more minor typo/grammar fixes

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Miguel Jacq 2017-05-12 15:58:22 +10:00
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@ -40,8 +40,8 @@ problematic device drivers.
Note that scripts need to be executable (chmod +x) to be used.
Also take a look at [bind-dirs](/doc/bind-dirs) for instruction how to easily
modify arbitrary system file in AppVM and have those changes persistent.
Also take a look at [bind-dirs](/doc/bind-dirs) for instructions on
how to easily modify arbitrary system files in AppVM and have those changes persist.
GUI and audio configuration in dom0
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@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ sudo qubes-dom0-update grub2-xen
### Installing kernel in Fedora VM
In Fedora based VM, you need to install `qubes-kernel-vm-support` package. This
package include required additional kernel module and initramfs addition
package includes required additional kernel module and initramfs addition
required to start Qubes VM (for details see
[template implementation](/doc/template-implementation/)). Additionally you
need some GRUB tools to create its configuration. Note: you don't need actual
@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ sudo yum install qubes-kernel-vm-support grub2-tools
Then install whatever kernel you want. If you are using distribution kernel
package (`kernel` package), initramfs and kernel module should be handled
automatically, but you need to ensure you have `kernel-devel` package for the
same kernel version installed. If you are using manually build kernel, you need
same kernel version installed. If you are using a manually built kernel, you need
to handle this on your own. Take a look at `dkms` and `dracut` documentation.
Especially `dkms autoinstall` command may be useful.
@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ start kernel configured within VM.
### Installing kernel in Debian VM
In Debian based VM, you need to install `qubes-kernel-vm-support` package. This
package include required additional kernel module and initramfs addition
package includes required additional kernel module and initramfs addition
required to start Qubes VM (for details see
[template implementation](/doc/template-implementation/)). Additionally you
need some GRUB tools to create its configuration. Note: you don't need actual

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@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ If you install Qubes without making any backups beforehand, don't worry.
If you didn't overwrite the original partitions, then it is usually
possible to recover your old systems relatively easily, as described above.
If you decided to use a shared /boot and *dont* have backups of your previous
If you decided to use a shared /boot and *don't* have backups of your previous
grub config, it is quite easy to fix this.
This example may help.