diff --git a/introduction/intro.md b/introduction/intro.md index e7c01383..df78075e 100644 --- a/introduction/intro.md +++ b/introduction/intro.md @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ What is Qubes OS?

Isolate software as if they were installed on separate physical machines using PV or HVM virtualization techniques

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Templating system

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Template system

Allow qubes called AppVMs to share a root file system without sacrificing security using the innovative Template system

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Split GPG

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Utilise Split GPG to store private GPG keys in an AppVM

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Utilize Split GPG to store private GPG keys in an AppVM

U2F proxy

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Open-source

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Users are free to use, copy and modify Qubes OS and are encouraged to do so!

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Users are free to use, copy and modify Qubes OS and are encouraged to do so!

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Throughout their lives, individuals engage in various activites such as going to school, working, voting, taking care of their families or visiting with friends.

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These activites are spatially and temporally bound : they happen in isolation of one another, in their own compartments, which often represent an essential safeguard, such as in the case of voting.

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In one's digital life, the situation is quite different : each activity, often intertwinded with its real-life counterpart, tends to happen on a single computing device.

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Throughout their lives, individuals engage in various activities such as going to school, working, voting, taking care of their families or visiting with friends.

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These activities are spatially and temporally bound : they happen in isolation of one another, in their own compartments, which often represent an essential safeguard, such as in the case of voting.

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In one's digital life, the situation is quite different : each activity, often intertwined with its real-life counterpart, tends to happen on a single computing device.

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Suprinsingly, personal computing devices aren't designed to offer means to enforce the same kind of isolation that people enjoy in the physical world.

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Surprisingly, personal computing devices are not designed to offer means to enforce the same kind of isolation that people enjoy in the physical world.

What if there were an operating system that provided a kind of digital compartmentalization almost as strong as physical isolation?

Qubes OS allows users to compartmentalize various parts of their digital lives into well-isolated compartments.

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Thanks to Qubes OS, vulnerable or actively targeted individuals such as journalists, political activists, whistleblowers or researchers can enjoy the same benefit of using multiple computing devices at a fraction of the cost and without the associated loss of usability.

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Thanks to Qubes OS, vulnerable or actively targeted individuals such as journalists, political activists, whistleblowers or researchers can enjoy the same benefits of using multiple computing devices at a fraction of the cost and without the associated loss of usability.

It allows users to do everything on the same physical computer without having to worry about a single successful cyberattack taking down their entire digital life in one fell swoop.

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Computing should remain a activity where mistakes can be made and where users can explore the web freely, downloading attachements and clicking on links without having to constantly evaluate a miriad of risk factors.

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Computing should remain an activity where mistakes can be made and where users can explore the web freely, downloading attachments and clicking on links without having to constantly evaluate a myriad of risk factors.

Qubes OS strives to bring back this experience. It creates a place where users can feel safe.