From fee36f13be0f08882e0a79a05252195215cb4316 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: taivlam <47955724+taivlam@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sun, 30 Oct 2022 23:18:41 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Make minor edits in signal.md * Use teletype for possible arguments of command * Remove extra spaces * Use more concise wording * Other grammar fixes --- docs/privacy/signal.md | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/privacy/signal.md b/docs/privacy/signal.md index 9f13747..6313d30 100644 --- a/docs/privacy/signal.md +++ b/docs/privacy/signal.md @@ -27,17 +27,17 @@ Always obtain a trusted key fingerprint via other channels, and always check any The following adapts the official [Linux (Debian-based) Install Instructions][signal-debian-instructions] from Signal's website for Qubes. -1. (Optional) Create a TemplateVM ('debian-11' is used as an example, but could have been 'debian-11-minimal', 'debian-10', etc.): +1. (Optional) Create a TemplateVM (`debian-11` is used as an example, but can be `debian-11-minimal`, `debian-10`, etc.): [user@dom0 ~]$ sudo qubesctl --skip-dom0 --targets=debian-11 --show-output state.sls update.qubes-vm -2. Open a terminal in Debian 11 (or your previously chosen template ; note that `gnome-terminal` isn't installed by default in a [minimal template], in which case replace `gnome-terminal` with `uxterm`): +2. Open a terminal in Debian 11 (or your previously chosen template; note that `gnome-terminal` isn't installed by default in a [minimal template], in that case replace `gnome-terminal` with `uxterm`): [user@dom0 ~]$ qvm-run -a debian-11 gnome-terminal -3. Run these commands in the terminal you've just opened: +3. Run the commands below in the terminal you've just opened. - Install the curl program needed to download the signal signing key: + Install the curl program needed to download the Signal signing key: sudo apt install curl @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ The following adapts the official [Linux (Debian-based) Install Instructions][si curl --proxy 127.0.0.1:8082 -s https://updates.signal.org/desktop/apt/keys.asc | gpg --dearmor | sudo tee -a /usr/share/keyrings/signal-desktop-keyring.gpg > /dev/null - Add the Signal repository (Signal don't offer a `buster/bullseye` repository, they use `xenial` but it doesn't change anything for debian users): + Add the Signal repository (Signal don't offer a `buster/bullseye` repository - they use `xenial`, but this doesn't affect Debian users): echo 'deb [arch=amd64 signed-by=/usr/share/keyrings/signal-desktop-keyring.gpg] https://updates.signal.org/desktop/apt xenial main' | sudo tee -a /etc/apt/sources.list.d/signal-desktop.list @@ -59,15 +59,15 @@ The following adapts the official [Linux (Debian-based) Install Instructions][si 4. A bit more work is required in case you used a minimal template for the TemplateVM above: - `signal-desktop` requires at the minimum `libatk1.0-0`, `libatk-bridge2.0-0`, `libcups2` and `libgtk-3-0` to run. Those dependencies are automatically installed when installing `xfce4-notifyd`, but if you installed `dunst` you'll have to add them: + `signal-desktop` requires at least `libatk1.0-0`, `libatk-bridge2.0-0`, `libcups2` and `libgtk-3-0` to run. Those dependencies are automatically installed when installing `xfce4-notifyd`, but if you installed `dunst` you'll have to add them: sudo apt install libatk1.0-0 libatk-bridge2.0-0 libcups2 libgtk-3-0 - If you haven't done so already, `qubes-core-agent-networking` must be installed for networking to work in qubes which are based on minimal templates: + If you haven't done so already, `qubes-core-agent-networking` must be installed for networking to work in qubes based on minimal templates: sudo apt install qubes-core-agent-networking - Then optionally install the following packages for convenience of handling files (`zenity` is needed by the Qubes OS functions in `qubes-core-agent-nautilus` to show the progress dialog when moving / copying files): + Then optionally install the following packages for convenience of handling files (`zenity` is needed by the Qubes OS functions in `qubes-core-agent-nautilus` to show the progress dialog when moving/copying files): sudo apt install nautilus qubes-core-agent-nautilus zenity