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From: Infominer <infominer@protonmail.com>
Date: Mon, 6 Jan 2020 05:16:44 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] clean up intro

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 <li>The United Nations Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs) have also fueled efforts towards a global and widely accessible identity solution.</li>
 <li>The Blockchain industry exploded around <a href="https://bitcoinfo.xyz">Bitcoin</a>, proving the the concept of digital scarcity, in the form of a decentralized peer-to-peer (P2P) currency.</li>
 <ul><li>Efforts to commercialize its success and digest its technological breakthroughs, into something accessible to the global marketplace, have been seemingly limitless. </li></ul>
-<ul><li>The state of global securities regulations, and the open-source, decentralized, nature of blockchain have greatly limited the efficacy of those efforts.</li></ul>
+<ul><li>The state of global securities regulations, along with the open-source, decentralized, nature of blockchain, have mainly limited the marketability of those efforts.</li></ul>
 <li>The movement to <a href="https://sourcecrypto.pub/decentralized-web/">decentralize the web</a> and encourage proliferation of P2P technology also lends strength to efforts towards Decentralized Identity.</li>
-<li>Over the past year, the movement for Self Sovereign Identity has shown itself to be the most likely chance of succeeding in the effort to build out solutions that satisfy the urge towards innovation, a find a way to use the world-changing technology that is in congruence with its spirit and the global regualtory landscape.</li>
+<li>Over the past year, the movement for Self Sovereign Identity has shown itself to be the most likely chance of succeeding in the effort to build out solutions that satisfy the urge towards innovation, a find a way to use the world-changing technology.
+<ul><li>Collectively arrived at solutions are trending towards congruence with the spirit of innovation, privacy concerns, and compliance within the global regualtory landscape.</li></ul>
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