From 834bc802e402982bfce64051d3c218c256b698ec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jonah Aragon Date: Mon, 29 Apr 2019 11:16:24 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Improve Some Wording --- _includes/sections/participate.html | 11 ++++++----- 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/_includes/sections/participate.html b/_includes/sections/participate.html index 4d019344..98592760 100644 --- a/_includes/sections/participate.html +++ b/_includes/sections/participate.html @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@

Participate with suggestions and constructive criticism

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It's important for a website like privacytools.io to be up-to-date. Keep an eye on software updates of the applications listed here. Follow recent news about providers that are recommended. We try our best to keep up but we're not perfect and the internet is changing fast. If you find an error, or you think a provider should not be listed here, or a qualified service provider is missing, or a browser plugin is not the best choice anymore, or anything else... Talk to us please. You can also find us on our own Mastodon instance or on Matrix at #general:privacytools.io.

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It's important for a website like privacytools.io stay be up-to-date. Keep an eye on software updates of the applications listed on our site. Follow recent news about providers that we recommend. We try our best to keep up, but we're not perfect and the internet is changing fast. If you find an error, or you think a provider should not be listed here, or a qualified service provider is missing, or a browser plugin is not the best choice anymore, or anything else... Talk to us please. You can also find us on our own Mastodon instance or on Matrix at #general:privacytools.io.

@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ image="/assets/img/icons/discourse.png" url="https://forum.privacytools.io/" website="Discourse" - extra_button='reddit' - description='Our active Discourse community to stay up to date or to make suggestions. Join now!' + extra_button='Reddit' + description='Join our Discourse community to stay up to date on privacy news or make suggestions!' %} {% include card.html color="primary" @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ url="https://social.privacytools.io/" website="Mastodon" extra_button='Twitter' - description="Get the latest privacy-related updates from our Twitter Feed. Follow now!" + description="Get the latest privacy-related updates from our Mastodon Feed. Follow us today!" %} {% include card.html color="warning" @@ -30,8 +30,9 @@ url="https://github.com/privacytoolsIO/privacytools.io" website="github.com" description="The complete website source code is available on GitHub. Join our developer team!" + extra_button='Contributor List' %}
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This is a community project and we're aiming to deliver the best information available for better privacy online. Thank you for participating. This project needs you.

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This is a community project aiming to deliver the best information available to improve privacy online. Thank you for participating. This project needs you.