Various minor spelling and grammar fixes

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Miguel Jacq 2017-05-11 18:48:59 +10:00
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@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ updatevm : sys-firewall
Installing different kernel using Qubes kernel package
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VM kernels are packages by Qubes team in `kernel-qubes-vm` packages. Generally system will keep the 3 newest available versions. You can list them with the `rpm` command:
VM kernels are packages by Qubes team in `kernel-qubes-vm` packages. Generally the system will keep the 3 newest available versions. You can list them with the `rpm` command:
~~~
[user@dom0 ~]$ rpm -qa 'kernel-qubes-vm*'
@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ kernel-qubes-vm-3.18.16-3.pvops.qubes.x86_64
kernel-qubes-vm-3.18.17-4.pvops.qubes.x86_64
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If you want more recent version, you can check `qubes-dom0-unstable` repository. As the name suggest, keep in
If you want a more recent version, you can check `qubes-dom0-unstable` repository. As the name suggests, keep in
mind that those packages may be less stable than the default ones.
Checking available versions in `qubes-dom0-unstable` repository:
@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ This is possible thanks to PV GRUB2 - GRUB2 running in the VM. To make it happen
1. Install PV GRUB2 in dom0 - package is named `grub2-xen`.
2. Install kernel in the VM. As with all VM software installation - this needs to be done in TemplateVM (of StandaloneVM if you are using one).
3. Set VM kernel to `pvgrub2` value. You can use `pvgrub2` in selected VMs, not necessary all of them, even when it's template has kernel installed. You can still use dom0-provided kernel for selected VMs.
3. Set VM kernel to `pvgrub2` value. You can use `pvgrub2` in selected VMs, not necessary all of them, even when its template has kernel installed. You can still use dom0-provided kernel for selected VMs.
**WARNING: When using kernel from within VM, `kernelopts` parameter is ignored.**
@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ In Fedora based VM, you need to install `qubes-kernel-vm-support` package. This
package include required additional kernel module and initramfs addition
required to start Qubes VM (for details see
[template implementation](/doc/template-implementation/)). Additionally you
need some GRUB tools to create it's configuration. Note: you don't need actual
need some GRUB tools to create its configuration. Note: you don't need actual
grub bootloader as it is provided by dom0. But having one also shouldn't harm.
~~~
@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ In Debian based VM, you need to install `qubes-kernel-vm-support` package. This
package include required additional kernel module and initramfs addition
required to start Qubes VM (for details see
[template implementation](/doc/template-implementation/)). Additionally you
need some GRUB tools to create it's configuration. Note: you don't need actual
need some GRUB tools to create its configuration. Note: you don't need actual
grub bootloader as it is provided by dom0. But having one also shouldn't harm.
~~~