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-Tails is an [operating system](/glossary/#operating-system-os) that makes anonymous computer use accessible to anyone. Tails is [designed](https://tails.boum.org/about/index.en.html) to leave no trace of your activity on your computer, unless you explicitly configure it to save specific data. It achieves this by running from a DVD or USB independent of the computer’s installed operating system. Tails comes with [several built-in applications](https://tails.boum.org/doc/about/features/index.en.html) pre-configured with security in mind, and all anarchists should know how to use it for secure communication, research, editing, and the publication of sensitive content. 
+Tails is an [operating system](/glossary/#operating-system-os) that makes anonymous computer use accessible to everyone. Tails is [designed](https://tails.boum.org/about/index.en.html) to leave no trace of your activity on your computer unless you explicitly configure it to save specific data. It accomplishes this by running from a DVD or USB, independent of the operating system installed on the computer. Tails comes with [several built-in applications](https://tails.boum.org/doc/about/features/index.en.html) preconfigured with security in mind, and all anarchists should know how to use it for secure communication, research, editing, and publishing sensitive content. 
 
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-The [documentation on the Tails website](https://tails.boum.org/) is great and easy to follow. This tutorial synthesizes the most relevant documentation, and also has advice on configuration and use specific to an anarchist [threat model](#the-concept-of-a-threat-model). Our article [Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best) goes into more depth, but we recommend that you familiarize yourself with Tails basics before reading it.   
+The [documentation on the Tails website](https://tails.boum.org/) is excellent and easy to follow. This tutorial summarizes the most relevant documentation and additionally includes configuration and usage advice specific to an anarchist [threat model](#the-concept-of-a-threat-model). Our [Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best) article goes into more detail, but we recommend that you familiarize yourself with the basics of Tails before reading it.   
 
 # TAILS: **T**he **A**mnesic & **I**ncognito **L**ive **S**ystem
 
-Tails is an operating system. You have probably heard of "Windows" or "macOS", these are names for two of the most prevalent operating systems. An operating system is the set of programs that runs the different components (hard disk, screen, processor, memory, etc...) of the computer, allowing it to function.
+Tails is an operating system. You have probably heard of "Windows" or "macOS", these are names for two of the most common operating systems. An operating system is the set of programs that run the various components (hard drive, screen, processor, memory, etc...) of the computer and allow it to function.
 
-Other operating systems exist. Perhaps you have already heard of Linux? Linux refers to a family of operating systems, which branches off into various sub-families, or different versions of Linux, one of which is called Debian. In the Debian sub-family, we find Ubuntu and Tails. Tails is a distribution (a version) of Linux with several distinguishing features. 
+There are other operating systems. Maybe you have heard of Linux? Linux refers to a family of operating systems that branches off into several sub-families, or different versions of Linux, one of which is called Debian. In the Debian sub-family we find Ubuntu and Tails. Tails is a distribution (version) of Linux with several distinguishing features. 
 
 ***Live System***
 
-* Tails is what is referred to as a live system. While other operating systems live on the hard drive of your computer, Tails is installed on an external device like a USB (or even an SD card or a DVD). When you start your computer with the Tails device plugged in, your computer runs through this device instead, leaving the hard drive untouched. You can even use Tails on a computer without a hard drive.  
+* Tails is a so-called live system. While other operating systems live on your computer's hard drive, Tails is installed on an external device such as a USB (or even an SD card or DVD). When you start your computer with the Tails device plugged in, your computer runs off of that device instead, leaving your hard drive untouched. You can even use Tails on a computer without a hard drive.  
 
 ***Amnesia***
 
-* Tails is designed to not leave any data behind on the computer you are using; it writes nothing to the hard disk, and runs only in RAM (memory) which is automatically wiped after shut down. The Tails live system itself (usually running on a USB) is also left untouched. You can only save information by putting it onto a different USB partition before shutting down (explained below). The goal of this is to avoid leaving forensic traces that someone with physical access to either your computer or your Tails USB could read at a later date. Things like Internet search history, cache, "recently edited" documents, etc., are all erased.  Tails also leaves no trace indicating that it was ever even used on the computer itself.
+* Tails is designed to leave no data on the computer you are using; it writes nothing to the hard drive, and runs only in RAM (memory), which is automatically erased after shutdown. The Tails live system itself (usually running on a USB) is also left untouched. The only way to save information is to move it to another USB partition before shutting down (see below). The purpose of this is to avoid leaving forensic traces that someone with physical access to your computer or your Tails USB could later read. Things like Internet search history, cache, "recently edited" documents, etc. are all erased.  Tails also leaves no trace that it was ever used on the computer itself.
 
 ***Incognito***
 
-* Tails is also a system that allows you to be incognito, meaning anonymous. It hides the elements that could reveal your identity, your location, etc. Tails makes use of the [Tor anonymity network](/glossary#tor-network) to protect your anonymity online by forcing all default software to connect to the Internet through Tor. If an application tries to connect to the Internet directly, Tails automatically blocks the connection. Tails also changes the "MAC address" of your network hardware, which can be used to uniquely identify your laptop.
+* Tails is also a system that allows you to be incognito, or anonymous. It hides the elements that could reveal your identity, location, etc. Tails uses the [Tor anonymity network](/glossary#tor-network) to protect your anonymity online by forcing all default software to connect to the Internet through Tor. If an application tries to connect to the Internet directly, Tails will automatically block the connection. Tails also changes the "MAC address" of your network hardware, which can be used to uniquely identify your laptop.
 
 ![](tor-features.png)
 
 ***Security***
 
-* Tails is designed with security in mind. A minimal, functional, and verified environment is already installed (with everything necessary for simple word processing, image processing, etc.). It is bundled with easy-to-use [encryption](/glossary/#encryption) and data deletion tools and protections from common attacks or threats. 
+* Tails was designed with security in mind. A minimal, functional, and verified environment is already installed (with everything needed for basic word processing, image editing, etc.). It comes bundled with easy-to-use [encryption](/glossary/#encryption) and data deletion tools, as well as protection against common attacks or threats. 
 
-The digital security of today will not necessarily be secure tomorrow. **Protecting personal data requires regular updates.** Digital tools are unreliable if they are never updated, and to have lasting confidence in these tools, it is good to check that teams are actively maintaining them, and to know that they have a good reputation. It is important to understand the spirit of Tails: everything is designed with security in mind. However, in software, there is no such thing as an all-powerful tool; there are always limits. Moreover, **the way you use Tails can create security issues.** 
+Today's digital security is not necessarily tomorrow's. **Protecting personal data requires regular updates.** Digital tools are unreliable if they are never updated, and to have lasting confidence in these tools, it is good to know that teams are actively maintaining them and that they have a good reputation. It is important to understand the spirit of Tails: everything is designed with security in mind. However, in software, there is no such thing as an omnipotent tool; there are always limits. Also, **the way you use Tails can create security problems.** 
 
-Tails is free and [open-source](/glossary/#open-source) software. Anyone can consult the source code (the recipe), download it, and modify it... It is absolutely necessary to make sure that the version of Tails in your possession is healthy. Don't neglect the verification steps during the installation which are well-explained on the Tails website.  
+Tails is free and [open-source](/glossary/#open-source) software. Anyone can view, download and modify the source code (the recipe)... It is absolutely necessary to make sure that the version of Tails you have is sound. Don't neglect the verification steps during installation, which are well explained on the Tails website.  
 
-Tails allows non-experts to benefit from digital security and anonymity without too steep of a learning curve. Using Tor is central to digital anonymity and Tails helps us to make as few mistakes as possible when using Tor as well as some other tools. By using Tails, it takes very little effort to make everyday digital behavior more secure, even if it sometimes seems “inconvenient”. The "convenient" alternative, on the other hand, means an increased risk of repression – not only for you, but also for those with whom you communicate.
+Tails allows non-experts to benefit from digital security and anonymity without a steep learning curve. Using Tor is central to digital anonymity, and Tails helps us make as few mistakes as possible when using Tor and some other tools. Using Tails takes very little effort to make everyday digital behavior more secure, even if it seems “inconvenient” at times. The "convenient" alternative, on the other hand, means an increased risk of repression – not only for you, but also for those you communicate with.
 
-This tutorial is splut up into several sections. The first is about the basics for starting to use Tails. The second section contains tips on using software included in Tails, as well as what you need to know about how Tor works. The third section is about troubleshooting any issues that you might encounter with your Tails USB to avoid giving up at the first problem - most of the time the solution is simple!
+This tutorial is divided into several sections. The first covers the basics for getting started with Tails. The second section covers tips for using the software included in Tails, as well as what you need to know about how Tor works. The third section is about troubleshooting any problems that you might encounter with your Tails USB, so do not give up at the first problem - most of the time the solution is simple!
 
-## The concept of a threat model
+## The Threat Model Concept
 
-Tails is not magic and has plenty of limitations. The Internet and computers are hostile territory and designed to steal your data. Tails does not protect you from human error, compromised hardware, compromised firmware, being hacked, or certain other types of attacks. There is no absolutely perfect security on the Internet, which is why it is important to make a [threat model](/glossary/#threat-model).
+Tails is not magic and has many limitations. The Internet and computers are hostile territory designed to steal your data. Tails will not protect you from human error, compromised hardware, compromised firmware, being hacked, or certain other types of attacks. There is no such thing as perfect security on the Internet, which is why building a [threat model](/glossary/#threat-model) is so important.
 
-Building a threat model is simply a matter of asking yourself certain questions. Who am I defending myself against? What are their capacities? What would the consequences be if they had access to such data? And then assessing, based on the particular situation, how you can protect yourself. 
+Building a threat model is simply a matter of asking yourself certain questions. Who am I defending against? What are their capabilities? What would be the consequences if they had access to that data? And then, based on the particular situation, assess how you can protect yourself. 
 
-It makes no sense to say "such and such a tool is secure". Security always depends on the threat model and the level (network, hardware, software, etc.) being discussed. For more detailed information on this topic, see the [Threat Library](https://www.csrc.link/threat-library/). 
+It makes no sense to say "this tool is secure". Security always depends on the threat model and the level (network, hardware, software, etc.). For more information on this topic, see the [Threat Library](https://www.csrc.link/threat-library/). 
 
 # I) The Basics of Using Tails
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-### Selecting a USB/DVD:
+### Select a USB/DVD:
 
-* Tails only works on USBs that are at least 8 GB, on DVDs, or on SD cards. Any data on the USB will be completely erased at installation, so save it elsewhere beforehand, and if you don't want any trace of what was there before, use a new USB. 
-* The article [Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best/#using-a-write-protect-switch) recommends using a USB with a write-protect switch (an unchangeable data medium). When locked, the switch prevents the contents of the USB from being changed at all. This protects you from leaving anything behind when doing sensitive work, and from the laptop compromising your Tails USB. The write-protect switch will need to be switched off during installation. If you are unable to obtain such a USB, you can use Tails from a DVD-R/DVD+R, or always boot it with the `toram` option (described in the article).
+* Tails will only work with USBs that are at least 8GB, DVDs, or SD cards. Any data on the USB will be completely erased during installation, so save it somewhere else before, and if you don't want any trace of what was there before, use a new USB. 
+* The [Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best/#using-a-write-protect-switch) article recommends using a USB with a write-protect switch (an unmodifiable disk). When locked, the switch prevents the contents of the USB from being changed at all. This prevents you from leaving anything behind when doing sensitive work, and prevents your laptop from compromising your Tails USB. The write-protect switch must be turned off during installation. If you are unable to obtain such a USB, you can run Tails from a DVD-R/DVD+R, or always boot with the `toram` option (described in the article).
 
-### Selecting a laptop:
+### Select a laptop:
 
-* Although it is possible to use Tails on a desktop computer, this is not advised because it is only possible to [detect physical tampering](/posts/tamper/#tamper-evident-laptop-screws) on a laptop. Additionally, it would be harder to tell if someone had opened your desktop case and installed a physical keylogger. See [Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best/#reducing-risks-when-using-untrusted-computers) for more on obtaining a laptop. 
+* Although it is possible to use Tails on a desktop computer, it is not recommended because it is only possible to [detect physical tampering](/posts/tamper/#tamper-evident-laptop-screws) on a laptop. Also, it would be harder to detect if someone had opened your desktop case and installed a physical keylogger. See [Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best/#reducing-risks-when-using-untrusted-computers) for more information on obtaining a laptop. 
 
-Some laptop and some USB models do not work with Tails, or some features will not work. To see whether your model has known issues, consult the [Tails known issues page](https://tails.boum.org/support/known_issues/).
+Some laptop and USB models will not work with Tails, or some features will not work. To see if your model has any known issues, see the [Tails known issues page](https://tails.boum.org/support/known_issues/).
 
-If Tails is too slow, make sure that the USB is 3.0 or higher, and using a USB 3.0 port on the laptop. If Tails freezes often, you can install more RAM on your computer. 8 GB will be enough. 
+If Tails is too slow, make sure the USB is 3.0 or higher and that you are using a USB 3.0 port on the laptop. If Tails freezes frequently, you can add more RAM to your computer. 8GB should be sufficient. 
 
 ## Installation
 
-To install Tails on a USB, you need a "source" and a USB (8 GB or larger).
+To install Tails on a USB, you need a "source" and a USB (8GB or larger).
 
-Concerning the "source", there are two solutions.
+There are two solutions for the "source".
 
-### Solution 1: Installation from another Tails USB
+### Solution 1: Install from another Tails USB
 
-* This requires knowing a Tails user you trust. A very straightforward software called the Tails Installer allows you to "clone" an existing Tails USB onto a new USB in a few minutes; see the documentation for cloning from a [PC](https://tails.boum.org/install/clone/pc/index.en.html) or [Mac](https://tails.boum.org/install/clone/mac/index.en.html). Any Persistent Storage data isn't transferred. The disadvantage of this method is that it can spread a compromised installation.
+* This requires knowing a Tails user you trust. A very simple software called the Tails Installer allows you to "clone" an existing Tails USB to a new one in a few minutes; see the documentation for cloning from a [PC](https://tails.boum.org/install/clone/pc/index.en.html) or [Mac](https://tails.boum.org/install/clone/mac/index.en.html). Any Persistent Storage data won't be transferred. The downside of this method is that it may spread a compromised installation.
 
-### Solution 2: Installation by download (Preferred)
+### Solution 2: Install by download (preferred)
 
-* You have to follow the [Tails installation guide](https://tails.boum.org/install/index.en.html). The Tails website will guide you step by step; it is important to follow the entire tutorial. It is possible for an attacker to intercept and modify the data ([man-in-the-middle attack](/glossary#man-in-the-middle-attack)) on its way to you, so do not skip the verification steps. As discussed in [Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best/#reducing-risks-when-using-untrusted-computers), the install method [using GnuPG](https://tails.boum.org/install/expert/index.en.html) is preferable, because it checks the integrity of the download more thoroughly.
+* You must follow the [Tails installation instructions](https://tails.boum.org/install/index.en.html). The Tails website provides step-by-step instructions; it is important to follow the entire tutorial. It is possible for an attacker to intercept and modify the data on its way to you ([man-in-the-middle attack](/glossary#man-in-the-middle-attack)), so do not skip the verification steps. As discussed in [Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best/#reducing-risks-when-using-untrusted-computers), the [GnuPG installation method](https://tails.boum.org/install/expert/index.en.html) is preferable because it more thoroughly verifies the integrity of the download.
 
 ## Booting from your Tails USB 
 
-Once you have a Tails USB, follow the Tails guides to [start Tails on a Mac or PC computer](https://tails.boum.org/doc/first_steps/start/index.en.html). The Tails USB must be inserted before turning on the laptop. The "Boot Loader" screen will appear and Tails starts automatically after 4 seconds. 
+Once you have a Tails USB, follow the Tails instructions [for booting Tails on a Mac or PC](https://tails.boum.org/doc/first_steps/start/index.en.html). The Tails USB must be inserted before turning on your laptop. The Boot Loader screen will appear and Tails will start automatically after 4 seconds. 
 
 ![](grub.png)
 
-After loading for around 30 more seconds, the [Welcome Screen](https://tails.boum.org/doc/first_steps/welcome_screen/index.en.html) appears.
+After about 30 seconds of loading, the [Welcome Screen](https://tails.boum.org/doc/first_steps/welcome_screen/index.en.html) will appear.
 
 ![](welcome_screen.png)
 
-In the Welcome Screen, select your language and keyboard layout in the **Language & Region** section. For Mac users, there is a keyboard layout for Macintosh. Under "Additional Settings" you will find a **+** button, click on it and further configuration options will appear:
+On the Welcome Screen, select your language and keyboard layout in the **Language & Region** section. For Mac users, there is a keyboard layout for Macintosh. Under "Additional Settings" you will find a **+** button, click it and more configuration options will appear:
 
 * Administration Password 
-	* Set this if you need administration rights for a program. For example, this is necessary to install additional software to use during your Tails session. In the following dialog you can write any password (and you must remember it!). It only stays valid for this one Tails session. Dedicate the session only to what you need administration rights for, and then reboot without an administration password before doing any other activities. 
+	* Set this if you need administration rights for a program. This is necessary, for example, to install additional software that you want to use during your Tails session. In the following dialog you can enter any password (and you have to remember it!). It will only be valid for this one Tails session. Use the session only for what you need administration privileges for, and then reboot without an administration password before doing anything else. 
 * MAC Address Spoofing 
-	* We recommend never disabling this. It is enabled by default. 
+	* We recommend that you never disable this. It is enabled by default. 
 * Network Connection 
-	* With "Disable all networking" you can disable all software network adapters at start-up. If you intend to have an 'offline' Tails session, it makes sense to do this before Tails starts its network functionality.  
+	* "Disable all networking" allows you to disable all software network adapters at startup. If you intend to have an 'offline' Tails session, it makes sense to do this before Tails starts its networking functionality.  
 * Unsafe Browser 
-	* The Unsafe Browser is enabled by default, which doesn't use Tor. An attacker could [exploit](/glossary/#exploit) a vulnerability in another application in Tails to launch an invisible Unsafe Browser and reveal your true IP address. This is possible even if you don't use the Unsafe Browser yourself. For example, an attacker could exploit a vulnerability in Thunderbird by sending you a [phishing](/glossary/#phishing) email that launches an invisible Unsafe Browser which visits a website, revealing your IP address. Such an attack is very unlikely, but it could be carried out by a strong attacker, such as a government or a hacking company. For this reason, we **recommend disabling Unsafe Browser with every session**. Leave Unsafe Browser enabled only when you need to go through a 'captive portal' to connect to the Internet (when you have to click a box or log in to connect to the internet, common at Internet cafes, public wifi, etc.). 
+	* The Unsafe Browser is enabled by default and doesn't use Tor. An attacker could [exploit](/glossary/#exploit) a vulnerability in another application in Tails to launch an invisible Unsafe Browser and reveal your real IP address. This is possible even if you're not using the Unsafe Browser. For example, an attacker could exploit a vulnerability in Thunderbird by sending you a [phishing](/glossary/#phishing) email that launches an invisible Unsafe Browser that visits a website and reveals your IP address. Such an attack is very unlikely, but it could be carried out by a strong attacker, such as a government or a hacking company. For this reason, we **recommend that you disable Unsafe Browser for each session**. Leave Unsafe Browser enabled only when you need to go through a "captive portal" to connect to the Internet (when you have to click a box or log in to connect to the internet, common in Internet cafes, public Wi-Fi, etc.). 
 
-When you have enabled Persistent Storage, the passphrase to unlock it will appear in this window. If you haven't enabled Persistent Storage, no data will persist on your Tails USB beyond this session. Click **Start Tails**. After 15 to 30 seconds, the Tails desktop appears."
+If you have Persistent Storage enabled, the passphrase to unlock it will appear in this window. If you haven't enabled Persistent Storage, no data will be stored on your Tails USB beyond this session. Click **Start Tails**. After 15 to 30 seconds, the Tails desktop will appear.
 
-## Using the Tails desktop
+## Using the Tails Desktop
 
 ![](desktop-label.png)
 
 Tails is a classic and simple operating system. 
 
-1. The "Activities" menu. Allows you to see an overview of windows and applications. It also allows you to search through applications, files, and folders. You can also access "Activities" by sending the mouse to the top left corner of your screen or by pressing the Command/Windows (❖) key on the keyboard.
-2. The Applications menu. Lists available applications (software), classified by theme. 
-3. The Places menu. Shortcuts to different folders and storage media, which can also be accessed with the Files browser (**Applications → Accessories → Files**). 
-4. Date and time. Once connected to the Internet, all the Tails systems around the world [have the same time](https://tails.boum.org/doc/first_steps/desktop/time/index.en.html). 
-5. The Tor status indicator. Tells you if you are connected to the Tor network. If there is an X over the onion icon, you are not connected. You can open the "Onion Circuits" application from here. Verify your Tor connection by visiting `check.torproject.org` in Tor Browser. 
-6. The "Universal Access" button. This menu allows you to activate accessibility software like the screen reader, visual keyboard, and large text display.
-7. Choice of keyboard layouts. An icon that shows the current keyboard layout (in the above example, en for an English layout). Clicking it will provide options for other layouts selected at the Welcome Screen.
-8. The system menu. You can use this to change screen brightness and the volume, the Wi-Fi and Ethernet connection (if it is connected), the battery status, and the restart and shutdown buttons. 
-9. The "workspaces" icon. This button toggles between multiple views of the desktop (the “workspaces”); this can help prevent visual crowding on a small screen.  
+1. The Activities menu. Allows you to see an overview of your windows and applications. It also allows you to search for applications, files, and folders. You can also access Activities by sending your mouse to the top left corner of your screen or by pressing the Command/Window (❖) key.
+2. The Applications menu. Lists available applications (software), organized by topic. 
+3. The Places menu. Shortcuts to various folders and storage devices, which can also be accessed through the Files browser (**Applications → Accessories → Files**). 
+4. Date and time. Once connected to the Internet, all Tails systems around the world [share the same time](https://tails.boum.org/doc/first_steps/desktop/time/index.en.html). 
+5. The Tor status indicator. Tells you if you are connected to the Tor network. If there is an X over the onion icon, you are not connected. You can open the Onion Circuits application from here. Check your Tor connection by visiting `check.torproject.org` in your Tor Browser. 
+6. The "Universal Access" button. This menu allows you to enable accessibility software such as the screen reader, visual keyboard, and large text display.
+7. Choice of keyboard layouts. An icon showing the current keyboard layout (in the example above, en for an English layout). Clicking it provides options for other layouts selected at the Welcome Screen.
+8. The System menu. From here, you can change the screen brightness and volume, the Wi-Fi and Ethernet connection (if connected), the battery status, and the restart and shutdown buttons. 
+9. The Workspaces icon. This button toggles between multiple views of the desktop (called "workspaces”), which can help reduce visual clutter on a small screen.  
 
-If your laptop is equipped with Wi-Fi but there is no Wi-Fi option in the system menu, see the [troubleshooting documentation](https://tails.boum.org/doc/anonymous_internet/no-wifi/index.en.html). Once you connect to Wi-Fi, a Tor Connection assistant appears to help you to connect to the Tor network. Choose **Connect to Tor automatically** unless you are in a country where you need to hide that you are using Tor (in which case, you'll need to configure [a bridge](https://tails.boum.org/doc/anonymous_internet/tor/index.en.html#hiding)).
+If your laptop is equipped with Wi-Fi, but there is no Wi-Fi option in the system menu, see the [troubleshooting documentation](https://tails.boum.org/doc/anonymous_internet/no-wifi/index.en.html). Once you connect to Wi-Fi, a Tor Connection assistant will appear to help you connect to the Tor network. Select **Connect to Tor automatically**, unless you are in a country where you need to hide that you're using Tor (in which case you'll need to configure [a bridge](https://tails.boum.org/doc/anonymous_internet/tor/index.en.html#hiding)).
 
 ## Optional: Create and Configure Persistent Storage
 
-Tails is amnesiac by default. It forgets everything you did as soon as you end the session. This isn't always what you want - for instance, you may want to work on a document that you can't complete in one sitting. The same is true for installing additional software: you would have to redo the installation after each start-up. Tails has a feature called Persistent Storage, which allows you to save specific data between sessions. This is explicitly less secure, but necessary for some activities. 
+Tails is amnesiac by default. It will forget everything you have done as soon as you end the session. This isn't always what you want - for example, you may want to work on a document that you can't finish in one session. The same goes for installing additional software: you would have to redo the installation each time you start up. Tails has a feature called Persistent Storage, which allows you to save certain data between sessions. This is explicitly less secure, but necessary for some activities. 
 
-The principle behind Persistent Storage is to create a second storage area (called a partition) on your Tails USB, which is encrypted. This new partition allows a user to make some data persistent – that is, to keep it saved– between Tails sessions. It's very simple to enable Persistent Storage. To create the [Persistent Storage](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/create/index.en.html), choose **Applications → Tails → Persistent Storage**. 
+The principle behind Persistent Storage is to create a second storage area (called a partition) on your Tails USB that is encrypted. This new partition allows a user to make some data persistent – that is, to keep it between Tails sessions. It's very easy to enable Persistent Storage. To create the [Persistent Storage](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/create/index.en.html), choose **Applications → Tails → Persistent Storage**. 
 
-A window opens where you have to type a passphrase; see [Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best/#passwords) for notes on passphrase strength. You'll then [configure](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/configure/index.en.html) what you need to keep in Persistent Storage. Persistent Storage can be enabled for several types of data:
+A window will pop up asking you to enter a passphrase; see [Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best/#passwords) for information on passphrase strength. You'll then [configure](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/configure/index.en.html) what you want to keep in Persistent Storage. Persistent Storage can be enabled for several types of data:
 
 **Personal Documents:**
 
-* **Persistent Folder**: Data such as your personal files, documents, or images that you're working on. 
+* **Persistent Folder**: Data such as your personal files, documents, or images you're working on. 
 
 **System Settings:**
 
@@ -151,44 +151,44 @@ A window opens where you have to type a passphrase; see [Tails Best Practices](/
 
 **Network:**
 
-* **Network Connections**: The passwords for Wi-Fi networks can be saved so you don't have to type them every time.  
-* **Tor Bridge**: When the Tor Bridge feature is turned on (for users in countries that censor Tor), the last Tor Bridge that you used is saved. 
+* **Network Connections**: The passwords for Wi-Fi networks can be saved so you don't have to enter them every time.  
+* **Tor Bridge**: If Tor Bridge is enabled (for users in countries that censor Tor), the last Tor Bridge you used will be remembered. 
 
 **Applications:**
 
 * **Tor Browser Bookmarks**: Tor Browser bookmarks. 
-* **Electrum Bitcoin Wallet**: The bitcoin wallet and preferences. 
-* **Thunderbird Email Client**: The email inbox, feeds, and OpenPGP keys of Thunderbird. 
-* **GnuPG**: The OpenPGP keys that you create or import into GnuPG and Kleopatra. 
+* **Electrum Bitcoin Wallet**: The bitcoin wallet and settings. 
+* **Thunderbird Email Client**: The Thunderbird email inbox, feeds, and OpenPGP keys. 
+* **GnuPG**: The OpenPGP keys you create or import into GnuPG and Kleopatra. 
 * **Pidgin**: The account files of this chat application (using the XMPP protocol).
 * **SSH Client**: SSH is used to connect to servers. All files related to SSH. 
 
 **Advanced Settings:**
 
-* **Additional Software**: With this feature enabled, a list of additional software of your choice is automatically installed every time you start Tails. The corresponding software packages are stored in the Persistent Storage. They are automatically upgraded after you connect to the Internet. [Be careful what you install](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/additional_software/index.en.html#warning).
-* **Dotfiles**: On Tails and Linux in general, the name of configuration files often starts with a dot and are sometimes called "dotfiles" for this reason. These can be saved in the Persistent Storage. Be careful about what configuration settings you change, because altering default settings can break your anonymity. 
+* **Additional Software**: If this feature is enabled, a list of additional software of your choice will be automatically installed each time you start Tails. These software packages are stored in Persistent Storage. They are automatically updated when you connect to the Internet. [Be careful what you install](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/additional_software/index.en.html#warning).
+* **Dotfiles**: In Tails and Linux in general, the names of configuration files often start with a dot, so they are sometimes called "dotfiles". These can be saved in the Persistent Storage. Be careful what configuration settings you change, as changing the defaults can break your anonymity. 
 
-To use Persistent Storage, you must unlock it on the Welcome Screen. If you want to change the passphrase, see the [documentation](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/passphrase/index.en.html). If you ever forget the passphrase, it is impossible to recover it; you'll need to [delete](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/delete/index.en.html) the Persistent Storage and start again. 
+To use Persistent Storage, you must unlock it on the Welcome Screen. If you want to change the passphrase, see the [documentation](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/passphrase/index.en.html). If you ever forget your passphrase, it's impossible to recover it; you'll have to [delete](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/delete/index.en.html) the Persistent Storage and start over. 
 
-In [Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best/#using-a-write-protect-switch), we recommend against using Persistent Storage in most cases. Any files that need to persist can instead be saved to a second [LUKS-encrypted USB](#how-to-create-an-encrypted-usb). Most Persistent Storage features do not work well with USBs that have a write-protect switch. 
+In [Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best/#using-a-write-protect-switch), we recommend against using Persistent Storage in most cases. Any files that need to be persistent can be stored on a second [LUKS-encrypted USB](#how-to-create-an-encrypted-usb) instead. Most Persistent Storage features do not work well with USBs that have a write-protect switch. 
 
 ## Upgrading the Tails USB
 
-In order for Tails to remain secure, the operating system must be continually developed and any security flaws must be resolved through upgrades. It is important to always use the latest version (Tails is updated approximately every month) because security vulnerabilities are regularly discovered in the programs used by Tails, which in the worst case scenario can lead to your identity, IP address, etc., being revealed. A Tails upgrade will patch these security holes and usually enhance other features as well. 
+In order for Tails to remain secure, the operating system must be continually developed and any security vulnerabilities must be addressed through upgrades. It is important to always use the latest version (Tails is updated approximately every month), as security vulnerabilities are regularly discovered in the programs used by Tails, which in the worst case could lead to your identity, IP address, etc. being exposed. A Tails upgrade will fix these vulnerabilities and usually improve other features as well. 
 
-Every time you start Tails, right after you connect to the Tor network the Tails Upgrader checks if you are using the latest version of Tails. There are 2 types of upgrades.
+Every time you start Tails, right after you connect to the Tor network, the Tails Upgrader checks to see if you have the latest version of Tails. There are two types of upgrades.
 
 ![](upgrader_automatic.png)
 
 ### The [automatic upgrade](https://tails.boum.org/doc/upgrade/index.en.html)
 
-* A window will appear with information about the upgrade, and you have to click **Upgrade now**. Wait a little while for it to complete, then click 'apply upgrade' and it will cut your Internet for a moment. Do not shut down before you see the Restart Tails window. If the upgrade fails (for instance, because it shut down before it was finished), your Persistent Storage is not affected, but you may not be able to restart your Tails USB. If you are using a USB with a write-protect switch, you will have to unlock it for the dedicated session in which you are performing the upgrade.
+* A window will appear with information about the upgrade, and you will need to click **Upgrade now**. Wait a while for it to complete, then click 'Apply upgrade' and your internet will be interrupted for a moment. Wait until you see the Restart Tails window. If the upgrade fails (for example, because you shut down before it was finished), your Persistent Storage will not be affected, but you may not be able to restart your Tails USB. If you are using a USB with a write-protect switch, you will need to unlock it for the dedicated session in which you are performing the upgrade.
 
 ### The [manual upgrade](https://tails.boum.org/upgrade/tails/index.en.html)
 
-* Sometimes the upgrade window will tell you that you need to do a manual upgrade. This type of upgrade is only for major upgrades or in case there is an issue automatic upgrades. 
-* If you already have a second Tails USB with the latest version, boot it, and navigate to **Applications → Tails → Tails Installer**. Instead of the button reading "install", you'll be asked to "upgrade". The difference is that it won't format the whole USB, it will just replace the Tails partition with an updated version. 
-* If you don't have a second Tails USB with the latest version, you'll need a blank USB and the (out of date) Tails USB. See the [documentation for manual upgrades](https://tails.boum.org/upgrade/tails/index.en.html). 
+* Sometimes the upgrade window will tell you that you need to do a manual upgrade. This type of upgrade is only used for major upgrades or if there is a problem with automatic upgrades. 
+* If you already have a second Tails USB with the latest version, boot up and go to **Applications → Tails → Tails Installer**. Instead of the "install" button, you'll be asked to "upgrade". The difference is that it doesn't format the whole USB, it just replaces the Tails partition with an updated version. 
+* If you don't have a second Tails USB with the latest version, you'll need a blank USB and the (outdated) Tails USB. See the [documentation for manual upgrades](https://tails.boum.org/upgrade/tails/index.en.html). 
 
 # II) Going Further: Several Tips and Explanations
 
@@ -196,117 +196,117 @@ Every time you start Tails, right after you connect to the Tor network the Tails
 
 ### What is Tor?
 
-[Tor](/glossary/#tor-network) stands for The Onion Router, and is the best way to be anonymous on the Internet. Tor is an open-source software associated with a public network of several thousand relays (servers). Instead of connecting directly to a location on the Internet, Tor will take a detour via three intermediate relays. Tor Browser uses the Tor network, but other applications can too if they are properly configured. All applications that use the internet included in Tails by default use Tor. 
+[Tor](/glossary/#tor-network), which stands for The Onion Router, is the best way to be anonymous on the Internet. Tor is open-source software connected to a public network of thousands of relays (servers). Instead of connecting directly to a location on the Internet, Tor takes a detour through three intermediate relays. The Tor Browser uses the Tor network, but other applications can as well if they are configured properly. All internet-facing applications included in Tails by default use Tor. 
 
 ![](tor.png)
 
-Internet traffic, including the IP address of the final destination, is encrypted in different layers like an onion. With each hop along the three relays, an encryption layer is removed. Each relay only knows the step before it, and after it (relay #3 knows that it comes from relay #2 and that it goes to such and such a website after, but does not know relay #1). 
+Internet traffic, including the IP address of the final destination, is encrypted in layers like an onion. Each hop along the three relays removes one layer of encryption. Each relay only knows the relay before it and the relay after it (relay #3 knows that it came from relay #2 and that it goes to such-and-such a website, but not relay #1). 
 
 ![See *anarsec.guide* for the animation.](anonymous-browsing.gif)
 
-This means that any intermediaries between you and relay #1 know you're using Tor but they don't know what site you're going to. Any intermediaries after relay #3 know that someone in the world is going to this site but don't know who it is. The web server of the site sees you coming from the IP address of relay #3. 
+This means that any intermediaries between you and relay #1 know that you're using Tor, but they don't know what site you're going to. Any intermediaries after relay #3 know that someone in the world is going to that site, but they don't know who it is. The site's web server sees you coming from the IP address of relay #3. 
 
-Tor has multiple limitations. For example, an entity with the appropriate technical and legal means can, if it assumes you're connecting from a specific Wi-Fi connection to post to a specific site, try to match what comes out of your connection to what goes into the site (a "correlation attack"). However, this type of attack has never been used to incriminate someone in court by itself, to our knowledge. For sensitive activities, use Internet connections that are not tied to your identity in order to protect yourself in case Tor fails.  
+Tor has several limitations. For example, if someone with the technical and legal means believes you're connecting from a particular Wi-Fi connection to visit a particular site, they can try to match what comes out of your connection with what goes into the site (a "correlation attack"). However, to our knowledge, this type of attack has never been used by itself to incriminate someone in court. For sensitive activities, use Internet connections that are not tied to your identity to protect yourself in case Tor fails.  
 
 ### What is HTTPS?
 
-Virtually all websites today use [HTTPS](/glossary/#https); the S stands for "secure" (for example, `https://www.anarsec.guide`). If you try to visit a website without `https://` on Tor Browser, there is a warning message before continuing. If you see `http://` instead of `https://` before the address of a website, it means that all intermediaries after relay #3 of the Tor network know what you are exchanging with the website (including your log-in information). HTTPS means that the digital records of what you do on the site you are visiting are protected with an encryption key that belongs to the site. Intermediaries after relay #3 will know that you are going to riseup.net, for example, but they will not have access to your emails and passwords nor will they know if you are consulting your emails or if you are reading a random page on the site. A little padlock appears to the left of the site address when you use HTTPS. 
+Virtually all websites today use [HTTPS](/glossary/#https); the S stands for "secure" (e.g., `https://www.anarsec.guide`). If you try to visit a website without `https://` in the Tor Browser, you will receive a warning before proceeding. If you see `http://` instead of `https://` in front of a website's address, it means that all intermediaries after relay #3 of the Tor network know what you are exchanging with the website (including your credentials). HTTPS means that the digital record of what you do on the site you are visiting is protected by an encryption key that belongs to the site. Intermediaries after relay #3 will know that you are going to, for example, riseup.net, but they will not have access to your emails and passwords, nor will they know if you are checking your emails or reading a random page on the site. A small padlock appears to the left of the site address when you are using HTTPS. 
 
-If there is a yellow warning on the padlock, it means that some elements are not encrypted (they use HTTP) on the page you're browsing, which can reveal the exact page or allow intermediaries to partially modify the page. By default, Tor Browser uses HTTPS-Only Mode to prevent users from visiting HTTP websites. 
+If there's a yellow warning on the padlock, it means that some elements on the page you're viewing are not encrypted (they use HTTP), which could reveal the exact page or allow intermediaries to partially modify the page. By default, the Tor Browser uses HTTPS-Only Mode to prevent users from visiting HTTP sites. 
 
 ![](http.png)
 
-HTTPS is essential both to limit your web fingerprint, but also to prevent an intermediary from modifying the data you exchange with websites. If the intermediary cannot decrypt the data, they cannot modify it. For an overview of HTTP / HTTPS connections with and without Tor, and what information is visible to various third parties, see the EFF's [interactive illustration](https://www.eff.org/pages/tor-and-https). 
+HTTPS is essential both to limit your web fingerprint and to prevent an intermediary from modifying the data you exchange with websites. If the intermediary cannot decrypt the data, they cannot modify it. For an overview of HTTP / HTTPS connections with and without Tor, and what information is visible to various third parties, see the EFF's [interactive graphic](https://www.eff.org/pages/tor-and-https). 
 
 In short, don't visit websites that don't use HTTPS. 
 
 ### Onion Services: what is .onion?
 
-Perhaps you have seen a strange site address containing 56 random characters, ending in .onion? This is called an onion service, and the only way to visit a website that uses such an address is to use the Tor Browser. The "deepweb" and "darkweb" are terms popularized in news media in recent years to describe these onion services. 
+Have you ever seen a strange website address with 56 random characters ending in .onion? This is called an onion service, and the only way to visit a website using such an address is to use the Tor Browser. The "deepweb" and "darkweb" are terms that have been popularized in the media in recent years to describe these onion services. 
 
 ![](lead.webp)
 
-Anyone can create an .onion site. But why would they want to? Well, the server location is anonymized, so authorities cannot find out where the website is hosted in order to take it down. When you send data to an .onion site, after the standard Tor circuit you enter the site's three Tor relays. So we have 6 Tor relays between us and the site; we know the first 3 relays, the site knows the last 3, and each Tor node just knows the relay before and after. Unlike an HTTPS normal website, it's all Tor encrypted from end to end. 
+Anyone can set up an .onion site. But why would they want to? Well, the server location is anonymized, so authorities cannot find out where the site is hosted in order to shut it down. When you send data to an .onion site, you enter the site's three Tor relays after the standard Tor circuit. So we have 6 Tor relays between us and the site; we know the first 3 relays, the site knows the last 3, and each Tor node only knows the relay before and after. Unlike a normal HTTPS website, it's all Tor encrypted from end to end. 
 
-This means that both the client (your laptop) and the server (where the site lives) remain anonymous, whereas for a normal website, only the client is anonymous. In addition to being more anonymous for the server, it is also more anonymous for the client: you never leave the Tor network, so it is not possible to intercept after relay #3.  
+This means that both the client (your laptop) and the server (where the site lives) remain anonymous, whereas with a normal website, only the client is anonymous. In addition to being more anonymous for the server, it is also more anonymous for the client: you never leave the Tor network, so it is not possible to intercept you after relay #3.  
 
-The .onion site address is so long because it includes the site's certificate. HTTPS is unnecessary; security depends on knowing the site's .onion address. 
+The .onion site address is long because it includes the site's certificate. HTTPS is unnecessary; security depends on knowing the site's .onion address. 
 
-Some sites offer both a classic URL as well as an .onion address. In this case, if the site has been configured for it, an indication ".onion available" should appear next to the URL. If not, sometimes the site indicates the .onion address somewhere on its page. To find out the addresses of sites which are only available as .onion, you have to either get them by word of mouth, or through websites that list other .onion sites, such as this [GitHub page](https://github.com/alecmuffett/real-world-onion-sites).
+Some sites offer both a classic URL and an .onion address. In this case, if the site has been configured to do so, an indication of ".onion available" should appear next to the URL. If not, sometimes the site will list the .onion address somewhere on its page. To find out the addresses of sites that are only available as .onion, you will need to either find them by word of mouth, or through websites that list other .onion sites, such as this [GitHub page](https://github.com/alecmuffett/real-world-onion-sites).
 
 ### Sites that block Tor
 
-Some sites block users who are visiting through the Tor network or otherwise making visitng the site more inconvenient. Some sites might force you to complete CAPTCHAs or to provide additional personal data (ID card, phone number…) before proceeding, or they may block Tor completely. 
+Some sites block users who visit through the Tor network, or otherwise make it inconvenient to visit the site. Some sites may force you to complete CAPTCHAs or provide additional personal information (ID, phone number…) before continuing, or they may block Tor altogether. 
 
 ![](new_identity.png)
 
-The site may only block specific Tor relays. In this case, you can change the Tor exit nodes for this site: click on the **≣	→ "New Tor circuit for this site"**. The Tor circuit (path) will only change for the one tab. You may have to do this several times in a row if you're unlucky enough to run into several relays that have been banned. 
+The site may only block certain Tor relays. In this case, you can change the Tor exit node being used for this site: click the **≣	→ "New Tor circuit for this site"** button. The Tor circuit (path) will only change for the one tab. You may need to do this several times in a row if you're unlucky enough to encounter multiple banned relays. 
 
-Since all Tor relays are public, it is also possible that the the site blocks the entire Tor network. In this case you can try to use a proxy to get to the site, such as `https://hide.me/en/proxy` (but only if you don't have to enter any personal data like login information). You can also check whether the page you want to access was saved to the Wayback Machine: `web.archive.org`.  
+Since all Tor relays are public, it is also possible that the site is blocking the entire Tor network. In this case, you can try using a proxy to access the site, such as `https://hide.me/en/proxy` (but only if you don't have to enter personal information like login credentials). You can also check if the page you want to access has been saved to the Wayback Machine: `web.archive.org`.  
 
-### Separate Anonymous Identities Cleanly
+### Cleanly Separate Anonymous Identities 
 
-It is not recommended to perform different tasks on the Internet that should not be associated with each other during the same Tails session. You have to separate different (contextual) identities carefully! For example, it is dangerous to check your personal emails via Tor Browser and to publish an anonymous text during the same session. That is, you should not be identifiable and anonymous on the Tor network at the same time. You also shouldn't use the Tor network under pseudonym A and pseudonym B in the same session, because these pseudonyms could be connected to each other on a monitored or compromised Tor exit relay. Shut down and restart Tails between Internet activities of different identities!
+It is not recommended to perform different Internet tasks that should not be associated with each other during the same Tails session. You must separate different (contextual) identities carefully! For example, it is dangerous to check your personal email and publish an anonymous text during the same session. In othe words, you should not be identifiable and anonymous on the Tor network at the same time. You also shouldn't use the Tor network under both pseudonym A and pseudonym B in the same session, as these pseudonyms could be connected through a monitored or compromised Tor exit relay. Shut down and restart Tails between Internet activities under different identities!
 
-The 'New Identity' feature of Tor Browser is not sufficient to completely separate contextual identities in Tails, since connections outside the Tor Browser are not restarted and you retain the same Tor entrance node. Restarting Tails is a better solution.
+The Tor Browser's 'New Identity' feature is not sufficient to completely separate contextual identities in Tails, since it does not reestablish connections outside the Tor Browser, and you keep the same Tor entry node. Restarting Tails is a better solution.
 
 ![](onion-circuits.png)
 
-The Onion Circuits application shows which Tor circuit a server connection uses (website or otherwise). Sometimes, it can be useful to make sure that the exit relay is not located in a certain country, to be further away from the easiest access of investigating authorities. In the example above, the connection to check.torproject.org goes through the relays tor7kryptonit, Casper03, and the exit node blackfish. If you click on a circuit, technical details about the relays of the circuit appear in the right pane. The 'New Identity' feature of Tor Browser is useful for changing this exit relay without needing to reboot the Tails session, which can be repeated until you have an exit relay you are happy with. We are not suggesting to use 'New Identity' when switching between identities, but simply when you want to change the exit node within the activities of the same identity. 
+The Onion Circuits application shows which Tor circuit a server connection (website or otherwise) is using. Sometimes it can be useful to make sure that the exit relay is not located in a certain country, to be further away from the easiest access for investigating authorities. In the example above, the connection to check.torproject.org goes through the relays tor7kryptonit, Casper03, and the exit node blackfish. Clicking on a circuit will display technical details about its relays in the right pane. The Tor Browser's 'New Identity' feature is useful for changing this exit relay without restarting the Tails session, which can be repeated until you have an exit relay you are happy with. We do not recommend using 'New Identity' to switch between identities, but only if you want to change the exit node within the same identity's activities. 
 
 ### Tor Browser security settings
 
 ![](safest.png)
 
-Like any software, Tor Browser has vulnerabilities that can be exploited. To limit this, it's important to keep Tails up to date, and we also recommend increasing the Tor Browser security settings: click on the shield icon and then **Change**. By default it's set to Standard, which maintains a browsing quality comparable to a normal browser. We recommend that you set the most restrictive setting before starting any browsing: **Safest**. 
+Like any software, the Tor Browser has vulnerabilities that can be exploited. To mitigate this, it's important to keep Tails up to date, and we also recommend that you increase the Tor Browser's security settings: click the shield icon, and then click **Change**. By default, it's set to Standard, which maintains a browsing experience comparable to a regular browser. We recommend that you set it to the most restrictive setting before you start browsing: **Safest**. 
 
-The layout of some sites may be modified, and some types of content will be disabled (SVG images, videos are click-to-play, etc.). For example, this website has two things which will be blocked on Safest mode because they rely on Javascript: dark mode, and the Table of Contents. Some sites will not work at all with these restrictions; if you have reason to trust them, you can view them on a less restrictive setting on a site by site basis. Note that both of the less restrictive setting allow scripts to function, which can [break your anonymity](https://arstechnica.com/information-technology/2013/08/attackers-wield-firefox-exploit-to-uncloak-anonymous-tor-users/) in a worst-case scenario.
+The layout of some pages may be changed, and some types of content may be disabled (SVG images, click-to-play videos, etc.). For example, this site has two things that will be blocked in Safest mode because they rely on Javascript: dark mode and the article's table of contents. Some sites will not work at all with these restrictions; if you have reason to trust them, you can view them with a less restrictive setting on a site-by-site basis. Note that both of these less restrictive settings allow scripts to work, which can [break your anonymity](https://arstechnica.com/information-technology/2013/08/attackers-wield-firefox-exploit-to-uncloak-anonymous-tor-users/) in a worst-case scenario.
 
 ### Downloading/uploading and the Tor Browser folder
 
-The Tor Browser on Tails is kept in a ["sandbox"](/glossary/#sandboxing) to prevent it from being able to snoop on all your files if it were comprised by a malicious website. This means there are special considerations for uploading or downloading files with the Tor Browser.
+The Tor Browser on Tails is kept in a ["sandbox"](/glossary/#sandboxing) to prevent it from snooping on all your files a malicious site compromised it. This means there are special considerations when uploading or downloading files using the Tor Browser.
 
-#### Downloads
+#### Downloading
 
-When you download something using the Tor Browser it will be saved in the Tor Browser folder (`/home/amnesia/Tor Browser/`), which is inside the "sandbox". If you want to do anything with this file, you should then move it out of the Tor Browser folder. You can use the file manager (**Applications → Accessories → Files**) to do this. 
+When you download something using the Tor Browser, it is stored in the Tor Browser folder (`/home/amnesia/Tor Browser/`), which is inside the sandbox. If you want to do anything with the file, you should move it out of the Tor Browser folder. You can use the file manager (**Applications → Accessories → Files**) to do this. 
 
 ![](nautilus.png)
 
-#### Uploads
+#### Uploading
 
-Similarly, if you want to upload something using the Tor Browser (for example attaching a file to a blog post or email you have open in the browser), you will first have to move or copy that file into the Tor Browser folder. Then it will be available to you when you go to select an upload in the Tor Browser.
+Similarly, if you want to upload something using the Tor Browser (for example, to include a file in a blog post), you will first need to move or copy the file to the Tor Browser folder. Then it will be available when you select an upload in the Tor Browser.
 
 #### RAM
 
-Be aware that if you are downloading or otherwise working with very large files, your RAM may fill up. This is because all of your Tails session is running in RAM (unless you have set up Persistent Storage, which uses the USB). If the RAM fills up, this will cause Tails to slow down or glitch. You can mitigate this by closing unneeded applications and deleting other files you have downloaded. In the worst case, you may need to enable Persistent Storage and move large files to the persistent Tor Browser folder so they stop using up RAM.
+Be aware that if you are downloading or otherwise working with very large files, your RAM (memory) may fill up. This is because your entire Tails session is running in RAM (unless you have set up Persistent Storage, which uses the USB). If the RAM fills up, Tails will slow down or crash. You can mitigate this by closing unneeded applications and deleting other files you have downloaded. In the worst case, you may need to enable Persistent Storage and move large files to the persistent Tor Browser folder to stop them from using RAM.
 
 ### Share Files with Onionshare
 
 ![](onionshare.png)
 
-It is possible to send a document through an .onion link thanks to [OnionShare](https://tails.boum.org/doc/anonymous_internet/onionshare/index.en.html) (**Applications → Internet → OnionShare**). Normally, OnionShare stops the hidden service after the files have been downloaded once. If you want to offer the files for multiple downloads, you need to go to Settings and deselect "Stop sharing after first download". As soon as you close OnionShare, cut the Internet connection, or shut down Tails, the files can no longer be accessed. This is a great way of sharing files because it doesn't require plugging a USB into someone else's computer, which we [recommended against doing](/posts/tails-best/#reducing-risks-when-using-untrusted-computers). The long .onion address can be shared via another channel (like a [Riseup Pad](https://pad.riseup.net/) you create that is easier to type). 
+It is possible to send a document through an .onion link thanks to [OnionShare](https://tails.boum.org/doc/anonymous_internet/onionshare/index.en.html) (**Applications → Internet → OnionShare**). By default, OnionShare stops the hidden service after the files have been downloaded once. If you want to offer the files for multiple downloads, you need to go to the settings and uncheck "Stop sharing after first download". As soon as you close OnionShare, disconnect from the Internet, or shut down Tails, the files will no longer be accessible. This is a great way to share files because it doesn't require you to plug a USB into someone else's computer, which we [don't recommended](/posts/tails-best/#reducing-risks-when-using-untrusted-computers). The long .onion address can be shared through another channel (such as a [Riseup Pad](https://pad.riseup.net/) you create that is easier to type). 
 
 ### Make Correlation Attacks More Difficult
 
-When you request a web page through a web browser, the site's server transmits it to you in small "packets" which have a specific size and timing (alongside other characteristics). When using Tor Browser, the sequence of transmitted packets can also be analyzed to look for patterns which can be matched with those of websites. To make this "correlation attack" more difficult, before connecting to a sensitive website you can open various other pages that require loading (such as streaming videos on a privacy-friendly website like kolektiva.media) in additional tabs of your browser. This is officially recommended by Tor - see [Do multiple things at once with your Tor client](https://blog.torproject.org/new-low-cost-traffic-analysis-attacks-mitigations/). This will generate a lot of additional traffic, which will make the analysis of your pattern more difficult.  
+When you request a web page through a web browser, the site's server sends it to you in small "packets" that have a specific size and timing (among other characteristics). When using the Tor Browser, the sequence of packets can also be analyzed to look for patterns that can be matched to those of websites. To make this "correlation attack" more difficult, before connecting to a sensitive site you can open various other pages that need to load (such as streaming video on a privacy-friendly site like kolektiva.media) in additional tabs of your browser. This is officially recommended by Tor - see [Do multiple things at once with your Tor client](https://blog.torproject.org/new-low-cost-traffic-analysis-attacks-mitigations/). This will generate a lot of additional traffic, making it harder to analyze your pattern.  
 
 ## Included Software
 
-Tails includes [many applications](https://tails.boum.org/doc/about/features/index.en.html) by default. The documentation gives an overview of [Internet applications](https://tails.boum.org/doc/anonymous_internet/index.en.html), applications for [encryption and privacy](https://tails.boum.org/doc/encryption_and_privacy/index.en.html), as well as applications for [working on sensitive documents](https://tails.boum.org/doc/sensitive_documents/index.en.html). In the rest of this section, we will just highlight common use cases relevant to anarchists, but read the documentation for further information. 
+Tails comes with [many applications](https://tails.boum.org/doc/about/features/index.en.html) by default. The documentation gives an overview of [Internet applications](https://tails.boum.org/doc/anonymous_internet/index.en.html), applications for [encryption and privacy](https://tails.boum.org/doc/encryption_and_privacy/index.en.html), and applications for [working with sensitive documents](https://tails.boum.org/doc/sensitive_documents/index.en.html). In the rest of this section, we will only highlight common use cases relevant to anarchists, but read the documentation for more information. 
 
 ## Password Manager (KeePassXC)
 
-If you're going to need to know a lot of passwords, it can be nice to have a secure way to store them (i.e. not a piece of paper next to your computer). KeePassXC is a password manager included in Tails (**Application → Favorites → KeePassXC**) which allows you to store your passwords in a file and protect them with a single master password. 
+When you need to know a lot of passwords, it can be nice to have a secure way to store them (i.e. not a piece of paper next to your computer). KeePassXC is a password manager included in Tails (**Application → Favorites → KeePassXC**) that allows you to store your passwords in a file and protect them with a single master password. 
 
-We recommend compartmentalizing your passwords - have a different KeePassXC file for each separate project. They can share the same Master Password - the point of the compartmentalization is so that at any given moment, only one project's passwords are unlocked. If the Tails session is compromised, the adversary won't get all passwords in one fell swoop, but just those that are currently unlocked. 
+We recommend that you compartmentalize your passwords - have a different KeePassXC file for each separate project. They can share the same Master Password - the point of compartmentalization is that only one project's passwords are unlocked at any given time. If the Tails session is compromised, the adversary won't get all of your passwords in one fell swoop, just the ones that are currently unlocked. 
 
->In the terminology used by KeePassXC, a *password* is a randomized sequence of characters (letters, numbers, and other symbols), whereas a *passphrase* is a random series of words.
+>In the terminology used by KeePassXC, a *password* is a random sequence of characters (letters, numbers, and other symbols), while a *passphrase* is a random sequence of words.
 
 ![](seconds.png)
 
-When you [create a new KeePassXC database](https://tails.boum.org/doc/encryption_and_privacy/manage_passwords/index.en.html#index1h1), in the **Encryption settings** window, increase the **Decryption time** from the default to the maximum (5 seconds). Then, select a [strong passphrase](/posts/tails-best/#passwords) and then save your KeePassXC file. This file will contain all your passwords/passphrases, and needs to persist between sessions on your Persistent Storage or on a separate LUKS-encrypted USB as described in [Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best/#using-a-write-protect-switch). The decryption time setting of a pre-existing KeePassXC file can be updated: **Database → Database Security → Encryption Settings**. 
+When you [create a new KeePassXC database](https://tails.boum.org/doc/encryption_and_privacy/manage_passwords/index.en.html#index1h1), increase the decryption time in the **Encryption settings** window from the default to the maximum (5 seconds). Then choose a [strong passphrase](/posts/tails-best/#passwords) and save your KeePassXC file. This file will contain all your passwords/passphrases and must persist between sessions on your Persistent Storage or on a separate LUKS-encrypted USB as described in [Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best/#using-a-write-protect-switch). The decryption time setting of an existing KeePassXC file can be updated: **Database → Database Security → Encryption Settings**. 
 
-As soon as you close KeePassXC, or if you don't use it for a few minutes, it will lock. Be careful not to forget your main passphrase.  
+As soon as you close KeePassXC or don't use it for a few minutes, it will lock. Make sure you do not forget your main passphrase.  
 
 ![](database.png) 
 
@@ -321,127 +321,127 @@ As soon as you close KeePassXC, or if you don't use it for a few minutes, it wil
 
 ## Really delete data from a USB 
 
-Clicking "Permanently delete" or sending files to the "trash" does not delete data... and it can be very easy to recover. When you "delete" a file, you are only telling the operating system that the contents of this file are no longer of interest to you. It then deletes its entry in the index of existing files. It can then reuse the space that the data took up to write something else. 
+Clicking "Permanently delete" or sending files to the "trash" does not delete data... and it can be very easy to recover it. When you "delete" a file, you are simply telling the operating system that you are no longer interested in the contents of that file. It then deletes its entry in the index of existing files. It can then reuse the space that the data occupied to write something else. 
 
-However, it may be weeks or years before that space is actually used for new files, which is when the old data actually disappears. In the meantime, if you look directly at what is written to the drive, you can find the contents of the files. This is a fairly simple operation, automated by many software programs that allow you to "recover" or "restore" data. You can't really delete data, however you can "overwrite data", which is a partial solution. 
+However, it can take weeks or years before that space is actually used for new files, at which point the old data actually disappears. In the meantime, if you look directly at what is written to the drive, you can find the contents of the files. This is a fairly simple process, automated by many software programs that allow you to "recover" or "restore" data. You can't really delete data, but you can overwrite data, which is a partial solution. 
 
-There are two types of storage; magnetic storage (HDD) and flash storage (SSD, NVMe, USB, memory cards, etc.). The [Wipe feature](https://tails.boum.org/doc/encryption_and_privacy/secure_deletion/index.en.html#index3h1) on Tails is not effective on USB storage. The only way to delete a file on a USB is to [reformat the entire USB](#how-to-create-an-encrypted-usb), and select **Overwrite existing data with zeros**. Doing it twice is a good idea.
+There are two types of storage: magnetic (HDD) and flash (SSD, NVMe, USB, memory cards, etc.). The [wipe feature](https://tails.boum.org/doc/encryption_and_privacy/secure_deletion/index.en.html#index3h1) on Tails is not effective on USB storage. The only way to erase a file on a USB is to [reformat the entire USB](#how-to-create-an-encrypted-usb) and select **Overwrite existing data with zeros**. Doing this twice is a good idea.
 
-However, traces of the previously written data may still remain. If you have sensitive documents that you really want to delete, it is best to physically destroy the USB after reformatting it. Thankfully, USBs are cheap and easy to steal. Make sure to still reformat the drive before destroying it; destroying a drive is also often a partial solution. Data can still be retrieved from disk fragments, and burning a drive requires temperatures higher than a normal fire (i.e. thermite).  
+However, traces of the previously written data may still remain. If you have sensitive documents that you really want to erase, it is best to physically destroy the USB after reformatting it. Fortunately, USBs are cheap and easy to steal. Be sure to reformat the drive before destroying it; destroying a drive is often a partial solution. Data can still be recovered from disk fragments, and burning a drive requires temperatures higher than a normal fire (i.e. thermite).  
 
-* For flash memory drives (USBs, SSD, SD cards, etc.), use two pliers to break the circuit board out of the housing, then break the memory chips, including the circuit board, into pieces (beware of splintering). Hold the pieces in the flame of a camping gas torch. You will only achieve a partial decomposition of the transistor material. Use sufficient respiratory protection or stay back! The fumes are unhealthy. 
-	* If burning the pieces is too involved, discretely dropping them down a storm drain while you tie your shoe would make it unlikely that they would be recovered.  
+* For flash memory drives (USBs, SSDs, SD cards, etc.), use two pairs of pliers to break the circuit board out of the case, then break the memory chips, including the circuit board, into pieces (be careful not to touch the sharp splinters). Hold the pieces in the flame of a camping torch. You will achieve only partial decomposition of the transistor material at this heat. Use adequate respiratory protection or stand back! The fumes are unhealthy. 
+	* If burning the pieces is too involved, discreetly dropping them into a storm drain while tying your shoe would make them unlikely to be recovered.  
 
 ## How to create an encrypted USB 
 
-Exclusively store data on encrypted drives. This is necessary if you want to use a separate LUKS USB instead of Persistent Storage on the Tails USB. [LUKS](/glossary/#luks) is the Linux encryption standard. To encrypt a new USB, go to **Applications → Utilities → Disks**. 
+Store data only on encrypted drives. This is necessary if you want to use a separate LUKS USB instead of Persistent Storage on the Tails USB. [LUKS](/glossary/#luks) is the Linux encryption standard. To encrypt a new USB, go to **Applications → Utilities → Disks**. 
 
-* When you insert the USB, a new "device" should appear in the list. Select it, and verify that the description (brand, name, size) matches your device. Be careful not to make a mistake!
+* When you insert the USB, a new "device" should appear in the list. Select it and make sure that the description (brand, name, size) matches your device. Be careful not to make a mistake!
 * Format it by clicking **≣  → Format the disk**. 
-	* Select **Overwrite existing data with zeroes** in the Erase drop-down list. Keep in mind that this is insufficient to remove all traces of sensitive documents stored on the USB.  
-	* Choose **Compatible with all systems and devices (MBR/DOS)** in the Partitioning drop-down list.
+	* In the Erase drop-down list, select **Overwrite existing data with zeroes**. Note that this is not enough to remove all traces of sensitive documents stored on the USB.  
+	* In the Partitioning drop-down list, select **Compatible with all systems and devices (MBR/DOS)** .
 	* Then click **Format…**
 
 ![](empty_device.png)
 
-* Now you must add the encrypted partition. 
-	* Click on the "**+**" 
-	* Choose the size of your partition (all free space) 
-	* For "type" select **internal disk to be used with Linux systems only (Ext4)**; check **Password protected volume (LUKS)**
+* Now you need to add the encrypted partition. 
+	* Click on the "**+**" button 
+	* Select the size of your partition (all free space) 
+	* For "Type" select **internal disk to be used with Linux systems only (Ext4)**; check **Password protected volume (LUKS)**
 	* Enter a [strong passphrase](/posts/tails-best/#passwords)
 
-When you insert an encrypted USB, it will not be opened automatically but only when you select it in the Places menu. You will be prompted to enter the passphrase. Before you can remove the disk when the work is done, you have to right-click on it under **Places → Computer** and then select Eject.  
+If you insert an encrypted USB, it will not open automatically, but only when you select it in the Places menu. You will be prompted to enter the passphrase. Before you can remove the drive when you are finished working with it, you must right-click it in **Places → Computer** and select Eject.  
 
-## Encrypt a file with a password or with a public key
+## Encrypting a file with a password or public key
 
-In Tails, you can use the Kleopatra application to [encrypt a file](https://tails.boum.org/doc/encryption_and_privacy/kleopatra/index.en.html#index1h1) with a password or a public PGP key. This will create a .pgp file. If you are going to encrypt a file, do so in RAM before you store it on a LUKS USB. Once the unencrypted version of a file is saved on a USB, the USB must be reformatted to remove it. 
+In Tails, you can use the Kleopatra application to [encrypt a file](https://tails.boum.org/doc/encryption_and_privacy/kleopatra/index.en.html#index1h1) with a password or public PGP key. This creates a .pgp file. If you want to encrypt a file, do so in RAM before saving it to a LUKS USB. Once the unencrypted version of a file is saved on a USB, the USB must be reformatted to remove it. 
 
-If you choose the passphrase option, you will have to open the file in Tails and type the passphrase. If you don't want the unencrypted data to be stored in the location where you saved it (e.g. on a USB), it's best to first copy the encrypted file to a Tails folder that is only in RAM (e.g. **Places → Documents**) before decrypting it.
+If you choose the password option, you must open the file in Tails and enter the password. If you don't want the unencrypted data to be stored in the same place where you saved it (e.g. on a USB), it's best to copy the encrypted file to a Tails folder that's only in RAM (e.g. **Places → Documents**) before decrypting it.
 
 ## Adding administration rights
 
-In Tails, an administration password (also called a "root" password) is required to perform system administration tasks. For example:
+Tails requires an administration password (also called a "root" password) to perform system administration tasks. For example:
 
-- Install additional software 
+- Installing additional software 
 - Accessing the computer's internal hard drives 
 - Running [commands](/glossary/#command-line-interface-cli) in the root terminal
-- Accessing certain permissions, such as when you have a window that asks for administration authentication  
+- Accessing certain privileges, such as when you see a window that asks for administration authentication  
 
-By default, the administration password is disabled for more security. This can prevent an attacker with [physical](/glossary/#physical-attacks) or [remote](/glossary/#remote-attacks) access to your Tails system from gaining administration privileges. Also, if you set an administration password for your session, you create another vector to potentially bypass Tails security. 
+By default, the administration password is disabled for added security. This can prevent an attacker with [physical](/glossary/#physical-attacks) or [remote](/glossary/#remote-attacks) access to your Tails system from gaining administration privileges. Also, if you set an administration password for your session, you are creating another vector to potentially bypass Tails security. 
 
-To set an administration password, you must choose an administration password at the Welcome Screen when starting Tails. This password only lasts for the duration of the session. 
+To set an administration password, you must select an administration password on the Welcome Screen when you start Tails. This password is only valid for the duration of the session. 
 
 ## Installing additional software
 
-If you install new software, it's up to you to make sure it is secure. Tails forces all software to connect to the internet through Tor, so you may need to use a program called `torsocks` from Terminal to start additional software that requires an Internet connection (for example, `torsocks --isolate mumble`). The software used in Tails is audited for security, but this may not be the case for what you install. Before installing new software, it's best to make sure there isn't already software in Tails that does the job you want to do. If you want additional software to persist beyond a single session, you have to enable "Additional Software" in Persistent Storage [configuration](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/configure/index.en.html). 
+If you install new software, it's up to you to make sure it's secure. Tails forces all software to connect to the internet through Tor, so you may need to use a program called `torsocks` from the Terminal to start additional software that requires an Internet connection (e.g. `torsocks --isolate mumble`). The software used in Tails is audited for security, but this may not be the case for what you install. Before installing new software, it's best to make sure that Tails doesn't already have software that does the job you want it to do. If you want additional software to persist beyond a single session, you need to enable "Additional Software" in the Persistent Storage [configuration](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/configure/index.en.html). 
 
 To install software from the Debian software repository:
 
 * Start Tails with administration rights, then go to **Applications → System Tools → Synaptic Package Manager**. 
-* When prompted, enter your administration password (if it's the first time you do this, it will take time to download the repositories). 
-* Go to "All" and choose the software you want to install: "select for installation", then "apply". 
-* Once done, if your Persistent Storage is open, Tails will ask you if you want to install it only once, or add it to your Persistent Storage. If you add it to the Persistent Storage, the corresponding software files are saved there. They are automatically updated for security reasons as soon as a network connection is established. 
-* You will be able to access the additional software you have installed, with the option to remove them, in **Applications → System Tools → Additional Software**.
+* When prompted, enter your administration password (if you're doing this for the first time, it will take a while to download the repositories). 
+* Go to "All" and select the software you want to install: "Select for installation", then "Apply". 
+* Once done, if your Persistent Storage is open, Tails will ask if you want to install it once or add it to your Persistent Storage. If you add it to your Persistent Storage, the relevant software files will be saved there. For security reasons, they are automatically updated whenever a network connection is established. 
+* You can access and remove the additional software you have installed by going to **Applications → System Tools → Additional Software**.
 
-For more information, see the documentation on [Installing additional software](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/additional_software/index.en.html).  
+For more information, see the documentation on [installing additional software](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/additional_software/index.en.html).  
 
 ## Remember to make backups!
 
-A Tails USB is easily lost and USBs have a much shorter life span than hard drives (especially the cheap ones). If you put important data on it, think about making regular backups. If you use a second LUKS-encrypted USB, this is as simple as using the File Manager to copy files to a backup LUKS-encrypted USB. 
+A Tails USB is easily lost, and USBs have a much shorter lifespan than hard drives (especially the cheap ones). If you have important data on it, remember to back it up regularly. If you use a second LUKS-encrypted USB, this is as simple as using the File Manager to copy files to a backup LUKS-encrypted USB. 
 
-If you use Persistent Storage, see the [documentation on backing it up](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/backup/index.en.html). 
+If you use Persistent Storage, see the [documentation for backing it up](https://tails.boum.org/doc/persistent_storage/backup/index.en.html). 
 
 ## Privacy screen 
 
-A [privacy screen](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Monitor_filter) can be added on top of your laptop screen to prevent people (or hidden cameras) from seeing the content unless they are directly facing it.
+A [privacy screen](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Monitor_filter) can be added to your laptop screen to prevent people (or hidden cameras) from seeing the content unless they are looking directly at it.
 
 # III) Troubleshooting Issues 
 
-***The computer tries to boot on the USB but it doesn't work***
+***The computer tries to boot the USB but it doesn't work***
 
-Check the error messages displayed (for example, if you have an old computer with 32-bit architecture, it won't work on Tails). If it says `Error starting GDM with your graphics card`, the issue is with the graphics card; check the documentation for [Known issues with graphics cards](https://tails.boum.org/support/known_issues/graphics/index.en.html). You can also check the list of [known issues](https://tails.boum.org/support/known_issues/index.en.html) on the Tails site for your computer model.
+Check the error messages you get (for example, if you have an old 32-bit computer, it won't work with Tails). If it says `Error starting GDM with your graphics card`, the issue is with the graphics card; check the documentation for [Known issues with graphics cards](https://tails.boum.org/support/known_issues/graphics/index.en.html). You can also check the list of [known issues](https://tails.boum.org/support/known_issues/index.en.html) on the Tails site for your computer model.
 
-If the Tails Boot Loader page displays, try booting to "Tails troubleshooting mode". 
+If the Tails Boot Loader page appears, try booting into Tails troubleshooting mode. 
 
-***My Tails USB doesn't want to start anymore! (and it was starting before on the same computer)***
+***My Tails USB won't start anymore! (and it did start before on the same computer)***
 
-Following an upgrade, or otherwise, Tails does not start anymore on your computer. You have three options:
+After an upgrade or otherwise, Tails no longer starts on your computer. You have three options:
 
-1) See if the [Tails news page](https://tails.boum.org/news/index.en.html) mentions any problems about the upgrade. 
-2) Do a manual upgrade, which may be necessary if the computer was turned off before the end of the upgrade.
-3) If the first two solutions don't work, the USB is too old, it is of bad quality or it has been mistreated. If you have data on Persistent Storage to recover, plug this USB into a Tails session that is using another USB. It will appear as a normal USB that you have to unlock with your password. If you can't access your data on another Tails USB where you had Persistent Storage enabled, your USB may be dead. 
+1) See if the [Tails news page](https://tails.boum.org/news/index.en.html) mentions any problems with the upgrade. 
+2) Perform a manual upgrade, which may be necessary if the computer was turned off before the upgrade was complete.
+3) If the first two solutions don't work, the USB is too old, of poor quality, or has been broken. If you need to recover data from Persistent Storage, plug that USB into a Tails session using another USB. It will appear as a normal USB that you will need to unlock with your password. If you can't access your data on another Tails USB that has Persistent Storage enabled, your USB may be dead. 
 
 ***I can't connect to a public Wi-Fi network with an authentication page (a captive portal)***
 
-If you must connect to Wi-Fi using a captive portal, you must enable Unsafe Browser. Connect to the Wi-Fi, then open **Applications → Internet → Unsafe Browser**. You type a URL of a site that isn't sketchy to access the authentication page. Once you've put in the login, you wait for Tor to be ready to go to your Tor Browser, then close the unsafe browser.  
+If you need to connect to Wi-Fi using a captive portal, you must enable Unsafe Browser. Connect to Wi-Fi, and then open **Applications → Internet → Unsafe Browser**. You enter the URL of a site that isn't sketchy to access the authentication page. Once you've completed the captive portal page, wait until Tor is ready, and then close the unsafe browser.  
 
-***I have no more free space on a USB?***
+***What if I run out of space on a USB?***
 
-If you have no more space on a USB or if there is less data indicated than actually present on your USB, in the Files browser you enable "Show hidden files". There you will have new files named .something. The file .Trash-10xx is taking up space (and if select "Move to Trash", it will be completely removed). Don't change other hidden files.  
+If you run out of space on a USB drive, or if you see less data than you actually have on your USB, check "Show hidden files" in the file browser. There you will see new files named .something. The file .Trash-10xx is taking up space (and if you select "Move to Trash" it will be removed completely). Don't change any other hidden files.  
 
-***A file always opens in read-only or does not open?***
+***A file always opens in read-only mode or does not open at all?***
 
-In some programs, this is normal if the same file is already open. If this isn't the case, use the same trick as the paragraph above. You enable Show hidden files. There will be a .lock file with the same name as the file you have an issue with. Delete this file which indicates that it is already open elsewhere. If that's not the issue, you have to change the permission rights of the document.
+In some programs, this is normal if the same file is already open. If this isn't the case, use the same trick as in the paragraph above. You enable Show hidden files. There will be a .lock file with the same name as the file you have a problem with. Delete this file, which indicates that it is already open elsewhere. If that's not the issue, you need to change the permission rights of the file.
 
 ***I can't install Tails on a USB***
 
-Check that your USB is not [known to have issues](https://tails.boum.org/support/known_issues/index.en.html#problematic-usb-sticks) on Tails. [Format](#how-to-create-an-encrypted-usb) the entire USB and try to restart the installation. 
+Make sure your USB is not [known to have issues](https://tails.boum.org/support/known_issues/index.en.html#problematic-usb-sticks) with Tails. [Format](#how-to-create-an-encrypted-usb) the entire USB and try the installation again. 
 
-***An application makes Tails slow down? The screen is glitching?***
+***Is an application slowing down Tails? The screen is glitching?***
 
-Try pressing the Windows key, or the Cmd key for Mac, which will open the window with all your running applications. You can turn off applications by pressing the little cross. If pressing this key doesn't work, you must forcefully shut down by holding the power button.
+Try pressing the Windows key, or the Cmd key for Mac, which will open the window with all your running applications. You can turn off applications by pressing the little cross. If that doesn't work, you'll need to force a shutdown by holding down the power button.
 
 ***Add a printer***
 
-You go to: **Applications → System Tools → Settings → Devices → Printers → "+" → Add a printer**. Some printer models may not work (or be difficult to set up) with Tails.
+You go to **Applications → System Tools → Settings → Devices → Printers → "+" → Add a printer**. Some printer models may not work with Tails (or may be difficult to set up).
 
 ***Unable to install new software***
 
-Sometimes the Synaptic Package Manager refuses to install software. In that case, go through a root terminal (which requires an administration password): install using the command `apt update && apt install [package_name]`
+Sometimes the Synaptic Package Manager will refuse to install software. In this case, use a root terminal (which requires an administration password): install with the command `apt update && apt install [package_name]`
 
 # Best Practices 
 
-[Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best) are important to establish before using Tails for highly sensitive activities. To avoid overwhelming yourself, get acquainted with using Tails in a basic way first; perhaps to read anarchist websites, or to write texts. See the [Tails tag](/tags/tails/) for tutorials on subjects like [removing identifying metadata from files](/posts/metadata/).
+[Tails Best Practices](/posts/tails-best) are important to establish before using Tails for highly sensitive activities. To avoid overwhelming yourself, start by learning how to use Tails in basic ways, such as reading anarchist websites or writing texts. See the [Tails tag](/tags/tails/) for tutorials on topics like [removing identifying metadata from files](/posts/metadata/).
 
-*This article is heavily modified from* [TuTORiel Tails](https://infokiosques.net/spip.php?article1726) *(in French), and also includes some excerpts from* [Capulcu #1](https://capulcu.blackblogs.org/neue-texte/bandi/) *(German).*
+*This article is heavily modified from* [TuTORiel Tails](https://infokiosques.net/spip.php?article1726) *(in French), and also includes some excerpts from* [Capulcu #1](https://capulcu.blackblogs.org/neue-texte/bandi/) *(in German).*