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Author SHA1 Message Date
Andrew David Wong
e12771a583
Merge branch 'unman-1943' 2017-04-21 18:23:26 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
c0ad487b6c
Merge branch '1943' of https://github.com/unman/qubes-doc into unman-1943 2017-04-21 18:23:03 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
2051219471
Merge branch 'elimisteve-patch-1' 2017-04-21 18:21:00 -07:00
Steve Phillips
ec2361682a usb.md typo fix: Stating -> Starting 2017-04-21 06:16:47 -07:00
Holger Levsen
4ae685b5ca update example how to upgrade the dom0 kernel and the kernel used in the VMs.
Signed-off-by: Holger Levsen <holger@layer-acht.org>
2017-04-20 20:53:42 +02:00
unman
9d40292bf9
Explain how to boot with HVM kernel errors. 2017-04-19 23:27:01 +01:00
stubbybubby
a874b29c40 Small Edit to hcl.md
* Expanded Introduction
* Finished unfinished sentences
* Moved some sentences
2017-04-19 11:09:28 -07:00
Steve Phillips
71874d4c85 copying-files.md: fixed 2 typos 2017-04-19 02:06:54 -07:00
Steve Phillips
8335f12d02 copying-files.md typo: copying -> copied 2017-04-19 02:04:18 -07:00
Marek Marczykowski-Górecki
db83e7fd5f
Add more UEFI troubleshooting instructions 2017-04-18 21:27:26 +02:00
Jean-Philippe Ouellet
4ebaebce05
Use qubesos.github.io belonging to this repo owner
rather than always QubesOS/...
2017-04-18 00:44:15 -04:00
Jean-Philippe Ouellet
6b78f16f70
Add .travis.yml
for now just testing qubesos.github.io master
2017-04-18 00:28:34 -04:00
stubbybubby
4a7c5b040f Rewrite last sentence. 2017-04-17 17:25:10 -07:00
stubbybubby
75fe1b766a Change a word 2017-04-17 17:24:04 -07:00
stubbybubby
21d370bcb1 Update security.md 2017-04-17 17:18:46 -07:00
stubbybubby
469ca0c5e2 Revert previous commit
That was weird. Iw as sure they were dead links.
2017-04-17 17:11:51 -07:00
stubbybubby
96417f3eae Insignificantly edit martus.md
Modified the list heading to be grammatically correct.
2017-04-17 12:56:54 -07:00
stubbybubby
ce14889426 Significantly edit automated-tests.md
Lots of grammar/phrasing modifications. None of it really changed the meaning, except for maybe a few cheekily inserted adjectives, however.

Fixed:
* Missing articles
* Missing words
* Too many words
* Incorrect use of phrases and prepositions
* Sentences with wrong structures entirely
2017-04-17 11:38:25 -07:00
stubbybubby
49ed1a215f Minor format
Moved two sentences to the bullet points of "Before you submit a bug report" section where they belonged.
2017-04-17 11:35:08 -07:00
stubbybubby
d3b5fd0b45 Add Information to tails.md
Extended the description of the Tails operating system, and the security considerations when running it under virtualization software. Also added a "See Also" section.

Also:
* Newline at end of sentence
* Someone wrote part of the document in first person
* Reformatted issues section
* Misc grammar fixes
2017-04-17 10:49:21 -07:00
stubbybubby
ae5dbf4226 Rewrite rest of document
* Extended answers/questions to be full, grammatically correct, complete sentences
* Explained acronyms
* Missing periods
* New sentence to add explanation
* Removed unnecessary newlines at end of document
* Newline at end of sentences
2017-04-17 09:39:03 -07:00
stubbybubby
d4dfff52e8 Rewrite 'Why does dom0 need to be 64-bit"
In order to prevent what happened last time, I'm going to edit this document piecemeal so you can choose which PRs to accept and which to reject.

* Partitioned run on sentences
* Cleaned up wording.
* Newline at end of sentences.
2017-04-17 09:26:10 -07:00
stubbybubby
97ffdadf25 Minor edit of templates.md
* Missing letters
* Removed words in a sentence
* Removed a letter
* I should probably just write a script that correctly formats the placement of newlines in these documents.
2017-04-17 09:14:19 -07:00
stubbybubby
23726eb505 Remove dead links
Removed some dead links in the introduction.
2017-04-16 19:33:19 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
f62cfea50e
Add link to thread on compiling kernels for dom0 2017-04-16 18:15:22 -07:00
stubbybubby
f6ef88d509 Edit security.md
Rewrote two sentences + some misc grammar fixes/wording changes.
2017-04-16 17:12:31 -07:00
stubbybubby
44f8c8eb7c Edit expose-like-effect part
Updated the paragraphs to reflect the current desktop environment of QubesOS.
2017-04-16 16:55:38 -07:00
stubbybubby
848ee837e8 Modified introduction
Removed the reference to the original older qubesos introduction and made the introduction of this article a standalone statement.
2017-04-16 15:20:21 -07:00
stubbybubby
7569cf3b95 Add disclaimer and clarifications about signatures
Wrote a paragraph or two about verifying the QubesOS ISO signature and wrote a disclaimer that Qubes does not automatically verify external downloads not coming from its own repositories.
2017-04-16 15:09:04 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
75b91f6832
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-10' 2017-04-16 14:16:55 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
63def080da
Merge branch 'patch-10' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-10 2017-04-16 14:16:01 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
75b259415a
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-2' 2017-04-16 14:14:41 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
e4b169e7ee
Merge branch 'patch-2' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-2 2017-04-16 14:13:45 -07:00
stubbybubby
b17c0fc7fe Insignificantly edit security-goals.md
* Word go away
* Switch for better word
* Added one instance of "these" because it helps flow and provides context
* Removed unneeded parentheses
2017-04-16 14:11:04 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
292bc2852f
Merge branch 'modulistic-patch-1' 2017-04-16 14:08:38 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
d06b42091c
Merge branch 'patch-1' of https://github.com/modulistic/qubes-doc into modulistic-patch-1 2017-04-16 14:08:11 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
c2f5d753a0
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-9' 2017-04-16 14:04:56 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
08b7645843
Merge branch 'patch-9' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-9 2017-04-16 14:03:45 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
aa4b1ee2f4
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-8' 2017-04-16 14:01:58 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
57ba87a072
Merge branch 'patch-8' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-8 2017-04-16 14:01:47 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
b5949f9e16
Merge branch 'stubbybubby-patch-7' 2017-04-16 14:00:15 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
22fa4b094e
Merge branch 'patch-7' of https://github.com/stubbybubby/qubes-doc into stubbybubby-patch-7 2017-04-16 13:59:58 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
31af27b0c8
Merge branch 'mdickers47-templates' 2017-04-16 13:48:08 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
f3e2b3663a
Merge branch 'templates' of https://github.com/mdickers47/qubes-doc into mdickers47-templates 2017-04-16 13:47:58 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
534531d496
Merge branch 'mdickers47-signal' 2017-04-16 13:46:58 -07:00
Andrew David Wong
c687252da6
Merge branch 'signal' of https://github.com/mdickers47/qubes-doc into mdickers47-signal 2017-04-16 13:46:17 -07:00
stubbybubby
9dae08e2a6 Fix grammar and flow
Fixed problems related to:
* Unnecessary wordiness
* Subject-Verb Agreement
* Typos
* Not creating newline at end of sentence as per documentation guidelines.
* Putting sentences where they logically needed to be
* Adding articles where necessary
* Added descriptions of links that just used the URL as the display text

I don't understand some of the information here, so tell me if any of the fixes I made inadvertently created inaccuracies.
2017-04-16 13:32:52 -07:00
stubbybubby
a8e6f221f9 Edit pentesting.md
Updated the wikipedia definition to reflect what's on the page (which is a more accurate definition anyways). It's a little heavy, but since the sentence has quotation marks we should be basing it on a direct quote from the article and not a paraphrase. If you want to paraphrase it because it's dense someone else can come and remove those quotation marks and write their own defintion. 

While I did not modify the source, I also want to ask that we not source information from the wikipedia article itself, but rather the sources that it references in its footnotes. 

Also:
* Missing a lette
* Removed unnecessary word glyphs
2017-04-16 12:53:50 -07:00
stubbybubby
21232dd492 Update to guidelines, remove some parentheses
Removed some unnecessary parentheses around entire sentences and completely relevant clauses. Also expanded the Using PGP with Email section to provide more detail.

Also made newlines at the end of sentences as per the doc guidelines.
2017-04-16 12:36:17 -07:00
stubbybubby
824618d805 Edit/Rewrite security-guidelines.md
A few content changes, read over them to see if you like them:
* A few sentences were reworded so that end users could understand them better, without sacrificing detail. 
* Sometimes more detail was added to give context to sentences or to make them more accurate.
* New sentences were added to help transitions in thought.
* New sentences were added to provide reasoning to earlier instructions so that the reader knew why they were important.

None of these content changes were particularly extensive or clashed with the original paper but they do change the meaning a bit, so I thought it important to document them.

Other changes:
* Subject-verb agreement
* Corrected some parentheses placements
* Misc. Grammar Fixes
* Inserted forgotten commas and periods
* Word variation
* Rework on some sentences that had really roundabout ways of saying things

In addition to my PR being a big edit, it is also on an important document. I have looked over my changes well and I know you will too. Reply if anything needs fixing/changing in the PR.

I have more changes that I want to add, but I figured I had edited the document enough already and if I added anythign else or made more extensive modifications it might be hard to tell what exactly I did.
2017-04-15 22:34:37 -07:00