Fix typos; tweak wording

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@ -50,13 +50,13 @@ addresses. We use this data for generating [Qubes userbase
statistics](/statistics/) and for incident response.
The data is retained for up to three months so that we can re-calculate the
previous two month's statistics in case anything goes wrong. After that, the
previous two months' statistics in case anything goes wrong. After that, the
data is deleted. We never sell the data to anyone or share it with any third
party.
If you would like to hide your IP address from us, we strongly encourage it and
are happy to help you do so! Simply choose the Whonix option to route all of
your updates over Tor [when installing Qubes OS](/doc/installation-guide/).
your updates over Tor when [installing Qubes OS](/doc/installation-guide/).
## Onion Services
@ -81,16 +81,16 @@ not have the ability to "phone home" and is intentionally architected to forbid
that from happening. This is mainly because we have ensured that dom0 has no
network access.
We don't want the ability collect any data directly from Qubes OS
We don't want the ability to collect any data directly from Qubes OS
installations, because if anyone has that power, then the system is not secure.
We all use Qubes OS ourselves as a daily driver for our work and personal
We use Qubes OS ourselves as a daily driver for our work and personal
lives, so our interests are aligned with yours. We want privacy too!
Thankfully, Qubes OS is free and open-source software, so you don't have to
take our word for it.
Of course, third-party software (including other operating systems) running
inside of qubes may not be as privacy-respecting, so please be mindful of what
you install. We have no control over such third-party software.
inside of Qubes OS may not be as privacy-respecting, so please be mindful of
what you install. We have no control over such third-party software.
For more information, please see [FAQ: How does Qubes OS provide
privacy?](/faq/#how-does-qubes-os-provide-privacy)