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@@ -118,15 +118,15 @@ As for Google Wallet, we don't recommend this due to their [privacy policy](http
 
 ### Advertising ID
 
-All devices with the Play Service installed automatically generate an [advertising ID](https://support.google.com/googleplay/android-developer/answer/6048248?hl=en) used for targetted advertisement. We recommend that you disable this feature to limit the data collected about you.
+All devices with Play Services installed automatically generate an [advertising ID](https://support.google.com/googleplay/android-developer/answer/6048248?hl=en) used for targeted advertising. Disable this feature to limit the data collected about you.
 
-On Android distributions with [Sandboxed Play Services](https://grapheneos.org/usage#sandboxed-play-services), go to ⚙️ Settings → Apps -> Sandboxed Google Play -> Google Settings -> Ads and select **Delete advertising ID**.
+On Android distributions with [Sandboxed Play Services](https://grapheneos.org/usage#sandboxed-play-services), go to ⚙️ Settings → Apps → Sandboxed Google Play → Google Settings → Ads and select **Delete advertising ID**.
 
-On Android distributions with privileged Play Services (such as the stock OS), the setting can be in one of several locations. Check
+On Android distributions with privileged Play Services (such as stock OSes), the setting may be in one of several locations. Check
 * ⚙️ Settings → Google → Ads
 * ⚙️ Settings → Privacy → Ads
 
-Depending on the system, you will either be given the option to delete your advertising ID or to "Opt out of interest-based ads". You should delete the advertising ID if you are given the option to, and if you are not, we recommend that you opt out of interested-based ads and then reset your advertising ID.
+Depending on your system, you will either be given the option to delete your advertising ID or to "Opt out of interest-based ads". You should delete the advertising ID if you are given the option to, and if you are not, we recommend that you opt out of interested-based ads and then reset your advertising ID.
 
 ### Android Device Shopping