From 18797207cfb9b3c92f599d55ea986707c61d37a6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tommy <contact@tommytran.io>
Date: Sat, 20 Nov 2021 07:36:42 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Better wording for the video page (#348)

Signed-off-by: Daniel Nathan Gray <dng@disroot.org>
---
 _data/software/video-streaming/1_freetube.yml | 2 +-
 _data/software/video-streaming/2_lbry.yml     | 2 +-
 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/_data/software/video-streaming/1_freetube.yml b/_data/software/video-streaming/1_freetube.yml
index 28446a88..91bc8401 100644
--- a/_data/software/video-streaming/1_freetube.yml
+++ b/_data/software/video-streaming/1_freetube.yml
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ description: |
   FreeTube features <a href="https://sponsor.ajay.app">SponsorBlock</a> to help you skip sponsored advertisement, and all Youtube advertisements are blocked by default as well.
 
   <h4>Notes</h4>
-  Your IP address is visible to YouTube, <a href="https://instances.invidious.io">Invidious</a> and SponsorBlock instances that you use. Consider using a <a href='/providers/vpn/'>VPN</a> if this is in your <a href="/threat-modeling/">threat model.
+  Your IP address is visible to YouTube, <a href="https://instances.invidious.io">Invidious</a> and SponsorBlock instances that you use. Consider using a <a href='/providers/vpn/'>VPN</a> depending on <a href="/threat-modeling/">threat model.
 website: 'https://freetubeapp.io/'
 privacy_policy: 'https://freetubeapp.io/privacy.php'
 downloads:
diff --git a/_data/software/video-streaming/2_lbry.yml b/_data/software/video-streaming/2_lbry.yml
index 6bd9bf52..6a359450 100644
--- a/_data/software/video-streaming/2_lbry.yml
+++ b/_data/software/video-streaming/2_lbry.yml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ description: |
 
   Only the <strong>LBRY desktop client</strong> is recommended. <a href="https://odysee.com/">Odysee</a> and the F-Droid, Play Store, IOS clients have mandatory synchronization and telemetry.
 
-  While watching and hosting videos, your IP address is visible to the LBRY network. Consider using a <a href='/providers/vpn/'>VPN</a> if this is in your <a href="/threat-modeling/">threat model</a>. You could also disable <em>Save hosting data to help the LBRY network</em> option (⚙️ Settings → Advanced Settings) to avoid exposing your IP and watched videos for a prolonged period of time.
+  While watching and hosting videos, your IP address is visible to the LBRY network. Consider using a <a href='/providers/vpn/'>VPN</a> depending on your <a href="/threat-modeling/">threat model</a>. You could also disable <em>Save hosting data to help the LBRY network</em> option (⚙️ Settings → Advanced Settings) to avoid exposing your IP and watched videos for a prolonged period of time.
 
 website: 'https://lbry.com/'
 privacy_policy: 'https://lbry.com/privacypolicy'