diff --git a/customization/language-localization.md b/customization/language-localization.md
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--- a/customization/language-localization.md
+++ b/customization/language-localization.md
@@ -14,42 +14,28 @@ Language Localization
 How to set up pinyin input in Qubes
 -----------------------------------
 
-1. Don't try to install anything in Dom0. 
+1. In the TemplateVM in which the AppVMs you would like to use pinyin input is based, please install `ibus-pinyin` via the package manager or terminal. If the template is Fedora-based, run `sudo dnf install ibus-pinyin`, if the template is Debian-based, run `sudo apt install ibus-pinyin` 
 
-2. Choose a TemplateVM in which you will be using pinyin input on AppVM
-   instances thereof and open a terminal there.
+2. Close and shut down the TemplateVM. 
 
-3. Issue `sudo yum install ibus-pinyin` (or, for a Debian template,
-   `sudo apt-get install ibus-pinyin`). 
-
-4. Close and shut down the TemplateVM. 
-
-5. Restart an AppVM which inherits from the template and open a terminal.
+3. Restart an AppVM which based on the template you installed `ibus-pinyin` and open a terminal.
  
-6. Issue `ibus-setup`.
+4. Run `ibus-setup`
 
-7. You will likely get the error message telling you to paste
+5. You will likely get the error message telling you to paste the following into your bashrc:
 
         export GTK_IM_MODULE=ibus
         export XMODIFIERS=@im=ibus
         export QT_IM_MODULE=ibus
 
-   into your bashrc. 
-
-   Copy the text, and then issue: `sudo nano ~/.bashrc`
-   Paste the text into the bottom of the file and press ctrl-x to save and
-   close. 
+   Copy the text into your `~/.bashrc` file with your favorite text editor.
    You will need to do this on any AppVM in which you wish to use pinyin input.
 
-8. Setup ibus input as you like using the graphical menu (add pinyin or
-   intelligent pinyin to selections). You can bring the menu back by issuing
-   `ibus-setup` from a terminal. 
+6. Set up ibus input as you like using the graphical menu (add pinyin or intelligent pinyin to selections). You can bring the menu back by issuing `ibus-setup` from a terminal. 
 
-9. Use super-space as you are used to using to switch between pinyin-unicode and
-   Latin character input.
+7. Set up your shortcut for switching between inputs, by default it is super-space.
 
-10. Whenever you restart one of these AppVMs, you will need to open a terminal
-    and issue `imsettings-switch ibus` to activate ibus. 
+If ibus-pinyin is not enabled when you restart one of these AppVMs, open a terminal and run `ibus-setup` to activate ibus again. 
 
-For further discussion, see [this thread](https://groups.google.com/forum/#!searchin/qubes-users/languge/qubes-users/VcNPlhdgVQM/iF9PqSzayacJ).
+For further discussion, see [this qubes-users thread](https://groups.google.com/forum/#!searchin/qubes-users/languge/qubes-users/VcNPlhdgVQM/iF9PqSzayacJ).