- Adding a to-do list at top of doc, to show what is planned and known to be missing before it can be released to the official Qubes doc PR.
- Splitting the tips section in tips related to Kickstart, and tips related to general boot issues.
- Adding new tips to both kickstart and boot issue tips.
- Removing text about Kickstart files in culture, this is outside the purpose and scope, and helps reducing the amount to read.
- Minor fixes such as typo's found 'here and there'.
Considerations, whether to construct a separate doc for the boot issue sections, since people needing the kickstart doc may not have these extra issues, and it isn't strictly speaking related to kickstart issues (although they do often come together). An idea being considered might be to make a separate doc for booting issues, and then link to it from here instead.
Various different improvements in the doc, however it'll need a few more updates before it's ready. I'll try squeeze in more before next summit if time allows it.
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