Clarify and simplify language

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@ -106,13 +106,13 @@ the window managers [i3](/doc/i3/) and [AwesomeWM](/doc/awesomewm/).
The bar at the top of your screen in Qubes 4.0 includes the following XFCE The bar at the top of your screen in Qubes 4.0 includes the following XFCE
component areas: component areas:
- The **Tray**, where many functional widgets live. - The **Tray**, where many functional widgets live.
- **Spaces**, an interface for [virtual - **Spaces**, an interface for [virtual
desktops](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Virtual_desktop). Virtual desktops desktops](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Virtual_desktop). Virtual desktops do
do not have any inherent security isolation properties, but some users find not have any inherent security isolation properties, but some users find them
them useful for organizing things. useful for organizing things.
- The **Task Bar** where buttons for open and hidden windows live. - The **Task Bar** where buttons for open and hidden windows live.
- The **App Menu**, where you go to open an application within a qube, to open - The **App Menu**, where you go to open an application within a qube, to open
a dom0 terminal, to access administrative UI tools such as the Qube Manager, a dom0 terminal, to access administrative UI tools such as the Qube Manager,
or to access settings panels for your desktop environment. or to access settings panels for your desktop environment.
@ -121,16 +121,17 @@ spend some time going through [XFCE's documentation](https://docs.xfce.org/).
There are several tray widgets that are unique to Qubes OS: There are several tray widgets that are unique to Qubes OS:
- The **Whonix SDWDate** widget surfaces and tracks functionality unique to - The **Whonix SDWDate** allows you to control the Tor connection in your
the [integration of Whonix into Qubes OS](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes). [`sys-whonix`](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes) qube.
- The **Qubes Clipboard** widget surfaces activity in Qubes' inter-qube clipboard, and allows users to copy text *from* dom0. - The **Qubes Clipboard** lets you easily copy text from dom0.
- The **Qubes Devices** widget allows you to attach and detach devices --- - The **Qubes Devices** widget allows you to attach and detach devices --- such
such as USB drives and cameras --- to qubes. as USB drives and cameras --- to qubes.
- The **Qubes Disk Space** widget shows you how much storage you have available. It will notify you if you're ever running out - The **Qubes Disk Space** widget shows you how much storage you're using.
of disk space. It'll notify you if you're ever running out of space.
- The **Qubes Domains** widget allows you to manage running qubes, turn them - The **Qubes Domains** widget allows you to manage running qubes, turn them on
on and off, and monitor memory usage. and off, and monitor RAM and CPU usage.
- The **Qubes Updater** widget can inform you when updates are available, and enable you to run those updates with a log to monitor progress. - The **Qubes Updater** widget informs you when updates are available and helps
you install them.
[![r4.0-widgets.png](/attachment/doc/r4.0-widgets.png)](/attachment/doc/r4.0-widgets.png) [![r4.0-widgets.png](/attachment/doc/r4.0-widgets.png)](/attachment/doc/r4.0-widgets.png)
@ -145,9 +146,9 @@ all the qubes in your system, even the ones that aren't running.
All aspects of Qubes OS can be controlled using command-line tools. Opening a All aspects of Qubes OS can be controlled using command-line tools. Opening a
terminal emulator in dom0 can be done in several ways: terminal emulator in dom0 can be done in several ways:
- Go to the App Menu and select **Terminal Emulator** at the top. - Go to the App Menu and select **Terminal Emulator** at the top.
- Press <kbd>Alt</kbd>+<kbd>F3</kbd> and search for `xfce terminal`. - Press <kbd>Alt</kbd>+<kbd>F3</kbd> and search for `xfce terminal`.
- Right-click on the desktop and select **Open Terminal Here**. - Right-click on the desktop and select **Open Terminal Here**.
Terminal emulators can also be run in other qubes as normal programs. Various Terminal emulators can also be run in other qubes as normal programs. Various
command-line tools are described as part of this guide, and the whole reference command-line tools are described as part of this guide, and the whole reference
@ -157,10 +158,10 @@ can be found [here](/doc/tools/).
When you install Qubes OS, a number of qubes are pre-configured for you: When you install Qubes OS, a number of qubes are pre-configured for you:
- **Templates:** `fedora-XX` (`XX` being the version number) - **Templates:** `fedora-XX` (`XX` being the version number)
- **Admin qube:** `dom0` - **Admin qube:** `dom0`
- **Service qubes:** `sys-usb`, `sys-net`, `sys-firewall`, and `sys-whonix` - **Service qubes:** `sys-usb`, `sys-net`, `sys-firewall`, and `sys-whonix`
- **App qubes** configured to prioritize security by compartmentalizing tasks - **App qubes** configured to prioritize security by compartmentalizing tasks
and types of data: `work`, `personal`, `untrusted`, and `vault`. (There is and types of data: `work`, `personal`, `untrusted`, and `vault`. (There is
nothing special about these qubes. If you were to create a black qube and nothing special about these qubes. If you were to create a black qube and
name it `vault`, it would be the same as the pre-configured `vault` qube. name it `vault`, it would be the same as the pre-configured `vault` qube.
@ -178,9 +179,9 @@ Menu. If you need to add or remove qubes, simply use the Qube Manager's **Add**
and **Remove** buttons. You can also add, remove, and list qubes from the and **Remove** buttons. You can also add, remove, and list qubes from the
command line using the following tools: command line using the following tools:
- `qvm-create` - `qvm-create`
- `qvm-remove` - `qvm-remove`
- `qvm-ls` - `qvm-ls`
### How many qubes do I need? ### How many qubes do I need?
@ -218,13 +219,13 @@ Here are some basic tasks you're likely to want to perform often that are
unique to Qubes as a multi-environment system. A full list is available in the unique to Qubes as a multi-environment system. A full list is available in the
[How-to Guides](/doc/#how-to-guides) section in the docs. [How-to Guides](/doc/#how-to-guides) section in the docs.
- [How to Update](/doc/how-to-update/) - [How to Update](/doc/how-to-update/)
- [How to Back Up, Restore, and Migrate](/doc/how-to-back-up-restore-and-migrate/) - [How to Back Up, Restore, and Migrate](/doc/how-to-back-up-restore-and-migrate/)
- [How to Copy and Paste Text](/doc/how-to-copy-and-paste-text/) - [How to Copy and Paste Text](/doc/how-to-copy-and-paste-text/)
- [How to Copy and Move Files](/doc/how-to-copy-and-move-files/) - [How to Copy and Move Files](/doc/how-to-copy-and-move-files/)
- [How to Copy from Dom0](/doc/how-to-copy-from-dom0/) - [How to Copy from Dom0](/doc/how-to-copy-from-dom0/)
- [How to Install Software](/doc/how-to-install-software/) - [How to Install Software](/doc/how-to-install-software/)
- [How to Use Devices (block storage, USB, and PCI devices)](/doc/how-to-use-devices/) - [How to Use Devices (block storage, USB, and PCI devices)](/doc/how-to-use-devices/)
If you encounter any problems, please visit the [Help, Support, Mailing Lists, If you encounter any problems, please visit the [Help, Support, Mailing Lists,
and Forum](/support/) page. and Forum](/support/) page.