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stubbybubby
b17c0fc7fe Insignificantly edit security-goals.md
* Word go away
* Switch for better word
* Added one instance of "these" because it helps flow and provides context
* Removed unneeded parentheses
2017-04-16 14:11:04 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
292bc2852f
Merge branch 'modulistic-patch-1' 2017-04-16 14:08:38 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
d06b42091c
Merge branch 'patch-1' of https://github.com/modulistic/qubes-doc into modulistic-patch-1 2017-04-16 14:08:11 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
c2f5d753a0
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-9' 2017-04-16 14:04:56 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
08b7645843
Merge branch 'patch-9' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-9 2017-04-16 14:03:45 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
aa4b1ee2f4
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-8' 2017-04-16 14:01:58 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
57ba87a072
Merge branch 'patch-8' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-8 2017-04-16 14:01:47 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
b5949f9e16
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-7' 2017-04-16 14:00:15 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
22fa4b094e
Merge branch 'patch-7' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-7 2017-04-16 13:59:58 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
31af27b0c8
Merge branch 'mdickers47-templates' 2017-04-16 13:48:08 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
f3e2b3663a
Merge branch 'templates' of https://github.com/mdickers47/qubes-doc into mdickers47-templates 2017-04-16 13:47:58 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
534531d496
Merge branch 'mdickers47-signal' 2017-04-16 13:46:58 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
c687252da6
Merge branch 'signal' of https://github.com/mdickers47/qubes-doc into mdickers47-signal 2017-04-16 13:46:17 -07:00
stubbybubby
9dae08e2a6 Fix grammar and flow
Fixed problems related to:
* Unnecessary wordiness
* Subject-Verb Agreement
* Typos
* Not creating newline at end of sentence as per documentation guidelines.
* Putting sentences where they logically needed to be
* Adding articles where necessary
* Added descriptions of links that just used the URL as the display text

I don't understand some of the information here, so tell me if any of the fixes I made inadvertently created inaccuracies.
2017-04-16 13:32:52 -07:00
stubbybubby
a8e6f221f9 Edit pentesting.md
Updated the wikipedia definition to reflect what's on the page (which is a more accurate definition anyways). It's a little heavy, but since the sentence has quotation marks we should be basing it on a direct quote from the article and not a paraphrase. If you want to paraphrase it because it's dense someone else can come and remove those quotation marks and write their own defintion. 

While I did not modify the source, I also want to ask that we not source information from the wikipedia article itself, but rather the sources that it references in its footnotes. 

Also:
* Missing a lette
* Removed unnecessary word glyphs
2017-04-16 12:53:50 -07:00
stubbybubby
21232dd492 Update to guidelines, remove some parentheses
Removed some unnecessary parentheses around entire sentences and completely relevant clauses. Also expanded the Using PGP with Email section to provide more detail.

Also made newlines at the end of sentences as per the doc guidelines.
2017-04-16 12:36:17 -07:00
stubbybubby
824618d805 Edit/Rewrite security-guidelines.md
A few content changes, read over them to see if you like them:
* A few sentences were reworded so that end users could understand them better, without sacrificing detail. 
* Sometimes more detail was added to give context to sentences or to make them more accurate.
* New sentences were added to help transitions in thought.
* New sentences were added to provide reasoning to earlier instructions so that the reader knew why they were important.

None of these content changes were particularly extensive or clashed with the original paper but they do change the meaning a bit, so I thought it important to document them.

Other changes:
* Subject-verb agreement
* Corrected some parentheses placements
* Misc. Grammar Fixes
* Inserted forgotten commas and periods
* Word variation
* Rework on some sentences that had really roundabout ways of saying things

In addition to my PR being a big edit, it is also on an important document. I have looked over my changes well and I know you will too. Reply if anything needs fixing/changing in the PR.

I have more changes that I want to add, but I figured I had edited the document enough already and if I added anythign else or made more extensive modifications it might be hard to tell what exactly I did.
2017-04-15 22:34:37 -07:00
Marek Marczykowski-Górecki
9b3b0ffd04
mgmt1: add mgmt.label.Index and events clarification 2017-04-15 13:59:22 +02:00
Mikey Dickerson
eb3f685c56 sudo not necessary here 2017-04-14 18:28:25 -04:00
Mikey Dickerson
1314e8c1d1 Add an important missing step, to restart VMs
Also provide an example of how to copy a file to another VM.
2017-04-14 01:57:45 -04:00
stubbybubby
5c089ca17f Edit certified-laptops.md
* Removed redundant phrases
* Grammar fixes
* Diversified language
2017-04-11 21:45:51 -07:00
Marek Marczykowski-Górecki
8f53500944
mgmt: add redirect from /doc/mgmt/ 2017-04-10 01:41:46 +02:00
Marek Marczykowski-Górecki
e6d9a97e8b
mgmt: clarifications, add mgmt.Events 2017-04-10 01:40:24 +02:00
Andrew David Wong
d46e86df52
Merge branch 'h01ger-master' 2017-04-06 05:02:49 -07:00
Holger Levsen
a45e7f8b13 fix typo
Signed-off-by: Holger Levsen <holger@layer-acht.org>
2017-04-06 12:53:49 +02:00
Pablo Costa
2b60fc203b Update user-faq.md about keyboard layout
Small improvements
2017-04-05 12:21:57 +02:00
Andrew David Wong
281665c136
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-3' 2017-04-04 21:54:55 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
e25f8d831c
Merge branch 'patch-3' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-3 2017-04-04 21:54:35 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
ec11e5ab59
Fix link 2017-04-04 21:52:06 -07:00
stubbybubby
32f2dd64cd Fixed grammar mistake 2017-04-04 16:13:11 -07:00
Pablo Costa
eea10c7141 Update user-faq.md about keyboard layout
I know this feels like a workaround for some misbehaving/missing UI, but it is better than the reference to the ML discussion, and it links to the open issue.

I have not done extensive testing to this method. I am sending the PR in a hurry because I have been frustrated (missing my compose-key) for some days after reinstalling, and I think this may prove useful for other users. Please try to reproduce and/or get some community feedback before accepting the PR;  Also, feel free to reword, reformat, or discard :)
2017-04-05 00:47:03 +02:00
Andrew David Wong
85249be4c9
Merge branch 'kulinacs-building-non-fedora-template-cleanup' 2017-04-04 07:58:37 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
177686a772
Merge branch 'building-non-fedora-template-cleanup' of https://github.com/kulinacs/qubes-doc into kulinacs-building-non-fedora-template-cleanup 2017-04-04 07:58:12 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
3499d2a1c2
Add XSA-212 2017-04-04 06:29:57 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
05e521ea28
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-5' 2017-04-02 21:12:02 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
0177d6fc81
Merge branch 'patch-5' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-5 2017-04-02 21:11:41 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
f718b07eed
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-4' 2017-04-02 21:04:11 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
f52bf8a3ec
Merge branch 'patch-4' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-4 2017-04-02 21:03:54 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
dc19774f67
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-1' 2017-04-02 21:01:35 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
3ca3f1f1a6
Minor grammar fix 2017-04-02 21:01:17 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
28a28d30c5
Merge branch 'patch-1' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-1 2017-04-02 20:35:14 -07:00
stubbybubby
3db69ad702 Rewrite parts of usability-ux.md
This proposed file changes probably includes some content changes, but ones I hope you'll immediately agree with because the result is a more accurate article.

Among other things,
* Removed unnecessarily prudent logical connection phrases like "thus," and just replaced them with "because" and "as a result" where I could.
* Moved some sentences or clarifications to their proper sections, e.g. moved the "Despite this rule, some acronyms..." line to the Avoid Acronyms section.
* Removed some sentences (like "Additionally, security focused software has the responsibility of providing safety to the user and their data") that, while true, without proper context did not seem relevant to the article.
* Removed some phrases that repeated known contextual information like "of usability and experience" in "if you are interested in furthering your understanding of usability and experience" or "which are shown to a user" in "notifications which are shown to a user".
* Introduced some clauses or phrases that clarified information, like adding "of those mentioned" to "All three desktop environments have their own human interface guidelines,"
* Merged the Avoid Repetitive Tasks and Minimize Repetitive Steps sections.
* Rewrote some sentences that were incomplete or didn't make sense into what I assumed the writer intended to say.
* Inserted possessive's' when they were necessary, and turned bigger sentences into smaller ones using possessives when I could ("notification messages presented to user" --> "user's notification messages")
* Grammar edits
* Compartmentalized run-on sentences.

This was a pretty big edit, so you'll probably disagree with some of the changes. Just explain what you want to be re-done or where my edits changes an important meaning/formed an inaccuracy and I will make another commit.
2017-04-02 11:57:54 -07:00
stubbybubby
49957fc5d7 Minor fix of missing article
"contributed majority of Qubes-specific code" --> "contributed the majority of Qubes-specific code"
2017-04-02 10:46:49 -07:00
stubbybubby
99a5879734 Fix minor grammar issues
Inserted apostrophe's' when necessary and fixed the placement of a few conjunctions.
2017-04-02 10:38:16 -07:00
stubbybubby
a94bdbd27f Fixed a typo in first paragraph. 2017-04-02 10:19:38 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
0b4d98d08e
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-stubbybubby-doc-guidelines-edit' 2017-04-01 18:12:48 -07:00
stubbybubby
66c32bc8d7 Small edits to vpn.md
A few new or revised sentences in the goal of accuracy. Also fixed some grammar issues and simplified some roundabout phrases.
2017-04-01 12:09:04 -07:00
stubbybubby
2fd18ea73a Edit doc-guidelines.md
* Reduced Word Reuse
* Inserted words where necessary
* Removed words when possible
2017-04-01 08:53:06 -07:00
stubbybubby
e5be4109c5 Edit contributing.md
Removed one minor instance of e.g. to prevent word/phrase reuse
2017-04-01 08:29:25 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
50b7f85a8a
Merge branch 'jpouellet-fix-thompson-link' 2017-03-31 15:09:23 -07:00