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 How To make a VPN Gateway in Qubes
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-The simplest case if you set up a VPN connection using the Network Manager inside one of your VMs. Setting up such a connection is really not Qubes specific and it is documented in Your operating system documentation. If you using the Qubes default Guest OS (Fedora): [Establishing a VPN Connection](https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora/23/html/Networking_Guide/sec-Establishing_a_VPN_Connection.html)
+Setting up a VPN connection is really not Qubes specific and is documented in your operating system documentation. The relevant documentation for the Qubes default Guest OS (Fedora) is [Establishing a VPN Connection](https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora/23/html/Networking_Guide/sec-Establishing_a_VPN_Connection.html)
 
 The Qubes specific part is to choose the right VM for the VPN client:
 
 ### NetVM
 
-The simplest case is to set up a VPN connection using the Network Manager inside your NetVM. Because the NetworkManager already started you are ready to set up your VPN connection. However this has some disadvantages:
+The simplest case is to set up a VPN connection using the NetworkManager service inside your NetVM. Because the NetworkManager service is already started, you are ready to set up your VPN connection. However this has some disadvantages:
 
--   You have to place (and probably save) Your VPN credentials inside the NetVM which is directly connected to the outside world
+-   You have to place (and probably save) your VPN credentials inside the NetVM, which is directly connected to the outside world
 -   All your AppVMs which are connected to the NetVM will be connected to the VPN (by default)
 
 ### AppVM
 
-While the Network Manager is not started here (for a good reason), you can configure any kind of VPN client in your AppVM as well, however it is only suggested if you have to use a special VPN client.
+While the NetworkManager service is not started here (for a good reason), you can configure any kind of VPN client in your AppVM as well. However this is only suggested if your VPN client has special requirements.
 
 ### ProxyVM
 
-**WARNING:** *You need to use Qubes 3.1-rc2 (or later)! In the previous releases the NetworkManager was not working in ProxyVMs as expected.* ([#1052](https://github.com/QubesOS/qubes-issues/issues/1052))
+**WARNING:** *You need to use Qubes 3.1-rc2 (or later)! In the previous releases the NetworkManager service was not working in ProxyVMs as expected.* ([#1052](https://github.com/QubesOS/qubes-issues/issues/1052))
 
-One of the best thing in Qubes that you can use a special type of VMs called ProxyVM (or FirewallVM). The special thing is that your AppVMs see this as a NetVM, and the NetVMs see it as an AppVM. Because of that You can place a ProxyVM between your AppVMs and Your NetVM. This is how the default firewall VM is working.
+One of the best thing in Qubes is that you can use a special type of VM called a ProxyVM (or FirewallVM). The special thing is that your AppVMs see this as a NetVM, and your NetVMs see it as an AppVM. Because of this, you can place a ProxyVM between your AppVMs and your NetVM. This is how the default FirewallVM functions.
 
 Using a ProxyVM to set up a VPN client gives you the ability to:
 
@@ -48,10 +48,10 @@ Using a ProxyVM to set up a VPN client gives you the ability to:
 
     ![Settings-services.png](/attachment/wiki/VPN/Settings-services.png)
 
-3.  Wet up your VPN as described in the Network Manager documentation linked above.
+3.  Set up your VPN as described in the NetworkManager documentation linked above.
 
-4.  Connect your AppVMs to use the new VM as a NetVM.
+4.  Configure your AppVMs to use the new VM as a NetVM.
 
     ![Settings-NetVM.png](/attachment/wiki/VPN/Settings-NetVM.png)
 
-5. Optionaly you can install some [custom icons](https://github.com/Zrubi/qubes-artwork-proxy-vpn) for your VPN
+5. Optionally, you can install some [custom icons](https://github.com/Zrubi/qubes-artwork-proxy-vpn) for your VPN