fix typos and clarify language

thanks to french localization team for reporting these!
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@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ But since you can read the whole memory, it isn't that hard.
Now, how does this apply to Qubes OS?
The above attack requires access to a PCI device, which means that it can be performed only from NetVM / UsbVM, so someone must first break into one of those VMs.
But this isn't that hard, because there is a lot of complex code handling network traffic.
Recent bugs includes DHCP client, DNS client, etc.
Recent bugs include DHCP client, DNS client, etc.
Most attacks on NetVM / UsbVM (but not all!) require being somewhat close to the target system - for example connected to the same WiFi network, or in the case of a UsbVM, having physical acccess to a USB port.
### Can I use AMD-v instead of VT-x?
@ -292,9 +292,9 @@ Open a terminal and run `sudo yum install linux-firmware` in the TemplateVM upon
### Can I install Qubes OS together with other operating system (dual-boot/multi-boot)?
You shouldn't do that, because it pose a security risk for your Qubes OS installation.
But if you understand the risk and accept it, read [documentation on multibooting](/doc/multiboot/).
It starts with explanation what is wrong with using such setup.
You shouldn't do that, because it poses a security risk for your Qubes OS installation.
But if you understand the risk and accept it, read [documentation on multibooting](/doc/multiboot/),
it begins with an explanation of the risks with such a setup.
Common Problems
---------------
@ -307,7 +307,7 @@ See [here](/doc/version-scheme/#check-installed-version).
Run `systemctl enable NetworkManager-dispatcher.service` in the TemplateVM upon which your NetVM is based.
You may have to reboot afterward for the change to take effect.
(Note: This is an upstream problem. See [here](https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=974811).
(Note: This is an upstream problem. See [here](https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=974811)).
For details, see the qubes-users mailing list threads [here](https://groups.google.com/d/topic/qubes-users/xPLGsAJiDW4/discussion) and [here](https://groups.google.com/d/topic/qubes-users/uN9G8hjKrGI/discussion).)
### My keyboard layout settings are not behaving correctly. What should I do?