some small typos & grammar changes

QubesOS/qubes-issues#938
This commit is contained in:
Brennan Novak 2016-04-22 15:14:42 +02:00 committed by Axon
parent 8c1beafc8b
commit f6b74c682d

View File

@ -46,11 +46,11 @@ Type=oneshot
WantedBy=multi-user.target
```
**Make sure you get the right iface names**
**Get the right iface names**
It is crucial to get the correct **iface name** for the devices (ethernet and wifi) that you want to randomize. To do
that, open your `sys-net` (or where your device drivers are) and type in `terminal` the command `ifconfig` the printout
will look similar to:
It's crucial to get the correct **iface name** for the devices (ethernet and wifi) you want to randomize. To get this,
open your `sys-net` (or wherever your device drivers are) and type in `terminal` the command `ifconfig` the printout
will look like:
```
enp0s0: flags=4099<UP,BROADCAST,MULTICAST> mtu 1500
@ -80,11 +80,12 @@ wlp0s1: flags=4163<UP,BROADCAST,RUNNING,MULTICAST> mtu 1500
TX errors 0 dropped 0 overruns 0 carrier 0 collisions 0
```
The **iface name** values you are interested in are `enp0s0` and `wlp0s1` as those represent your ethernet and wifi
The **iface name** values you're interested in are `enp0s0` and `wlp0s1` as those represent your ethernet and wifi
devices, respectively.
Also, in this blob of text is your **actual MAC addresses** which you will use to verify the randomizing is working
correctly. In this example, those addresses are `ether 9e:d6:53:02:4b:b6` and `ether 06:6d:70:a8:7b:35` respectively.
Also, in this prinout is your **actual MAC addresses** which are needed to verify the randomizing is working correctly.
In this example, the ethernet and wifi addresses are `ether 9e:d6:53:02:4b:b6` and `ether 06:6d:70:a8:7b:35`
respectively. *Copy these MAC addresses down somewhere for later.*
Now, go back to your `fedora-23` TemplateVM and use the `touch` command to create service files in the appropriate
place, note that the `iface name` values at the end:
@ -130,9 +131,12 @@ To verify this worked corectly, look at the `Services` pane of your VM Settings
![sys-net Services Pane](/attachment/wiki/QubesScreenshots/r3rc1-sys-net-services.png)
Your MAC address should now randomize each time you restart your computer or restart the `sys-net` VM. To verify this
for sure, go back to your `sys-net` or device VM and type `ifconfig` and look at the values that start with `ether` such
as `ether 9e:d6:53:02:4b:b6` which should now look different.
**Verify it works**
Go back to your `sys-net` VM terminal, type `ifconfig` and look at the values starting with `ether` such as `ether
9e:d6:53:02:4b:b6` which should now look different from the previous values.
Your MAC address should now randomize each time you restart your computer or restart the `sys-net` VM.
---