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@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ It is a good idea to clone the original template, and make any changes in the ne
[user@dom0 ~]$ qvm-clone fedora-21-minimal <your new template name>
{% endhighlight %}
The sudo package is not installed by default, so lets install it:
The sudo package is not installed by default, so let's install it:
{% highlight trac-wiki %}
[user@F21-Minimal ~]$ su -
@ -39,11 +39,11 @@ The sudo package is not installed by default, so lets install it:
The rsyslog logging service is not installed by default. All logging is now being handled by the systemd journal. Users requiring the rsyslog service should install it manually.
To access the journald log, use the following command: `journalctl`
To access the journald log, use the `journalctl` command.
### as a NetVM
If You want to use this template to for standard NetVMs You should install some more packeges:
If you want to use this template to for standard NetVMs you should install some more packeges:
{% highlight trac-wiki %}
[user@F21-Minimal ~]$ sudo yum install NetworkManager NetworkManager-wifi network-manager-applet wireless-tools dbus-x11 dejavu-sans-fonts tar tinyproxy
@ -55,11 +55,11 @@ And maybe some more optional but useful packages as well:
[user@F21-Minimal ~]$ sudo yum install pciutils vim-minimal less tcpdump telnet psmisc nmap nmap-ncat gnome-keyring
{% endhighlight %}
If Your network device needs some firmware then you should also install the corresponding packages as well. The `lspci; yum search firmware` command will help to choose the right one :)
If your network device needs some firmware then you should also install the corresponding packages as well. The `lspci; yum search firmware` command will help to choose the right one :)
### as a ProxyVM
If You want to use this template as a ProxyVM You may want to install evem more packages
If you want to use this template as a ProxyVM you may want to install even more packages
#### Firewall
@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ This template is ready to use for a standard firewall VM.
#### VPN
The needed packages are depend on the VPN technology. `yum search "NetworkManager VPN plugin"` command may help you to choose the right one.
The needed packages depend on the VPN technology. The `yum search "NetworkManager VPN plugin"` command may help you to choose the right one.
[More details about setting up a VPN Gateway](/wiki/VPN#ProxyVM)