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-I got serious about tech in 2017, and began learning about Bitcoin, Blockchain, and everything related, seeing great opportunity amidst all of the confusion. In the following year after having gone down the rabbit-hole, I turned my attention to Self Sovereign Identity.
+I got serious about tech in 2017, and began learning about Bitcoin, Blockchain, and everything related, seeing great opportunity amidst all of the confusion. In the following year, having gone down the rabbit-hole, I turned my attention to Self Sovereign Identity.
 
-I realized the potential of this technology, when first learning about the Sovrin Foundation, and Hyperledger Indy. I arrived with perfect timing to contribute to this information ecosystem, and help to spread the word about decentralized identity and Verifiable Credentials.
+I realized the potential of this technology, when learning about Hyperledger Indy, and the Sovrin Foundation. I also realized that, despite its potential and history, hardly anyone knew about it in the tech scene. 
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+I knew I had arrived with perfect timing to contribute to this information ecosystem: to make its inter-relationship with everything more easily navigable, and help to spread the word about decentralized identity and Verifiable Credentials.
 
 Inspired by @peacekeeper's [blockchain-identity](https://github.com/peacekeeper/blockchain-identity/) list, I began working on my own **curated list of resources related to decentralized identity**.