From e03304c8b3dc47c78de1290318c7677ad9484e18 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dean V Date: Mon, 24 Apr 2017 09:47:59 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Edit whonix.md * Removed some redundant or unnecessary sentences/clauses like "..and these pages may be technical" * Removed a sentence referencing a no longer existent Qubes support forum * Rephrased some sentences * Gerundified words where necessary --- privacy/whonix.md | 15 +++++---------- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/privacy/whonix.md b/privacy/whonix.md index 5db698ac..b86d6700 100644 --- a/privacy/whonix.md +++ b/privacy/whonix.md @@ -24,30 +24,25 @@ while the workstation is used for making AppVMs. ## Getting Started with Whonix -To install Whonix, you must have a working Qubes machine already. - -* [Install Whonix in Qubes](/doc/whonix/install/) +* [Installing Whonix in Qubes](/doc/whonix/install/) * [Updating Whonix in Qubes](/doc/whonix/update/) ## Customizing, Reinstalling, & Uninstalling Whonix * [Customizing Whonix](/doc/whonix/customize/) -* [Uninstall Whonix from Qubes](/doc/whonix/uninstall/) +* [Uninstalling Whonix from Qubes](/doc/whonix/uninstall/) -*The following links are on Whonix's website and may be technical.* +*The following pages are from Whonix's website.* * [Using Whonix with DisposableVMs](https://www.whonix.org/blog/qubes-whonix-dispvm) -* [Security Advice for after installing Whonix on Qubes](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Post_Install_Advice) +* [Security Advice for using Whonix on Qubes](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Post_Install_Advice) * [How to set up Tor Bridges in Whonix on Qubes](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Bridges#How_to_use_bridges_in_Whonix) * [Using Multiple Whonix-Workstations with Whonix on Qubes](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Multiple_Whonix-Workstations#Qubes-Whonix) * [How to use Corridor (a Tor traffic whitelisting gateway) with Whonix](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Corridor) ## Support for Whonix -*The following links are on Whonix's site.* +*The following pages are from Whonix's website.* * [Whonix Support](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Support) - General Whonix, Debian, Tor, etc... related issues * [Whonix Qubes Forum](https://forums.whonix.org/c/qubes) - Whonix specific issues - -You can also use [Qubes support](/help/), but not all Qubes users run Whonix. -