Various minor spelling and grammar fixes

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@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ traditional Linux distros don't have to bother with:
version, sorry.
2. We discovered that the Fedora liveusb-create does *not* verify signatures on
downloaded packages. We have temporarily fixed that by creating a local repo,
verifying the signatures manually (ok, with a script ;) and then building
verifying the signatures manually (ok, with a script ;) ) and then building
from there. Sigh.
3. We had to solve the problem of Qubes too easily triggering an Out Of Memory
condition in Dom0 when running as Live OS.
@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ Live USB variant:
A nice variant of this persistence option, especially for frequent
travelers, would be to augment our backup tools so that it was
possible to create a LiveUSB-hosted backups of select VMs. One could then
pick a few of their VMs, necessary for a specific travel, back them to a
pick a few of their VMs, necessary for a specific trip, back them up to a
LiveUSB stick, and take this stick when traveling to a hostile country (not
risking taking other, more sensitive ones for the travel). This should make
life a bit simpler
@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ expectations accordingly.)
3. Currently there is no "install to disk" option. We will be adding this
in the future.
4. The amount of "disk" space is limited by the amount of RAM the laptop
has. This has a side effect of e.g. not being able to restore (even few) VMs
has. This has a side effect of e.g. not being able to restore (even a few) VMs
from a large Qubes backup blob.
5. It's easy to generate Out Of Memory (OOM) in Dom0 by creating lots of VMs
which are writing a lot into the VMs filesystem.

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@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ Now, when you have dom0 upgraded, you can install new templates from Qubes R3.0
Upgrading template on already upgraded dom0
-------------------------------------------
When for some reason you did not upgraded all the templates and standalone VMs before upgrading dom0, you can still do this, but it will be somehow more complicated. This can be a case when you restore backup done on Qubes R2.
If for some reason you did not upgrade all the templates and standalone VMs before upgrading dom0, you can still do this, but it will be somewhat more complicated. This can be a case when you restore backup done on Qubes R2.
When you start R2 template/standalone VM on R3.0, there will be some limitations:

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@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ From now on, it will be as follows.
Qubes distributions and products
--------------------------------
We intend to make it easy to make a remix of qubes, targeting another
We intend to make it easy to make a remix of Qubes, targeting another
hypervisor or isolation provider. We may also create commercial products
intended for specific circumstances. There is one distinguished distribution
called **Qubes OS**. All source code for it is available for download under GPL
@ -28,13 +28,13 @@ Release version
---------------
Qubes OS as a whole is released from time to time. Version scheme for all
releases is modeled after Linux kernel version numbers. When announcing new
releases is modeled after Linux kernel version numbers. When announcing a new
release, we decide on the major.minor version (like `3.0`) and release
`3.0-rc1`. When we feel that enough progress has been made, we put `3.0-rc2`
and so on. All these versions are considered unstable and not ready for
production. You may ask for support on mailing lists (specifically
**qubes-devel**), but it is not guaranteed (you may for example get answer
update to newer `-rc`”). Public ISO image may or may not be available.
update to newer `-rc`”). Public ISO image may or may not be available.
When enough development has been made, we announce the first stable version,
like e.g. `3.0.0` (i.e. without `-rc`). This version is considered stable and
@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ bugfixes as `3.0.1`, `3.0.2` and so on, while new features come into the next
release e.g. `3.1-rcX`.
Tickets in the tracker are sorted out by release major.minor, such as `3.0`,
`3.1` (trac calls this milestone”).
`3.1` (trac calls this milestone”).
Release schedule
----------------