From 06e7dbf3f4e0511a4302dd49701f90b6ca169833 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: mfwmyfacewhen <94880365+mfwmyfacewhen@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 12 May 2022 16:51:21 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Fix wording in cloud storage page (#1205) * Fix wording in cloud storage page * Grammar fixes and deleted reduntant info --- docs/cloud.en.md | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/cloud.en.md b/docs/cloud.en.md index 2e60c059..0381502f 100644 --- a/docs/cloud.en.md +++ b/docs/cloud.en.md @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ title: "Cloud Storage" icon: material/file-cloud --- -If you are currently using a Cloud Storage Service like Dropbox, Google Drive, Microsoft OneDrive or Apple iCloud, you are putting complete trust in your service provider to not look at your files. +If you are currently using a Cloud Storage Service like Dropbox, Google Drive, Microsoft OneDrive, or Apple iCloud, you are putting complete trust in your service provider to not look at your files. -Trust your provider by using an alternative below that supports E2EE. +Eliminate the need for trust in your provider by using an alternative below that supports E2EE. ### Nextcloud @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Trust your provider by using an alternative below that supports E2EE. We recommend checking if your Nextcloud provider supports E2EE, otherwise you have to trust the provider to not look at your files. -When self hosting Nextcloud, you should also remember to enable E2EE to protect against your hosting provider from snooping on your data. +When self hosting Nextcloud, you should also enable E2EE to protect against your hosting provider snooping on your data. ### Proton Drive @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ When using a web client, you are placing trust in the server to send you proper ![Cryptee logo](./assets/img/cloud/cryptee.svg#only-light){ align=right } ![Cryptee logo](./assets/img/cloud/cryptee-dark.svg#only-dark){ align=right } - **Cryptee** is an encrypted, secure photo storage service, and an encrypted documents editor to write personal docs, notes, journals, store files & more. + **Cryptee** is an encrypted, secure photo storage service, and an encrypted documents editor. [Website](https://crypt.ee){ .md-button .md-button--primary } [Privacy Policy](https://crypt.ee/privacy){ .md-button } @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ When using a web client, you are placing trust in the server to send you proper ![Tahoe-LAFS logo](./assets/img/cloud/tahoe-lafs.svg#only-light){ align=right } ![Tahoe-LAFS logo](./assets/img/cloud/tahoe-lafs-dark.svg#only-dark){ align=right } - **Tahoe-LAFS** is a free and open decentralized cloud storage system. It distributes your data across multiple servers. Even if some of the servers fail or are taken over by an attacker, the entire file store continues to function correctly, preserving your privacy and security. The servers used as storage pools do not have access to your data. + **Tahoe-LAFS** is a free, open, and decentralized cloud storage system. It distributes your data across multiple servers. Even if some of the servers fail or are taken over by an attacker, the entire file store continues to function correctly, preserving your privacy and security. The servers used as storage pools do not have access to your data. [Homepage](https://www.tahoe-lafs.org){ .md-button .md-button--primary }