I did not modify any of the content itself; just presented it more clearly by:
- Modifying unnecessarily wordy phrases
- Fixing grammatical mistakes
- Partitioning run-on sentences
- Reduced Word Re-use
- Removed unnecessary commas
- Formatted each individual typographic convention consistently
- Made misc. changes to improve clarity and make the text more evocative
I did not modify any of the content itself; just presented it more clearly by:
- Modifying unnecessarily wordy phrases
- Fixing grammatical mistakes
- Partitioning run-on sentences
- Reduced Word Re-use
- Made misc. changes to improve clarity and make the text more evocative