style guide
The existing doc guidelines page attempts to combine too many different
topics at once and includes information that does not pertain directly
to the documentation. This reorganization is intended to make each type
of information easier to find. For example, some have found it difficult
to find the documentation style guidelines (see, e.g.,
QubesOS/qubes-issues#6701#issuecomment-875875610). This reorganization
allows us to assign more specific titles to each page.

General changes:
- Create new page for contribution instructions
- Create new page for website style guide
- Create new page for continuous integration
- Rename existing "style guide" to "visual style guide" in order to
  avoid ambiguity with new doc and website style guides
- Retain existing page solely for doc style guide
- Update page names and permalinks
- Update existing links
- Improve language

Doc style guide changes:
- Add section on using sentence case in headings
  (see QubesOS/qubes-issues#6756 and #1173)
- Improve section organization
- Clarify language

In order to better preserve the Git history of each file, file renames
will be handled in a separate commit.
2021-07-08 08:08:57 -07:00
Dave Smith
64b1015e17
Reduce Windows confusion in renamed 'Installation medium preparation' section 2021-07-07 22:12:46 -05:00
deeplow
f4e726c818
minor changes 2021-07-06 20:33:54 +00:00
deeplow
9d2bc4341f
Replace all BIOS mentions with BIOS/UEFI 2021-07-06 20:27:05 +00:00
deeplow
a448289442
remove duplicated information about boot device 2021-07-06 20:18:03 +00:00
deeplow
b3d9e00bae
Update installation-guide.md 2021-07-06 20:01:55 +00:00
gw0
ad6bcf7fb4 Update resume-suspend-troubleshooting.md 2021-07-06 13:19:15 +02:00
Andrew David Wong
9d390bdb0d
Use Markdown syntax instead of HTML
Although the HTML tags are technically correct, it's probably more
important to preserve source readability and avoid the problems that
HTML-in-Markdown poses for localization and offline documentation.
2021-07-06 02:06:50 -07:00
deeplow
9e0de52023
add info on boot menu (part 1) 2021-07-05 18:41:06 +00:00
Andrew David Wong
0b5e3005c2
Document template testing; improve related docs
- Document template testing repos
- Introduce dom0 testing repos
- Cross-link dom0 and domU testing repo sections
- Link to template testing section from related sections
- Add pointer to installing templates
- Minor improvements and fixes

Thanks to @GWeck for pointing out the need for this in:
https://forum.qubes-os.org/t/fedora-34-template-available-for-testing/4904/4
2021-07-05 06:09:42 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
41ed804361
Wrap text; improve wording 2021-07-05 05:35:57 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
440ca6a597
Update Whonix links; add Privacy Policy links 2021-07-05 05:26:21 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
bae794951d
Capitalize second word in title case compound adjectives
https://github.com/QubesOS/qubes-issues/issues/6756#issuecomment-873385039
2021-07-04 03:35:59 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
28bfb5c224
Capitalize second word in title case compound adjectives
https://github.com/QubesOS/qubes-issues/issues/6756#issuecomment-873385039
2021-07-03 15:43:16 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
86cdf83aed
Merge branch 'patch-2' of https://github.com/ninavizz/qubes-doc into ninavizz-patch-2 2021-07-03 04:19:16 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
3806744ce0
Fix capitalization
https://github.com/QubesOS/qubes-doc/pull/1169/files#r663353238
2021-07-03 04:18:32 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
5220089b53
Update references to "Getting Started"
QubesOS/qubes-issues#6756
2021-07-03 03:46:27 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
ca109b05c7
Change name back to "Getting Started" and move to intro
QubesOS/qubes-issues#6756
2021-07-03 03:40:13 -07:00
Nina Eleanor Alter
dc0433edcd
Update how-to-use-block-storage-devices.md
Remove use of the phrase "GUI" and specifically speak to the "Devices WIdget." Especially since it is now referenced in the Getting Started section, which should cross-link, here.
2021-07-02 14:58:59 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
baa1df911c
Update Qubes Forum URLs 2021-07-01 07:03:05 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
d9b061f8f7
Copyedit 2021-06-26 06:24:32 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
871d281320
Update title and permalink to match filename 2021-06-26 06:10:49 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
10cdaf3cdf
Fix filename to conform to section naming scheme 2021-06-26 06:09:15 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
0c699de048
Merge branch 'skip-autostart' of https://github.com/fepitre/qubes-doc into fepitre-skip-autostart 2021-06-26 06:06:01 -07:00
Marek Marczykowski-Górecki
4017d11de3
Run script to add 'ref' parameters 2021-06-24 18:19:05 +02:00
Marek Marczykowski-Górecki
1d40a958c2
Sort frontmatter entries
Again, this makes scripted modifications easier.
2021-06-24 16:10:26 +02:00
Marek Marczykowski-Górecki
3806ecf338
Remove extra newlines at the beginning/end of files
Those are redundant, and yaml parser strips them in fact. By removing
them, loading and saving yaml file without any change indeed produce the
same output. This is useful for prepare_for_translation.py script (which
adds lang and ref tags) - to produce only change that indeed was made.
2021-06-24 16:07:23 +02:00
Frédéric Pierret (fepitre)
bccc64d480
skip-autostart: precise supported releases and modes 2021-06-23 18:46:20 +02:00
Frédéric Pierret (fepitre)
069c805d04
troubleshooting: add qubes.skip_autostart
Related QubesOS/qubes-issues#4312
2021-06-23 16:28:03 +02:00
Andrew David Wong
3b700bfa63
Update "Standalones and HVMs"
- Add and update links
- Update terminology
- Fix and improve syntax
- Clarify command-line variables
- Fix headings
- Improve language
- Make syntax consistent
- Remove deprecated and inaccurate information
- Improve grammar and orthography
- Fix typos
- Wrap text

Related to #1164
2021-06-23 01:48:00 -07:00
deeplow
3b4c9bf434
Make replaceable text like <THIS> instead of <this> 2021-06-23 07:55:18 +00:00
Andrew David Wong
d145143261
Update Qubes Canary page link 2021-06-22 10:55:21 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
6cc2f9932b
Update QSB page link 2021-06-22 10:50:12 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
6fa8777f37
Clarify and simplify language 2021-06-22 06:56:10 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
c2397776ac
Merge branch 'patch-1' of https://github.com/ninavizz/qubes-doc into ninavizz-patch-1 2021-06-22 06:47:22 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
f97eaa7b94
Move HCL listing page to main repo
This file contains no significant content.
2021-06-22 01:26:38 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
a015f60087
Fix links 2021-06-21 18:39:21 -07:00
Nina Eleanor Alter
6547239de9
Update how-to-get-started.md
- Added line-item for "Clipboard" widget in 'Unique Items' area
- Re-ordered bulleted items to follow L-R ordering of items in image
2021-06-21 15:42:50 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
1e7a76ffa7
Fix capitalization 2021-06-21 04:12:33 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
74a547ae14
Update "How to Use Disposables"
- Restore old redirect
- Add glossary links
- Update terms
- Fix capitalization
2021-06-21 04:06:25 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
527a2eb339
Update links 2021-06-21 00:38:18 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
58200e52ce
Add glossary links; improve wording 2021-06-20 22:50:30 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
7d30b685bf
Update title for accuracy 2021-06-20 22:49:41 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
d31155a89e
Add entry for "management qube" 2021-06-20 22:49:09 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
435f2f655e
Update "How to Update"
- Create new "Command-line interface" section
- Move warning about direct commands to new section
- Move info about qubesctl commands and testing repos to new section
- Revise "Upgrading" section
2021-06-20 22:27:43 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
7c83d84381
Fix link; add section on installing software 2021-06-20 22:01:01 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
3b0c0be9be
Steer newbies toward easy upgrade method even more 2021-06-20 21:55:36 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
bc138e0dc4
Update links 2021-06-20 21:54:36 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
87948a3d0d
Update URL to match title 2021-06-20 20:55:57 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
92016a6ba1
Update "How to Install Software"
- Improve intro
- Make key instruction steps harder to miss
- Add "Troubleshooting" section
- Move text on updating standalones to "Standalones and HVMs"
2021-06-20 20:43:43 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
dffa3502fd
Update "Templates"
- Add links
- Improve formatting
- Improve command examples
- Add related information
- Improve language
- Improve inheritance and persistence table
- Update terminology
- Wrap text
2021-06-20 20:03:48 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
09ba96bbd6
Rename "awesome" to "AwesomeWM"; update image, links
Based on examining the AwesomeWM project's web presences and Wikipedia
entry, there does not appear to be a single consistent name by which the
project refers to its window manager. All three of these variations are
used: "awesome", "Awesome", and "AwesomeWM". In order to avoid ambiguity
with the regular English word, we're opting for "AwesomeWM" in our own
documentation.

This commit also reverts the change to the widget image, since that
change was not necessary (see #1161).

Finally, this commit adds links to the KDE, i3, and AwesomeWM pages.
2021-06-20 19:04:09 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
0b95303b3c
Merge branch 'patch-1' of https://github.com/ninavizz/qubes-doc into ninavizz-patch-1 2021-06-20 18:46:46 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
61c38685ef
Add trailing slash 2021-06-20 18:27:31 -07:00
noskb
1e469ea089
Fix redirect to 404 from /doc/disposablevm
The link appears on the first page of a search result for "qubes disposable", but it is not redirecting correctly.
2021-06-21 00:38:18 +00:00
Nina Eleanor Alter
3cca147caa
Update how-to-get-started.md
- Updated image to match wording to names shown above
- Edited "custom" to "unique" wrt "unique to qubes," as sdwdate is not custom _to_ qubes, but is unique(ish) to Qubes.
- Included bullet for Whonix widget, w/ link-out
- Capitalized "A" on Awesome in desktop environments
2021-06-20 15:47:56 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
6a88601739
Update "Testing New Releases and Updates"
- Convert alert into text warning
  (Now that every advanced page has the same sticky alert at the top,
  it looks odd to have similar alerts above and below the h1 heading.)
- Update heading syntax
- Wrap text
2021-06-19 21:06:40 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
f490482273
Update "How to Install Software in Dom0"
- Convert alert into text warning
  (Now that every advanced page has the same sticky alert at the top,
  it looks odd to have similar alerts above and below the h1 heading.)
- Fix headings
- Fix syntax
- Wrap text
2021-06-19 21:01:26 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
cc839fc10a
Move "Version Scheme" to developer docs
This page appears to be written for a developer audience.
2021-06-19 20:41:11 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
2dbc8865e1
Use doc layout instead of sidebar layout
There appears to be no strong reason that these pages are using a
different layout, and having this separate layout significantly
increases the ongoing doc maintenance burden.
2021-06-19 20:39:34 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
04d3ead8bf
Fix "Notes" heading; update heading syntax 2021-06-19 20:06:33 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
a2511357a7
Mark pages as advanced 2021-06-19 02:36:05 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
7e3bc9511f
Update "Minimal Templates"
- Mark as advanced page
- Revise introduction
- Move list of available templates to new section
- Clarify installation commands
- Fix language and syntax errors
- Wrap text
2021-06-19 02:15:40 -07:00
deeplow
b9b49c4d2b
Mention why one would use minimal templates
Content credit: SvenSemmler https://qubes-os.discourse.group/t/debian-10-minimal-configuration/2603/54
2021-06-19 08:05:57 +00:00
Andrew David Wong
7c0a29a253
Add entry for "netvm" 2021-06-18 22:27:46 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
0a53418de1
Update glossary
- Add entry for "admin qube"
- Add entry for "named disposable" (QubesOS/qubes-issues#6709)
- Clarify disposable-related definitions (QubesOS/qubes-issues#6709)
- Add "previously known as" terms
- Clarify wording in various entries
2021-06-18 20:34:02 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
ba232b6b58
Improve organization and wording; fix typos 2021-06-18 12:23:43 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
b3c61ed5c0
Clarify definitions 2021-06-18 12:08:33 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
c178da955e
Update "How to Install Software"
- Explicitly state that software should be installed in a template
- Add a note for advanced users who might be interested in installing
  software in standalones and dom0
- Fix Markdown syntax and formatting
- Wrap text
2021-06-18 06:58:10 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
3d1d8bf37e
Update links 2021-06-18 06:47:40 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
f50d543155
Fix errors 2021-06-18 06:42:30 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
2c7982d391
Restore capitalization 2021-06-18 06:35:43 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
07c130df00
Wrap text and miscellaneous cleanup 2021-06-18 06:25:06 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
e451f92cde
Update attachment paths 2021-06-18 05:46:02 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
60bd80ad25
Revert "Update attachment paths"
This reverts commit e5a21f7488.
2021-06-18 05:39:47 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
e5a21f7488
Update attachment paths 2021-06-18 05:02:02 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
50270f435c
Fix links 2021-06-18 03:09:09 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
88a4e0a4b5
Fix links 2021-06-18 02:59:26 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
2ae0ce9524
Mass replace "StandaloneVM" with "standalone"
Also updates the "Standalones and HVM" page.

QubesOS/qubes-issues#1015
2021-06-18 02:29:28 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
63498a6c17
Mass replace "TemplateVM" with "template"
QubesOS/qubes-issues#1015
2021-06-18 02:16:40 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
c07ee61ed8
Mass replace "DisposableVM" with "disposable"
QubesOS/qubes-issues#1015
2021-06-18 02:04:39 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
aea595397f
Mass replace "AppVM" and "TemplateBasedVM" with "app qube"
QubesOS/qubes-issues#1015
2021-06-18 01:55:53 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
719836c9f3
Replace "template-based qube" with "app qube"
See #748 and the glossary.
2021-06-18 01:34:07 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
132030119f
Update "How to Install Software"
- Update terminology (QubesOS/qubes-issues#1015)
- Add section on lack of template network access
- Move advanced topics to "Advanced" section
- Miscellaneous improvements
2021-06-18 01:25:09 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
4f3c513422
Update template doc
- Replace "TemplateVM" with "template" (QubesOS/qubes-issues#1015)
- Update other terminology
- Miscellaneous improvements
2021-06-18 01:22:23 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
e9fe17f2f2
Fix link text capitalization 2021-06-18 01:21:40 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
873da01b7b
Shorten "standalone qube" to "standalone"
Similar to "templates" and "disposables."
QubesOS/qubes-issues#1015
2021-06-18 01:19:44 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
7652e7edf8
Revamp glossary
- Replace "VM" with "qube" (QubesOS/qubes-issues#1015)
- Remove deprecated terms
- Remove some terms that are not Qubes-specific
- Alphabetize entries
- Miscellaneous improvements
2021-06-18 00:48:17 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
7f54374791
Merge branch 'patch-19' of https://github.com/deeplow/qubes-doc into deeplow-patch-19 2021-06-17 11:22:48 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
74eb0d923a
Restore language indicating examples 2021-06-17 11:22:34 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
dc4fee50e0
Merge branch 'patch-19' of https://github.com/deeplow/qubes-doc into deeplow-patch-19 2021-06-17 11:21:16 -07:00