More typo/grammar/re-wording from @jpouellet's review

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Miguel Jacq 2017-05-25 16:43:11 +10:00
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@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ Specifically, the notes below are aimed to help when the GRUB menu shows up fine
* Exit out of the chroot environment (`exit` or CTRL-D)
6. Reboot
*Note* If the kernel parameters do *not* include `quiet` and `rhgb`, the kernel messages can easily obscure the LUKS passphrase prompt. Additionally, each character entered will cause the LUKS passphrase prompt to repeat onto next line. Both of these are cosmetic. The trade-off between kernel messages and the easy-to-spot LUKS passphrase prompt is left as exercise to the user.
*Note* If the kernel parameters do *not* include `quiet` and `rhgb`, the kernel messages can easily obscure the LUKS passphrase prompt. Additionally, each character entered will cause the LUKS passphrase prompt to repeat onto next line. Both of these are cosmetic. The trade-off between kernel messages and the easy-to-spot LUKS passphrase prompt is left as an exercise to the user.
## Gather initial `dmesg` output
If all is well, the newly-installed Qubes OS instance should allow for user root to log in.

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@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ sudo yum clean all
qvm-remove <VMname>
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With this method you lose the data of one VM, but it'll more reliably work.
With this method you lose the data of one VM, but it'll work more reliably.
1. Decrease filesystem safety margin (5% by default):
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sudo tune2fs -m 4 /dev/mapper/vg_dom0-lv_root
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1. Remove some unneeded files in dom0 home (if you have any, most likely no).
1. Remove some unneeded files in dom0 home (if you have any, most likely not).