Clarify and simplify language

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Andrew David Wong 2021-06-22 06:56:10 -07:00
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@ -108,9 +108,9 @@ component areas:
- The **Tray**, where many functional widgets live. - The **Tray**, where many functional widgets live.
- **Spaces**, an interface for [virtual - **Spaces**, an interface for [virtual
desktops](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Virtual_desktop). Virtual desktops desktops](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Virtual_desktop). Virtual desktops do
do not have any inherent security isolation properties, but some users find not have any inherent security isolation properties, but some users find them
them useful for organizing things. useful for organizing things.
- The **Task Bar** where buttons for open and hidden windows live. - The **Task Bar** where buttons for open and hidden windows live.
- The **App Menu**, where you go to open an application within a qube, to open - The **App Menu**, where you go to open an application within a qube, to open
a dom0 terminal, to access administrative UI tools such as the Qube Manager, a dom0 terminal, to access administrative UI tools such as the Qube Manager,
@ -121,16 +121,17 @@ spend some time going through [XFCE's documentation](https://docs.xfce.org/).
There are several tray widgets that are unique to Qubes OS: There are several tray widgets that are unique to Qubes OS:
- The **Whonix SDWDate** widget surfaces and tracks functionality unique to - The **Whonix SDWDate** allows you to control the Tor connection in your
the [integration of Whonix into Qubes OS](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes). [`sys-whonix`](https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Qubes) qube.
- The **Qubes Clipboard** widget surfaces activity in Qubes' inter-qube clipboard, and allows users to copy text *from* dom0. - The **Qubes Clipboard** lets you easily copy text from dom0.
- The **Qubes Devices** widget allows you to attach and detach devices --- - The **Qubes Devices** widget allows you to attach and detach devices --- such
such as USB drives and cameras --- to qubes. as USB drives and cameras --- to qubes.
- The **Qubes Disk Space** widget shows you how much storage you have available. It will notify you if you're ever running out - The **Qubes Disk Space** widget shows you how much storage you're using.
of disk space. It'll notify you if you're ever running out of space.
- The **Qubes Domains** widget allows you to manage running qubes, turn them - The **Qubes Domains** widget allows you to manage running qubes, turn them on
on and off, and monitor memory usage. and off, and monitor RAM and CPU usage.
- The **Qubes Updater** widget can inform you when updates are available, and enable you to run those updates with a log to monitor progress. - The **Qubes Updater** widget informs you when updates are available and helps
you install them.
[![r4.0-widgets.png](/attachment/doc/r4.0-widgets.png)](/attachment/doc/r4.0-widgets.png) [![r4.0-widgets.png](/attachment/doc/r4.0-widgets.png)](/attachment/doc/r4.0-widgets.png)