Fix stage numbering; copyedit

See: https://forum.qubes-os.org/t/10156
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@ -41,9 +41,9 @@ can install it with the following command in the dom0 terminal:
sudo qubes-dom0-update -y qubes-dist-upgrade
The upgrade consists of 7 stages - 6 before restarting the system - marked as
"STAGE 0" through "STAGE 6" in the options list below. And the 7th stage is
rebuilding the applications and features list - started with a
The upgrade consists of six stages --- five before restarting the system ---
labeled "STAGE 0" through "STAGE 5" in the options list below. The seventh stage
is rebuilding the application and features lists, which you can start with the
`--resync-appmenus-features` option.
Full list of options can be obtained with `qubes-dist-upgrade --help`:
@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ accept all the actions without confirmation.
Alternatively, each upgrade stage can be started separately (see the list of
options above).
After completing "STAGE 0" through "STAGE 6", restart the system. Then perform
After completing "STAGE 0" through "STAGE 5", restart the system. Then perform
the final step:
sudo qubes-dist-upgrade --resync-appmenus-features