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 title: "Curation of 'How to mine Monero' mini series"
 author: Monero-Guides
 date: April 28, 2024
 amount: 17.4
 milestones:
-- name: Mining Basics
-funds: 7.4 XMR
-done: 
-status: unfinished
-- name: Setting up your rig
-funds: 10 XMR
-done: 
-status: unfinished
+    - name: Mining Basics
+    funds: 7.4 XMR
+    done: 
+    status: unfinished
+    - name: Setting up your rig
+    funds: 10 XMR
+    done: 
+    status: unfinished
 
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+_This proposal has been amended after community feedback from the last two meetings_
+
 ## Preface 
 
 Hi all,
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 ### How to mine Monero
 
-We're here to pitch our second mini series. The working title for which is 'How to mine Monero'
+We're here to pitch our second mini series. The working title for which is 'Getting to Grips With Mining'
 
-The mini series/playlist we propose to curate will contain 2 videos, each of varying length and content.
+The mini series/playlist we propose to curate will contain ~~2 videos~~ 3 videos, each of varying length and content.
 
 We have generated scripts ahead of this proposal, the first of which is complete and ready for comments and the second in development.
 
 - [An Introduciton to Mining](https://github.com/moneroguides/2x01-mining-basics/blob/main/script.md)
 - [How to Set Up Your Rig](https://github.com/moneroguides/2x02-setting-up-your-rig/blob/main/script.md)
 
+- NEW - Mining Economics (the scripts have not yet been reduced, but will begin shortly)
+
 We believe this series will provide a good and relatively in-depth introduction for anyone looking to get into mining.
 
 ## Video Contents
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 In this first video we take a look at how the Monero protocol works and how RandomX plays an important role. Here we consider topics such as hashrate, difficulty, network security and block rewards.
 
-After this we look at the differences between solo and pool mining with a strong emphasis on P2Pool and its benefits.
+After this we look at the different mining practices ie. solo and pool mining with a strong emphasis on P2Pool.
+
+~~Finally we discuss efficiency of mining equipment and profitability~~
 
-Finally we discuss efficiency of mining equipment and profitability.
 
 This will be the longest video of the two and sets an important foundation for most viewers.
 
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 In addition to software guidance, we do also offer brief guidance on hardware choice and undervolting.
 
+### NEW - Mining economics
+
+In this video we look at economics side of things. Topics we dive deeper into include network difficulty, ROI, efficiency of mining equipment and profitability.
+
+This new video will aim to shorten then two other videos and provide a more concise approach.
+
 ## Additional comments 
 
 Since our last series, we've realised that keeping these videos relevant and up to date can be challenging when faced with the deprecation of services and resources (monerodocs.org being a recent example). We have tried to make this series as free as possible from these problems.
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 We are proposing 2 milestones, one for each video. However, it's likely that both videos will be completed in parallel.
 
-If these milestones are not reach by the end of July 2024 the raisd money can be sent to the GF. The videos will be completed regardless.
+If these milestones are not reached 2 months after acceptance the raised money can be sent to the GF. The videos will be completed regardless.
 
 ## What we are asking for
 
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 Thanks for taking the time to read this proposal and peace be with you privacy fans.
 
+
+~ Moneroguides