From f5d1dd53ee5da834db8dc6832343ba419d08496a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: pierwill <19642016+pierwill@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 21 May 2018 23:28:05 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Edit ibus-pinyin setup guide

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 customization/language-localization.md | 27 +++++++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/customization/language-localization.md b/customization/language-localization.md
index fa95faf5..79c22558 100644
--- a/customization/language-localization.md
+++ b/customization/language-localization.md
@@ -14,28 +14,33 @@ Language Localization
 How to set up pinyin input in Qubes
 -----------------------------------
 
-1. In the TemplateVM in which the AppVMs you would like to use pinyin input is based, please install `ibus-pinyin` via the package manager or terminal. If the template is Fedora-based, run `sudo dnf install ibus-pinyin`, if the template is Debian-based, run `sudo apt install ibus-pinyin` 
+The pinyin input method will be installed in a TemplateVM to make it available after restarts and across multiple AppVMs.
 
-2. Close and shut down the TemplateVM. 
+1. In a TemplateVM, install `ibus-pinyin` via the package manager or terminal.
+   If the template is Fedora-based, run `sudo dnf install ibus-pinyin`.
+   If the template is Debian-based, run `sudo apt install ibus-pinyin`
 
-3. Restart an AppVM which is based on the template you installed `ibus-pinyin` in, and open a terminal.
- 
-4. Run `ibus-setup`
+2. Shut down the TemplateVM.
 
-5. You will likely get the error message telling you to paste the following into your bashrc:
+3. Start or restart an AppVM based on the template in which you installed `ibus-pinyin` and open a terminal.
+
+4. Run `ibus-setup`.
+
+5. You will likely get an error message telling you to paste the following into your bashrc:
 
         export GTK_IM_MODULE=ibus
         export XMODIFIERS=@im=ibus
         export QT_IM_MODULE=ibus
 
    Copy the text into your `~/.bashrc` file with your favorite text editor.
-   You will need to do this on any AppVM in which you wish to use pinyin input.
+   You will need to do this for any AppVM in which you wish to use pinyin input.
 
-6. Set up ibus input as you like using the graphical menu (add pinyin or intelligent pinyin to selections). You can bring the menu back by issuing `ibus-setup` from a terminal. 
+6. Set up ibus input as you like using the graphical menu (add pinyin or intelligent pinyin to selections).
+   You can bring the menu back by issuing `ibus-setup` from a terminal.
 
-7. Set up your shortcut for switching between inputs, by default it is super-space.
+7. Set up your shortcut for switching between inputs.
+   By default it is super-space.
 
-If ibus-pinyin is not enabled when you restart one of these AppVMs, open a terminal and run `ibus-setup` to activate ibus again. 
+If `ibus-pinyin` is not enabled when you restart one of these AppVMs, open a terminal and run `ibus-setup` to activate ibus again.
 
 For further discussion, see [this qubes-users thread](https://groups.google.com/forum/#!searchin/qubes-users/languge/qubes-users/VcNPlhdgVQM/iF9PqSzayacJ).
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