From 5c089ca17f2fec1020b7fc54231488ade0297fb4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: stubbybubby Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2017 21:45:51 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Edit certified-laptops.md * Removed redundant phrases * Grammar fixes * Diversified language --- hardware/certified-laptops.md | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/hardware/certified-laptops.md b/hardware/certified-laptops.md index 44b7fa9f..f8a53e4f 100644 --- a/hardware/certified-laptops.md +++ b/hardware/certified-laptops.md @@ -7,21 +7,21 @@ permalink: /doc/certified-laptops/ Qubes-certified Laptops ======================= -Qubes-certified laptops are laptops that are regularly tested by the Qubes +Qubes-certified laptops are regularly tested by the Qubes developers to ensure compatibility with all of Qubes' features. The developers -test all new major versions and updates to ensure no regressions are introduced. +test all new major versions and updates to ensure that no regressions are introduced. To learn more about the certification process, or if you're interested in getting your company's hardware Qubes-certified, please see the [Hardware Certification] page. We aim to partner with a few select computer makers to ensure that Qubes is -compatible with them, so that new users have clear path towards getting started -with Qubes if they desire. We aim for these makers to be as diverse as possible +compatible with them and new users have clear path towards getting started +with Qubes if they desire. We look for these makers to be as diverse as possible in terms of geography, cost, and availability. Note that we certify only that a particular configuration is supported by Qubes. We take no responsibility for our partners' shipping process -- including that -the hardware will not being modified in any way (malicious or not). +the hardware will not be modified in any way (malicious or not). For more general information about choosing hardware for Qubes, please see the [System Requirements] and the [Hardware Compatibility List]. @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Certified for Qubes R3.x [![image of Librem 13](/attachment/site/qubes-plus-purism.png)](https://puri.sm/librem-13/) For users now who seek to buy a Librem 13, there is an option to have Qubes -pre-installed on their Librem 13. This will include all the necessary tweaks for +pre-installed. This will include all the necessary tweaks for maximum compatibility with Qubes. In addition, the Qubes team will receive a small portion of the revenue from any